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Reviewed By: YoukoMia On: November 22, 2004 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ish glomped* your welcome man i was one off with the babies oh well better off one i hope Aten doesn't stay silent for good his parents will worry so much. Aria sent the toaster to the shadow realm what next the whole kitchen lol that would be funny. Hayden needs to calm down a bit i know he thinks its bad for Mokuba and his girl to be together but yeesh. anyway keep up the good work love your stories lots.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 16:23 CST
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OH! Um..where to start. I loved the last scene with Robbie thinking of Aten. He really needs to tell his dad. I think his mom already knows and has been giving him hints. I have to say that Robbie and Aten make a great couple. I can`t wait for them to get together. I didn`t like the dream with Robbie hurting Aten, but I can understand where it came from, after all the abuse he has been through he would be scared. Can`t wait to see what else Aria sends to the Shadow Realm. Love this so much. I haven`t seen anything that I would consider plageurism. I know that you write what comes to you. I have seen others that have used several of your ideas, just can`t remember which ones or where. Maybe these people are reading those fics first though. Hope this doesn`t put you off on the writing you have many loyal fans who would be terribly upset.
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 16:18 CST
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TRIPLETS??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????? Damn, girl, when you go all out, you go all out!! Poor Aten! *snuggles Aten* I wish things would get better. But, I know things will get worse before they get better, and you ain't done yet!
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: November 22, 2004 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER IN A CLIFFHANGER!!!!! *Gasp for breath* (in squeaky voice) you left me hanging... and sounding like Lime on helium!! *pulls out big pointy stick* ya' better tell what's wrong with Jeanie's baby. Talking about babies, What happened with Maxine's baby? ~Ja-ne!~
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Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 01:04 CST
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I'm finally back!!! Wah! So much has happened since I've last visited. And sadly, I still have no interesting comments to give! WAAH! However, I will say this: I STILL LOVE THIS!! GO YOU!!! YEY!!! XD. Anyway, now is the time for my departure. I shall return again later on (maybe sooner next time so I don't have to read so fast @_@).
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Reviewed By: YoukoMia On: November 20, 2004 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very ebil haha serenity finally got what was coming to her i think i know what Jamein's doctor was talking about, but i won't say because i don't want to ruin it for the people that read the reveiws and story. Poor mokuba i hope hayden is gonna be ok damn serenity for getting into his head, had it not been for her and those evil idiots Hayden wouldn't be like this. I'm loving this story so much keep up the good work *gives a wingweaver plushie*
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Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff On: November 20, 2004 20:18 CST
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OMG I can't beleive I nearly missed this chapter!!! Man Hayden really is screwed up and, okay I know this is gonna sound harsh, but I don't blame Seto. I also don't blame Joey for drinking again but is locking Hayden is his room will keep him from trying to kill anyone else, especailly Jeanie's baby and himself, then so be it. And, I know you probably won't use this idea, but I wish they had hte Millennium Key so they could go into his head and fix him up. Next, I think Robbie and Aten are jsut too cute for words. Ugh I like oatmeal but now I'm not sure if I can eat it after hearing Robbie's comment. ^^ And Serenity? HA!! That goddamn little bigiot got what she rightly deserves. I hope she kills herself but doesn't ever escape them. Frankly, I think it was too good for her but hey you sure as hell don't even fuck wiht his family. Third, man you are evil!! Such an evil cliffhanger!! Now I jsut have to know what's gonna happen!! Love this story as always and Aten's adorable nickname? Aaw I jsut want to squish him all day long. Can't wait for Monday!!
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Reviewed By: Seto lover and Bakurasgirl Lover On: November 20, 2004 11:32 CST
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"Oh my god"??? OH MY GOD!?!? ¬_¬ You'll pay... oh yes you will... *grabs her Millennium toothpick* this thing can hurt your gums!!! you'll have to spend tons of money on a good dentist.. ¬_¬ BAD cliffie.. -.-" .. and Aten and roobie were SO CUTE!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: November 20, 2004 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Bad cliffie! So evil, so does she have twins or something? Really interesting ch. Go Yami Aten! Serenity deserved that so much for calling him a freak. I love the phrase where he says, "I am your worst nightmare realized," just like Marik. ^_^ Love the little lime between Aten and Robbie, so cute. ^_^ *huggles plushie* Poor Hayden, hope he gets better, he's so confused. He tried to kill Mokuba, not good. Can't wait till the next ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 20:05 CST
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Oh, Yami Aten is soooo awsome! And such a cute lime between our favorite chibi bishies... and what's with the damn cliffie with Jeanie? HUH? I'll bet she has twins, right? Right? You gotta update soon girl, I'm all excited now!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time(NLI) On: November 19, 2004 18:20 CST
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Bwah, jsut a stab at the 'OH my god' part. It's not twins is it??
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 17:15 CST
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hahaha!! I know what happened!! Jeanie's gonna have twins or triplets..or...more?? I'm just guessing hehe. I feel bad for Aten!! He's not gonna speak?? That's not good!! *huggles Aten* poor kid. Goes through so much and he's so young. I wonder if Hayden is gonna get better soon. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: I Is Me On: November 19, 2004 15:32 CST
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...twins?
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Title: Drazaria (Draza)
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 13:39 CST
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*growls* how could you....leave it there?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!! *hugs Aten* good job with Serenity chibi-Marik *gives sugar-free lollipop* what no PMSing chibi-Bakura this chappie? I'm not complaining because Aten really needed some print. Anyhoo, keep up with the chapters!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 10:37 CST
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AAHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *passes out*
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