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Reviewed By: no comment On: February 15, 2005 03:26 CST
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What I wanna know is: what the fu** was that? It was so poorly written, and the dialogue so bland, that I honestly don't know why you decided to curse us with this, this, words can't describe it. A miko with youkai abilities? C'mon, I've seen better ideas and more originality from fifth graders. Either stop writing this abomination -- hell, stop writing all together --, or get yourself a beta reader. But even then, I doubt anyone can save your work. One more thing. That 'Kagome is a badass mercenary/assasin' thing has been done, and quite well compared to this. Kagome actually has a believable personality in that one. But your Kagome just falls flat. Ugh.
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Reviewed By: Celestial Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You give detailed description a new meaning, i'll tell you that! Great job! Please update soon! oh! I vote for both Kagome/Hatori or Kurama/Kagome/Sesshomaru
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 16:54 CST
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i vote for yusuke/kagome....i don't see many of those around.....great story, update soon!
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Reviewed By: yuni On: January 20, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Hurry up and update it. It is so awesome i cant wait to read the rest of the story. It is just so cool. I vote for Hatori/Kagome. PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Arasi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done Shadow. I love the elements in the story and of course the story itself.
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 20:38 CST
Comment/Review:
hey hey you need to update soon cause it was getting good and i want to know whats going to happen next so as soon as you can update. Ja Ne Airy
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Title: Hey good chapter.
Reviewed By: It's Meiko kazuke On: November 19, 2004 18:07 CST
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Alright you made up for your last chapter and I thought it was fantastic. I hope you update agian soon I vote for hatori/Kagome and Hiei/Kagome *smilies* thank you so much for the update. See you agian on the next update.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Yasha(not logged on) On: November 18, 2004 15:37 CST
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PLZ update soon
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Reviewed By: bon bon2 On: November 14, 2004 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i vote for Ayame/Kagome, i love this story please update soon toodles
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Reviewed By: prudence On: November 14, 2004 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon.i really like this fanfic and i think it should be a kagome/hatori
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Title: I forgot something.
Reviewed By: It's Meiko agian On: November 14, 2004 10:53 CST
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I for got to vote for Hiei/Kagome and Hatori/Kagome. Thanks.
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Title: hey another review
Reviewed By: It;s Meiko kazuke agian On: November 14, 2004 10:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Well it was kind of short and I wanted it to be longer but I am thankful you updated, So please update soon.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I vote for kagome to be with hatori and for tohru to be with kurama. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 03:28 CST
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coolsa.
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