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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 21:25 CST
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Bwa! Hiei is so kawaii! ^^ He will kill me for that, BUT OH WELL. Meep. Porky is evil... Yukina's okay! But- what's going to happen to Hina? Um... I'm nervous... for Hiei and Yukina, that is. *bites nails* No updates for a while... *sigh* Oh well. I can wait.
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Title: CHAPTER!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kit_Airiden (not logged in) On: November 07, 2004 20:41 CST
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neh!!!neh!! you rock ^__^ yaaaaaaay chapter!!! Thats right you have to update now!!! I stalk people and reveiw every chapter!! I liked this one Hiei is oddly portrayed in your fic and it gives it a nice appeal.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!another great chapter!Hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far!!hope you update soon!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kit_Airiden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleive you only have 9 reveiws!!!! I love this story. I can't wait till you write more!! Not to mention jebus nations you update quite a bit! 'HE'S GOING TO BEAT ME UP AND STEAL MY SHOES' This has to be one my favorite things to date I've said it for ages but some how it sounds ten times more funny comming from hiei. *I'm jelous!* I had my coat sleeve stuffed half way down my throught reading because my mom told me to shut up after chapter 2. I was really sad during the sad parts too......I'm not very empathetic so it MUST be your story! lol I'll be reading!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kit_Airiden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleive you only have 9 reveiws!!!! I
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 21:39 CDT
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Bwa ha- Hiei's paranoid! 'HE'S GOING TO BEAT ME UP AND STEAL MY SHOES!' Heh, poisoned lollipops- I never watched Secret Window. Well, I watched the first fifteen minutes or so- but then I went and did something else. I'm not a horror movie fan. >_< The part with the dog though... that was sad... I love animals. T_T Right then, back to the chapter- it was kind of eventful, really. I mean, Kurama broke up with Karasu (which was very nicely done, and rather sweet- what kind of shampoo does Kurama use? Herbal Essences?) and then Kurama turned Hiei down and made him hyperventilate, and then Yukina had her operation- so- yeeeep. It was a nice chapter. ^_^ Plus Hiei had his two lines- "I'm in love with a gold digger!" and "And then I'm going to TAKE YOUR JOB! BWA HA HA HA HA!" Yay! ^^ Aaaaand- how many chapters left after this? One or two? U_U Mou.
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 21:00 CDT
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What the heck happened to my review? Stupid character count. Ahem- well, Yusuke's taunting of Hiei was enjoyable. And yesh, the Kurama/Hiei scene was well written. But the kiss made me want to gape, punch something, and break down sobbing at the same time. Mou. KURAMA SAYS MOU! ^^ Wow, that was a quick mood swing. *blink* Righto- other stuff- can't really think of any. Boy, I sure can ramble on fer a loooong time, can't I? *shrugs*
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:56 CDT
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Updates! Squee! ^^ Oog- something in me says Hiei would make a better shrink than Kura-chan.... Evil Karasu! Evil Shiori! Evil waitress! Um- evil Hiei for kissing Kura-chan! XP NO! Kurama can NOT be in love with Jin! They are both too sexy! Jin can't be gay! His muscles are too awesome! Ohhh... did I just say that out loud? ^^0 Well, it's true. *cough* O.O Yomi? O_O YOUKO?!? *wraps arms around self and rocks back and forth* I heard nothing- I heard nothing- I heard nothing- >_< GAH! No, no, no! Absolutely NOT! Not Maya! EEEEEVIL WENCH SHE IS! *snarls furiously, eyes glowing* It's not true! It's not true! It's NOT true! *giving way to desperation* SAY IT AIN'T SO! *breaks down and wails like an abused puppy* WAAAAHHH! KURA-CHAN'S BEEN TAINTED FOR LIIIIIIIFE! T_T *sniff* Wow, I spent this whole review defending Kurama. Yeesh... I don't want you to feel underappreciated! You did a most wunderful job. The Kurama/Shiori scene was so sad... I felt so sorry for Kura-chan... well, I suppose I felt a tiny bit of remorse for Shiori, but she's still an evil, inadequate excuse for a mother. She hurt Kura-chan... *sniffle* Okay, I really need to get off that subject. It's not healthy at all for me. *cough* Um, more stuff to say- let's see- dangit! I was so much more descriptive than this on OW! >_
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:59 CDT
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O_O GAAAHHHH! *attacks Karasu with a blowtorch and an army of thumbtacks* DIIIIIEEEEEE! *bites Karasu's head off* There we go. I feel much better. ^^ Poor Hiei. He's heartbroken! T_T Yusuke really isn't helping matters much... U_U0 HIEI HAS NO ONE TO FIND SOLACE IN! *weeps piteously with fluids streaming from various facial openings, i.e. eyes, nose, mouth, whatever* Oh wait- he has me! *cuddles Hiei quickly and skips away before he can carve my heart out with his spoon of terror* La la la la laaaaa! ^^ Off to do- stuff. Stuff which will not be as pleasing as reading this fic. Mou. Update before I turn green and shrivel into dust like Tom Felton. (Long story. Which is actually a short story that I don't feel like revealing at the present time. Nyah.)
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Reviewed By: Mel.. On: October 05, 2004 20:14 CDT
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Wait a sec..>_>;; My review got on there twice...
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Reviewed By: Mel.. On: October 05, 2004 20:13 CDT
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:D Whoo! Cool fic. ;D I can't wait till you update! n.n;
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Reviewed By: Mel... On: October 05, 2004 20:10 CDT
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:D Whoo! Cool fic. ;D I can't wait till you update! n.n;
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 13:56 CDT
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*shiny eyes* Yay! I'm falling in love with another one of your stories! ^^ So then, to buisiness- awww. Hiei lurves his sister- but he went to juvie because of it... T_T Poor Hiei. O.o Kuwabara's rich? Wow. Butlers and fruit cocktail peoples... interesting... no matter how much I try, I can't imagine Kurama as a shrink. I just can't. Jin is close to being scary. Does he have mental problems or something? Guess I'll find out... I feel kinda sorry for Hiei, having to share a room with Yusuke and Kuwa-chan. I imagine they could be irritating after a while... 'after a while' meaning ten minutes or so...*cough* La dee da dee da, I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN! So update, pretty please! ^^
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Reviewed By: Kirei (not logged in) On: September 10, 2004 22:04 CDT
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Update please! It's an interesting idea for a sotry line and I can't wait to see where you're going with this! ^_^ And the KarasuXKurama pairing always scares me, sorry, it just does. No offense to all those KarasuXKurama fans though!
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