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| "Silent" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: youngersister On: October 26, 2004 14:37 CDT
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I'll kill you if you don't make longer chapters!(I'm not really going to kill you just update soooooooooon!!!!!!!!)
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Reviewed By: Ebony Wing. On: October 25, 2004 20:17 CDT
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Weeee!!!!!! This is good!!!!!! poor Duo though, but it's still really good! Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: younger sister On: October 22, 2004 14:14 CDT
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You really have to start writing longer chapters.
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update ASAP!! I want some one to save Poor Duo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I might of missed it, but whats the pairing? I hope it's Wufie/Duo or Wufie/Duo/Heero!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: confidential On: October 22, 2004 08:53 CDT
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(Yeah me again!) I can't believe someone flamed you! Your story is SO awesome FLAME THE FLAMER [runs after Black Beaty with torch]
| Reviewed By: confidential On: October 22, 2004 08:50 CDT
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OK: Glad you updated, sad it wasn't much. Next chapter hould be the other pilots and longer. When the others find him will he still be alive?!
| Reviewed By: camillian On: October 22, 2004 03:00 CDT
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so is anyone gonna come at all for him? even in his state the other's will view him as a liability. update again soon!
| Reviewed By: twilight198 On: October 21, 2004 20:20 CDT
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Great. Absolutely great. POOR DUOOOO!!! (Cries) Oh well. Still, great fic!!! More More MORE!!! (Runs off laughing like a maniac)
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love your story!!!!! And poor Duo *Crys eyes out* I really Love it!!!
| Reviewed By: cofidential On: October 20, 2004 09:32 CDT
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AARRGG!!! hurry hurry UPDATE. (please skip rape part)
| Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 03, 2004 12:57 CDT
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I have so many things I could say about your plotline, your creativity and your writing style but I don't want to be mean. After all, it's easier to be mean than to be nice! Anyways I'm glad you got a beta reader, because the third chapter had no spelling mistakes that I could notice. I guess chapter 3, would have been pefect if only you would have put a warning that NCS was coming. I only hope that in the future you put an ncs warning at the beginning of each fic or a particular chapter. That way people like me can still enjoy reading angsty fics without having to read about things that bring up unpleasant feelings. Don't get discouraged, keep trying your best and eventually most of the reviews you will get will be great ones. Just keep on remembering: that a writer (just like an artist paints to express oneself) writes for herself/himself and not for the sake of others! Just write what pleases you and someone out there is bound to like it! :D
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow!! What a cool story!! I just love Duo!! If he dies so do you, know one kills MY Duo!! Just joken : D! Neat story please keep up the good work!
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