| "Seasons of Sorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: jenny131 On: December 08, 2011 13:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story, anyone who gives you a 4/10 for spelling/grammar is just being silly (or jealous) ;). |
Reviewed By: ina90 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2010 20:11 EDT
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i love this story it's so funny and well written. I like the way u portrayed the main characters. i love kyo and yuki's little fights. i like the story because it's told from multiple points of view it's what makes it interesting also i learned some new words in japanese such as those for the animals. the whole idea itself is original. continue to write ur work is a pleasure to read.
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Reviewed By: Sam125 On: July 14, 2009 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt that you deserved a review for your work. I really enjoy this fanfic. I have been reading it these past two years in college and I love the way to write, the feeling in the characters, the drama. Few people can do that with these characters better than you. I will confess that I still do not understand Akito's reasoning, but then again I really don't think I that. Because I can't follow why Akito is doing things, it is becoming hard to figure out Yuki. Is Akito just doing all of this because she knew that Yuki wanted to learn all at the dojo all those years ago? Is that really all, or is there something else I am not getting? I need more info into the bond to understand what is going in politically in the chapter. It is sad that Akito got so hurt though, although I don't blame Kyo because he was just talking, and he remained civil. The family wont think that way though, CRAP. I look forward to the next chapter. What is going to happen, what was that talk at the end with Yuki and Akito?
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Reviewed By: ---no name --- On: February 17, 2009 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated and what drama! Poor Kyon
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Reviewed By: Great Update On: January 27, 2009 18:08 EST
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Nice chapter sorry it took me so long to review but that dosen't mean you have to take as long (^_^)I look forword to your next update.
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Reviewed By: not logged in currently On: January 04, 2009 09:43 EST
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Glade to read that you'll be updating soon I look forword to reading your upcoming chapters.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 01:14 EDT
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What a hyper group of cousins. I wonder what's up with Akito this time? Guess I'll see in the next chapter. Onwards! *turns page*
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 18:59 EDT
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There's some kind of turmoil going on inside Yuki all right. He really is bad luck in the kitchen. Hope nothing happens on his 'walk'.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 18:46 EDT
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Kyo is getting clingy lol. 'Whipped' is a good word to throw at the neko now and then for good reaction. I can't believe how caught up he was in Tohru to not notice his rivals arrival outside.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 18:36 EDT
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Good second chap as well. Yuki is really stressing out. Tohru and Kyo are getting closer like Shishou wanted but at what cost?
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 18:06 EDT
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Good first chapter. I'm already hooked to see what's going on with Yuki. That's cool that Kyo is teaching Tohru to fight/defend. On to the next chapter. *adds to faves*
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Reviewed By: anonymous... On: January 19, 2008 16:01 EST
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Oh the Drama!I love it! I can't wait to see what happends next. PS Your story is like one of my favorits, it's so awsome, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ---no name --- On: August 28, 2007 14:27 EDT
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Wow you really like forshadowing don't you, and as soon as one question is answered their are more but it's still a GREAT story and I can't wait to read your next update! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: kayleigh On: April 20, 2007 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic. i've read some of the manga and seen all of the anime... it's my absolute fave!!! i love how you write and the story is very unique. i hope that you will continue writing! kayleigh
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Reviewed By: Serinity's Angel On: September 12, 2006 22:56 EDT
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what took you soooo, long! I loved the chapter! please update sooner next time! SERINITY'S ANGEL ^_~
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