| "A chibi adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 22:50 CST
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Well, that was rather silly. XD Great long chapter! I don't know too much about how Naraku usually acts, but I really like your version of his character. What will happen next? O.O Such an interesting plot twist! I hope Inuyasha likes children. hehe. Hmm...maybe Gome deserved it for drinking water from strangers. I see some really funny possibilites with Shippo. Have fun! See you next time. ^^ ~
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 14:55 CST
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omg naraku is absolutly stupid. he asks more like a kid than inuyasha did.
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Title: Awesome story!
Reviewed By: Dibbs34 On: November 18, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! I laughed alot. it's really a good fanfic :) I'm glad i got the time to read it finally!
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 17:44 CST
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i love this story!! inuyasha is sooooooooo cute i lurve him as a chibi! urg to "aww" rising! *twitches* anyways, i love your story and i hope you'll keep updating it!
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Archer On: November 11, 2004 21:18 CST
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it's still great, and i am only reviewin again cuz u will kill me if i don't, but my opinions still haven't changed about this fic--still absolutely adorable, still really funny, still just all around great!! keep it up!! ^_^
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Title: CUTE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inu_Hanyou On: October 31, 2004 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so cute!!!! Inuyasha is such a cute baby! please write more soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 17:19 CDT
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Whee. That was very funny. Definitely was not expecting a Team Rocket impersonation. Oo; Although, it was kind of short. Maybe they can go back to Kagome's world again sometime. What will happen next? Chibi Inuyasha's going to need quite a lot of scratch posts for those claws. Maybe he'll start having a problem because he wants to chew on everything, especially the people he is jealous of. Heh. Just an idea. See you next time! Great work. ^^
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:35 CDT
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This is going to be so funny! Imagine it... a chibi hanyou with dog ears running around the town. XD Haha, what will happen if he finally reaches Tetsusaiga? *cue sinister piano music* Well, it'll be more funny than dramatic. Great chapter, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 17:37 CDT
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Another nice chapter. ^^ You're doing a great job at making them all somewhat different. What happened to Naraku? >__> Uh oh...maybe they'll get attacked on the way to the well. Would be interesting to see how they get out of that one. You gotta have chibi Inuyasha complain and fidget and make fun of the teacher and stuff while Kagome takes the test. There are a lot of funny things you can do there. XD Have fun!
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Inu_yokai On: October 07, 2004 17:55 CDT
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very funney just make a nother soon plz
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 18:37 CDT
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Ah! Baka Naraku! >< Don't you dare hurt the adorable little Inu! Hehe, great chappie. Continue soon please!
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Reviewed By: kuramafan58 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 19:50 CDT
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Kon'nichi wa! Love the story. Inu Yasha's so cute, ne? I hope you finish. I know what it's like to have school interrupt the updates. Still, try your best, and please finish! Arigatou, and Sayanara!!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 20:33 CDT
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Yet another Awwwww! Actually, I think this was the best chapter yet for this fanfic. You did a great job combining the cuteness, humor, and um...other characters! ^^ You could have cut the chapter earlier when he was still with Rin, but I guess this is more of a fast-paced story. Really good stuff. See you next chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: Kirei (not logged in) On: September 27, 2004 20:16 CDT
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CHIBIIII!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ *waiting for you to continue*
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Title: still love it!!
Reviewed By: Mystical_Archer On: September 27, 2004 20:05 CDT
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Still lovin it!! keep writin, wanna keep readin!! ^_^
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