| "A chibi adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 01:29 CST
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um is sesshomaru being pissed a good thing or a bad thing? anywho good chappie! chow! i was gonna write more but it was soo long i forgot (the long part was good!!:))
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 23:16 CST
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That was such a good chapter! You've been improving quite a bit. I loved the humor in this one - this line especially made me laugh: "After a while, Inuyasha became very impatient. He even stuck his foot out in the open, and Kagome picked it up and looked under it instead." XD And you did a really good job of fitting in a lot in one chapter without making it seemed rushed. It was a great, smooth read. Always worth the wait. ^^;
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged on) On: November 27, 2004 23:23 CST
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yaay!! update! good job on the story!
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Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 26, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKEY FANFIC ME LIKEY FANFIC ME LIKEY-get some control of yourself, you're a big girl... Anyway, I love this story, too damn funny, update VERY SOON! VEEERRRRYYYY SSSOOOOOONNN!!!-Kitsu ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Archer On: November 26, 2004 12:24 CST
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i'ts still reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally cute!!! ^_^ i still luv it!! keep writin!!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 11:09 CST
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Sorry that I forgot about the last chappie! >< Sorry!!! Anyways, this'll be fun! Naraku has gone MAD!!!!! Poor Kagura... She has to put up with him. It's still hilarious. Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 22:50 CST
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Well, that was rather silly. XD Great long chapter! I don't know too much about how Naraku usually acts, but I really like your version of his character. What will happen next? O.O Such an interesting plot twist! I hope Inuyasha likes children. hehe. Hmm...maybe Gome deserved it for drinking water from strangers. I see some really funny possibilites with Shippo. Have fun! See you next time. ^^ ~
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 14:55 CST
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omg naraku is absolutly stupid. he asks more like a kid than inuyasha did.
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Title: Awesome story!
Reviewed By: Dibbs34 On: November 18, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! I laughed alot. it's really a good fanfic :) I'm glad i got the time to read it finally!
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 17:44 CST
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i love this story!! inuyasha is sooooooooo cute i lurve him as a chibi! urg to "aww" rising! *twitches* anyways, i love your story and i hope you'll keep updating it!
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Archer On: November 11, 2004 21:18 CST
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it's still great, and i am only reviewin again cuz u will kill me if i don't, but my opinions still haven't changed about this fic--still absolutely adorable, still really funny, still just all around great!! keep it up!! ^_^
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Title: CUTE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inu_Hanyou On: October 31, 2004 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so cute!!!! Inuyasha is such a cute baby! please write more soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 17:19 CDT
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Whee. That was very funny. Definitely was not expecting a Team Rocket impersonation. Oo; Although, it was kind of short. Maybe they can go back to Kagome's world again sometime. What will happen next? Chibi Inuyasha's going to need quite a lot of scratch posts for those claws. Maybe he'll start having a problem because he wants to chew on everything, especially the people he is jealous of. Heh. Just an idea. See you next time! Great work. ^^
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:35 CDT
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This is going to be so funny! Imagine it... a chibi hanyou with dog ears running around the town. XD Haha, what will happen if he finally reaches Tetsusaiga? *cue sinister piano music* Well, it'll be more funny than dramatic. Great chapter, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 17:37 CDT
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Another nice chapter. ^^ You're doing a great job at making them all somewhat different. What happened to Naraku? >__> Uh oh...maybe they'll get attacked on the way to the well. Would be interesting to see how they get out of that one. You gotta have chibi Inuyasha complain and fidget and make fun of the teacher and stuff while Kagome takes the test. There are a lot of funny things you can do there. XD Have fun!
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