| "Kagome: Goddess of Japan" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: td On: October 10, 2004 17:51 CDT
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good chapter but I think you are taking the story a bit too slow. * chapters and we still aren't even past lunch on the first day. Anyway keep writing I love the story
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Title: Goddess
Reviewed By: Cufflink On: October 10, 2004 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've so far read all your stories to date and I have enjoyed each one for itself and as a collective whole....Although your taking your time on "shard".........You've given alot of background on this one while hinting of the story to follow..........Curious about Shippo and his role in the story and the past of how they got rid of Naraku.....And could you shed some light on the path of the Shikon Jewel and whatever happened to Kikyo?.....Keep it coming its enjoyable as all the others............Cuffs
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Reviewed By: td` On: October 03, 2004 19:39 CDT
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there hasnt been an update on either of your stories in a while. Whats up?
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Reviewed By: Da Man On: September 29, 2004 19:33 CDT
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isn't kagome being ooc and a hipocyrte by the way she is raising Kiyoko. Aslo in chapter 4 you say "I've even read your private notes. Miroku, except for Shippo, is your best spy, and he wants me to love him, so he'll do anything I ask." Is that a typo or did you mean that.
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: September 29, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Patricia. I'll forward my husband this chapter.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 23:42 CDT
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I like it. Though it is angst filled. And what about Kagome and Sess? It seems like there is more hostility then love.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Poor Kagome.. So this attack that is going to happen is it going to change a lot of things? Will Sess remain true to her? Will he betray her? What is going to happen? Keep up the good work.
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Title: This is good!
Reviewed By: Melli a.k.a. WitchyTeen14 On: September 27, 2004 15:13 CDT
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I can't write much.....in a hurry......very good.......KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!!!......got to go!
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Title: omg no!
Reviewed By: Rhi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg no! Sesshoumaru and Kagome cant go away!!! Noo..they were so perfect together ;__; You and your stories...are so....awsome..and great. Please update soon! Dont make Sesshoumaru and Kagome go apart please!!
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Reviewed By: oych (not signed on) On: September 26, 2004 22:50 CDT
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It is sad that the S/K relationship is deteriorating like it is. It would be wonderful if they could reconcile. The story is great. Are you workign on a schedule similar to the one you had on Kagome's Return?
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Reviewed By: a random guy On: September 26, 2004 21:07 CDT
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Are you going to be telling s more about the various children in the story. Cause u seem to be focusing in on the 5 main people.
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Title: last_sesshomaru@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: td On: September 26, 2004 18:51 CDT
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Interesting that Sesshomaru and Kagome's relationship is growing weak. I am interested in what happened to Shippo though.
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in) On: September 26, 2004 18:13 CDT
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Aw I loved Jaken I didn't want him to be dead. Anyway sucks that Sesshomaru and Kagome are falling apart I loved them together in Kagome! Where are you? Rins cool I liked the bit about 2+2=5 haha. And its rather interesting that you have the arc angels in there. Though I do wonder why did they kill her son? Anyway I do hope that Kagome and Sesshomaru strenghen
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Reviewed By: Patricia Golladay On: September 26, 2004 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good chapter Jeffs. I'll forward it to my husband.
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Reviewed By: sesskitten6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 23:39 CDT
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I just completely just love your stories I havent reviewed for you before but I had to catch up with you first on Kagome Where Are You? and so forth and now I am happy that I made time to read them. You really have talent and I cant wait to see what you will come out with after Kagome Goddess.... I will always be one of your fans so please just keep doing what you do and I hope that you enjoy doing these stories. Love Ya A Big Fan of Yours
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