| "Kagome: Goddess of Japan" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in. On: October 10, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will forward to my husband. Patricia
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Reviewed By: Isabella111 On: October 10, 2004 18:16 CDT
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I read the thing on you website about government and I have a few reccomandations. First of all you like to say that Kagomes son does this or does. Who is he? Who is the father? What kind of demon/human is he?etc? Secondly it appers to me Kagome runs a tyranny. If you oppress her you will dissapear. Is that the image you are trying to paint? Third, you mentioned Kagome is above human law, is she above punishment as well. Many people have died for her yet she is not punished. It seems to me that Kagome has become arrogent and cannot accept that she is wrong. Finally, Kiyoko, Kagome feels like parents need to take a test to prove their worthyness, yet, she can raise her child however she wants for "reasons only Kagome knows." Surely no regular human being could live with a ruler with this much hippocarcy. Thank you for your time. Isabella
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Reviewed By: td On: October 10, 2004 17:51 CDT
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good chapter but I think you are taking the story a bit too slow. * chapters and we still aren't even past lunch on the first day. Anyway keep writing I love the story
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Title: Goddess
Reviewed By: Cufflink On: October 10, 2004 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've so far read all your stories to date and I have enjoyed each one for itself and as a collective whole....Although your taking your time on "shard".........You've given alot of background on this one while hinting of the story to follow..........Curious about Shippo and his role in the story and the past of how they got rid of Naraku.....And could you shed some light on the path of the Shikon Jewel and whatever happened to Kikyo?.....Keep it coming its enjoyable as all the others............Cuffs
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Reviewed By: td` On: October 03, 2004 19:39 CDT
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there hasnt been an update on either of your stories in a while. Whats up?
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Reviewed By: Da Man On: September 29, 2004 19:33 CDT
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isn't kagome being ooc and a hipocyrte by the way she is raising Kiyoko. Aslo in chapter 4 you say "I've even read your private notes. Miroku, except for Shippo, is your best spy, and he wants me to love him, so he'll do anything I ask." Is that a typo or did you mean that.
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: September 29, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Patricia. I'll forward my husband this chapter.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 23:42 CDT
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I like it. Though it is angst filled. And what about Kagome and Sess? It seems like there is more hostility then love.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Poor Kagome.. So this attack that is going to happen is it going to change a lot of things? Will Sess remain true to her? Will he betray her? What is going to happen? Keep up the good work.
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Title: This is good!
Reviewed By: Melli a.k.a. WitchyTeen14 On: September 27, 2004 15:13 CDT
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I can't write much.....in a hurry......very good.......KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!!!......got to go!
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Title: omg no!
Reviewed By: Rhi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg no! Sesshoumaru and Kagome cant go away!!! Noo..they were so perfect together ;__; You and your stories...are so....awsome..and great. Please update soon! Dont make Sesshoumaru and Kagome go apart please!!
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Reviewed By: oych (not signed on) On: September 26, 2004 22:50 CDT
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It is sad that the S/K relationship is deteriorating like it is. It would be wonderful if they could reconcile. The story is great. Are you workign on a schedule similar to the one you had on Kagome's Return?
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Reviewed By: a random guy On: September 26, 2004 21:07 CDT
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Are you going to be telling s more about the various children in the story. Cause u seem to be focusing in on the 5 main people.
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Title: last_sesshomaru@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: td On: September 26, 2004 18:51 CDT
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Interesting that Sesshomaru and Kagome's relationship is growing weak. I am interested in what happened to Shippo though.
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in) On: September 26, 2004 18:13 CDT
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Aw I loved Jaken I didn't want him to be dead. Anyway sucks that Sesshomaru and Kagome are falling apart I loved them together in Kagome! Where are you? Rins cool I liked the bit about 2+2=5 haha. And its rather interesting that you have the arc angels in there. Though I do wonder why did they kill her son? Anyway I do hope that Kagome and Sesshomaru strenghen
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