| "Return To Hades" Reviews/Comments [ 345 ] |
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 09:52 CDT
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Oh, I can`t believe you left it at that. Ra you are so cruel. I can`t stop myself from crying for the little chibi`s. Please slap Serenity for me. She is getting way out of line. Those children are missing for Ra`s sack, can`t she have any compassion for them or their parents. I so want Asher to set those three on fire. A permanent fire that never goes out.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 15:58 CDT
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Ra, I think this is going to give me a heart attack. Seto needs to stop with his self pity as well as Joey or they will never make it through this. Asher sure takes his job serious. Growling at poor Otogi. Gotta feel bad for him. That had to be scary. Loved the lemon with Marik and Malik. You should do one with Ryou and Bakura. I`m sure they could use comfort from one another.
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Reviewed By: YoukoMia On: October 03, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*huggles marik plushie* thankies i loved that chapter i feel sorry for poor Marik i know he's probably beating himself up on the inside for that matter i feel sorry for all the parents keep up the good work ::cries for hayden:: that poor boy thank you for making marik throw serenity against that wall that has offically made my day complete. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Jupitor Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 13:14 CDT
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wow i have not been able to find aff.net at all i type it in and i get a search page that says it's no longer in existince, and i do a search and i find it but then i get an error page. I wonder what that is all about. Oh well your story was pretty much the only story i was reading so it's all good. This was a most excellent chapter. You have always had a great way with plots and character building. I am very impressed. I am getting ready to post 2 different stories on this sight as well would it be to much trouble to maybe take a look at them and give me your opinion. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in) On: October 03, 2004 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ch. Lots of emotion. Aria had to go potty, that was funny. ^_^ Glad there's some humor to the angsty feel. And no Robbie doesn't want to know. Poor chibis. *huggles* Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 10:31 CDT
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P.S. Woohoo, I got a Media miner passport >D (I'm such a dork)
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 10:18 CDT
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Bleeeeeeh, not Ryou too! *huggles Marik plushie* You know what always makes me feel good? Anzu bashign! Bring the whole family to the 'Bash the Anzu' Farm!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 10:11 CDT
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Ah great chapter! Glad you knew what I was talking about ^^;; I don't want Robbie getting hurt or anything..he's to sweet and innocent! I feel so bad for Hayden though..what a terrible thing to be re-living. Anyways, I hope everyone finds them soon..because Aten needs his medication! *hugs the three boys* can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 09:41 CDT
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My chibi is better, thank you! Aww, man. Joey's drinking, Seto's withdrawn, Mokie ain't thinking bout nothing but gettin some. An Marik and company are doing all the work. The hard parts, anyway. *Snuggles Hayden Plushie* Poor chibi!! No, Robbie really doesn't want to know. Keep this coming, girl!!
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 09:23 CDT
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Teehee! The KC in Kaiba Corp looks like the KC in the KC Royals... I LIKE this chapter! Marik is acting like himself!! *finds bad boys sek-c* "United we stand, divided we fall!" You're making Joey DRINK AGAIN!!! You ARE evil! Ha... she's praying to my kitten! (Isis, help her potty! Let her borrow your litter box.) Oh, poor Hayden! *cuts his chains and kills all the grown ups with Millenium Backscratcher*... I've decided to get over my differences with you since my favorite non-Yu-Gi-Oh author is being evil right now too, and I'd rather focus my attention on her. So, no stabbing of you for awhile! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: October 02, 2004 11:23 CDT
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Aww, poor Marik *cuddles Marik plushie and smiles* I bet he would get lonely. But Marik is the Yaoi man... just gotta love those Yaoi pairings *drools* Malik and Marik... mmmmm
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 14:33 CDT
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Ah! Must save Aten and Robbie and Hayden!! T.T so sad. I really hope what I think might happen doesn't happen...because that would be so cruel to Robbie...You have no idea what i'm talking about do you? XD. Well i'll be optimistic and hope it doesn't happen ^-^. Can't wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: October 01, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, that was so cruel! Robbie is getting picked on! But now Robbie kinda knows more of what happened.... so much stuff...and atcaully being evil about that like digging Aten's grave! He's too cute and pretty!!!! just all of this, puberty and all that good stuffa nd everyone is changing, ah its cute good times. i need a hug *holds out arms* ((and Marik and Bakura having their own 'people' totally rocks! just liek old times! yeah!!!))
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: September 30, 2004 22:53 CDT
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Aww, poor chibi Aten and Robbie, that was sweet when they were together. *huggles* Umi and Aria, so funny and sweet. ^_^ So even the Mafias and the criminals of the underworld know? Interesting, very interesting. Can't wait till the next ch. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 20:40 CDT
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Oh, the scene with Aria and Umi was too cute! And Aten and Robbie was bittersweet! Ohh!! The Mafia and the Underworld of Criminals! Perfect! Why do I feel that it is still gonna be awhile before they are found?? Gotta go. My chibi is running a fever and has the flu. Gotta go cuddle!!
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