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 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: October 16, 2004 14:55 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Seto's so mean, poor mokie. ^_^ Anzu is so freakin dense, how stupid can she get? lol. *bashes her on the head* Ugh. Glad Daniel's here with Miranda, she needs him. Heh heh heh, Umi's stuck between two girls, poor guy. Sounds like Aria starting to rebel. Till next time. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2004 12:48 CDT
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Oh my god!! Seto is so mean!! >.< Poor Mokuba..he needs some hugs. I'm glad Miranda's husband came back cuz now he'll help with the search! Damn Anzu!! I really want to kill her, but she can't die. Damn. Hehe she's so stupid!! I hope Charlie never gets to put that stuff up on that site of his..thats plain evil and I won't stand for it! Hehe well get your internet up soon!! o.o
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2004 10:25 CDT
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Oh, My Ra. Seto, you are a moron. Jerk. Ahh, poor chibis!! I really want to shoot Anzu now. Lord. She is a piece of work!! And Daniels back!! Yeah!! The scene with Gabby, Aria and Umi was priceless! Great chappie!!
 Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2004 22:06 CDT
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*jaw drops* I knew Anzu was tupid..no thats an understatement, but come on! *hits Anzu over the head with a news papaer* I autta kill her! Not like it would work! And man that guy must desperate to want to be with that thing! Ewww.. *cringes* But anyway yay once again, Robbie and Aten goodness. And poor Umi! It's so cute! And now Aria is starting to hey this evil process! Will she go up against Bakura any time soon? To be like whats up with that? And it's such a shame that Seto had to blow up at Mokuba like that! *sad face* I can't wait until the baby comes. I can only hope you will have them make peace! You better *shakes finger* hehe! anyways, hope you had fun if you know what I mean, and when Bakura and Marik get their hands on the guys, make sure they dont send them to the shadow realm....! lol yay! *scampers off*
 Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff  On: October 15, 2004 20:57 CDT
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anzu?? my god, the one time I'M glad to see her make an appearance and she doesn't reconize the boys!! i'm glad miranda has daniel back but i feel kinda bad for umi. sometimes puberty sucks but gabby is a sweetheart ^^ i, jsut wanna squish them. jsut do me one favor? make sure vincent, charlie, and dominic pay for this in the most painful way possible? also, well okay i'm kinda disappointed in mokuba and jeanie for not taking more careful steps but what's done is done. and seto, well i understand him being hte bg bro and all but at least mokie is accepting the baby. i don't beleive in abortions myself. up what else can i say? i do feel sorry for pinchy. maybe he should sting himself so he can be free of miss friendly psycho. update when u can!! *flashes victory sign*
 Reviewed By: Broken Time(not logged in)  On: October 15, 2004 18:43 CDT
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*shakes pillows threateningly* Anzu? Damn it all to *looks at Aten and Robbie plushies*... Anzu sucks
 Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2004 17:25 CDT
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Oh, so many good things in this chappie... except for the Anzu part! Ugh, how much more brain dead can she get! Poor Umi, stuck between two girls, wanting him to play dollies... Gabby seems a little dense too! Aten and Robbie are being sweet again (need... to... hug... chibi's... squeeze...) Please, rescue those boys soon, Aten needs his meds! Hayden needs help, he's going to lose his mind! Robbie's innocence needs to be spared! Update soon please!!!!
 Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2004 17:09 CDT
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Please say Aten will not get hurt again like he did with his grandfather. That poor boy has been through enough. Aria is getting to be a little hellion. Looks like puberty is starting to take a firm hold on her. Soon she`ll be disobeying her parents and getting lovey with Umi. Oh the days when we thought we knew it all. Crap I did it again, now I feel old. Oh well, can`t wait for the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2004 16:48 CDT
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(forgot to say, you dont have to respeond to this extra, but at the end of Robbie and Aten's lime, it said he'd love jim until his dying day, reminded me of this song, Anthem of our Dying Day by Story of the year, download! Its good times!)
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2004 08:35 CDT
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Oh, My!! What a chappie! *does happy dance* IKNEWIT!! I *was* right!! Not that it makes it better... *laughs at Aria and Umi, thinking what daddy would do to him* Oh, Lord. The stuff with Robbie and Aten left me speechless. And Otogi and Miranda, wow. Whenever you can girl. Some people are mean. I can't use the computer when I am at my inlaws because they think I'll purposely give them a virus!!! They are the ones with no firewall or virus checker... morons!!! Take care!!
 Reviewed By: Valea  On: October 14, 2004 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aww! So cool! *squeals* They finally got together! And it was a happiness score for Aten and Robbie! Now that we all together, will it be a lil bit easier for them, to be together? Just a lil bit? But anywho, was so looking forward to that, and it was so cute, but im gald that Aten was able to convince himself he was with Robbie, it seems like that would be hard and a big fatty issue.....who knew Vinnie would have been with both of them eh? sad times... u.u
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: October 13, 2004 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*gasps* Vinnie was Otogi's boyfriend too?!?! Two bastards in one, how fun. Hope they find out where the chibis are soon. Knowing your writing style, it'll probably be awhile, otherwise, there won't be much of a story. Aten and Robbie cuteness! Yay! lol. Lemony limeness is good and yummy. LOL. ^_^; *more gasps* Yami is Dom?!?!?! Seriously?!?! So evil. But how does he hide his hair, his hair is like a porcupine? *ponders humorously* Hope you can write more soon. Till next time. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Broken Time (Not logged in)  On: October 13, 2004 21:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh no, not Otogi~ He's just so damn cute... like a taller Yuugi.. only... more.. not colourful.. I am not making any sence today *Dies* Headaches are bad. They gots shot!? No! But, I will hold back the pillows, because of the wonderful little Aten Robbie blessing you left us~ I was right? Woohoo! I am so good
 Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2004 21:10 CDT
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O.O what did Aria do!??!! Oh my god!!! Haha well..I loved the Aten and Robbie thing ^^. I feel so bad for Miranda and Otogi! Who knew that was his old boyfriend too? How weird...I thought Vincent wasn't gay o.o. Ah well, it was still cool! I can't wait until I can read more!
 Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff  On: October 13, 2004 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh my god!!!! vincent was the bastasd to miranda AND otogi?! what are hte chances? oh no... peklase don't tell me he's gonna hur the kids!! atena dn robbie, well they are jsut too cute ^^ also, aria... um... well... i hoenstly don't know what to say ^^ update when u can don't worry. also, i geuss aff has a limit in reviews so here it is anyway. ooh the suspense is already killing me!!
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