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Title: Please Update!
Reviewed By: JaeFire On: April 03, 2005 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic - really original! The plot is fantastic, and each chapter keeps me on the edge of my seat (or deskchair) and wondering what's going to happen next. Now here's my question: Are you ever going to update this? Your readers are dyin' over here!
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Reviewed By: enjen On: October 15, 2004 14:31 CDT
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I love the fact that you don't plan on rushing this story. It's good to see what happens in between because that's when you see people change and grow to who they become. From an earlier comment in your story, it sounds like heero and duo will have a rocky start with their relationship; actually that's not true since they both don't really want it even though they haven't met each other. i'm just curious as to how you plan to have them meet up since first impressions are always lasting impressions. update again!
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Title: Every one seems to like it so far!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 03:51 CDT
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So that means I will be the one to rain on the parade...JK...I just wanted to say that you need to post quicker and the chapters are too short. But then again it could be that annoying selfish streak in me....naw! ;) Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 13, 2004 19:04 CDT
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So far, so good! No, it's better than good. It's great. I love this fic, update soon and keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 13, 2004 14:19 CDT
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cool, long chapter and definitely detailed. i can't wait to see what powers duo has as he grows. will he be trained in healing, or will g forsake all that for other types of magic and weaponry? update again soon!
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: October 01, 2004 15:33 CDT
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You are doing a great job. Keep it going. I loved the detail that you are putting in the chapters. It is creating a great plot for the story to come this I can tell.
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Reviewed By: L On: October 01, 2004 15:31 CDT
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Title: LIke what I see so far
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 11:06 CDT
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Hey I was really starting to get into this...but it stopped?? Hmmm, okay maybe I am being demanding but I really liked and I thought it had the start of a great plot. I actually thought about something similar, but never got past the third chapter...never posted though. Aw well, I am really eager to see what`s instore. Please continue! Not to mention that I really like your filling in the background and even doing the scenery!! Way cool!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 27, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was more than alright. I'm loving this fic and I think that the pace you keeping is more than perfect. After all AU stories are better when there is a strong background development. Keep up the fantastic job and update soon!
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Title: ch1 dreams+voices
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 19:08 CDT
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Whatta ya mean ya hope it was alright?! It was GREAT!! And I can't get enough and I only hope that you update soon! I love the story's progression and now we know the arranged marriage is about to be set up. I have to wonder how Solo treats Duo? what about hilde, just because everyone else is stupid and like to judge people based on hearsay and following the kings behavior doesn;t mean that his oldest son does the same?! what ever you deem i'll support and read with a pleased anxious way. More pleasee!
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Title: *stutters* Ch.1- prologue
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! *blinks* what an opener!OH man I knew the the kings reaction to lil'Duo would feed into his label as unwanted, but I wonder who was the first born? oh gosh some angst ahead and I'm sooo SOO happy you decided to continue this STORY! As a first timer I think you're doing well!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: September 26, 2004 16:50 CDT
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yaaay! you finally updated! i think showing duo and heero in their growing stages is a wonderful idea! it not only prolongs the story, but they would have a deeper connection as far as their relationship with one another. update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Akennea On: September 16, 2004 16:36 CDT
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You sooo have to keep writing this!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: September 14, 2004 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic so much already. I am glad that you put it on Media as well and FanFic. I am unable to write reviews on Fanfic. Hope that you update this site faster than the other one. I have problems with how slow the dam this is and I really only go to the site about twice a week if once at all. I find this site much faster. My computer is also my home office computer so I have it set for safety and fanfic is a very bad site. Their pop in rewiew site had to many bugs that try to download with that site. Oh ya you should get on the 1x2ML group site on Yahoo! even if it is your first fic you are a great arthour and I can already tell. Most of the hard core die fans that look for good quality work are in this group. I am not an author but will do Beta for people if they ever ask me.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 14, 2004 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! This fic sounds so cool! I have to bookmark this story. The fic sounds great! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm so excited because from the sounds of it this fic has everything that I like. Keep up the amazing job and update soon!
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