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Reviewed By: Candy? [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 14:21 CST
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Ok I'm reviewing again, and there's a chance I'll review many more times before you even update....authors always say the update faster when people review, so I'm going to review lots and lots and lots....I'll probably get pretty annoying after a while....sorry....
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: January 23, 2005 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and sry. i meant to rate this fic a TEN, not a NINE. my mistake. gomen!
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: January 23, 2005 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! Hurray!!! great chapter, too...i love it when hiei's all mad/defensive/protective-of-kurama-like towards hatanaka!!! once again, great chapter, update ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: January 22, 2005 22:13 CST
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Aww....you're so sweet to those two....now go and be that nice to Hiei in the next chapter of "Coming Clean" because you left Hiei in a real bad way before and it's driving me insane!!! So please update both this story and "Coming Clean" because not knowing what happens next is driving me mad!!!!
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Reviewed By: Candy? [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 12:48 CST
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'VE BEEN STARVING FOR UPDATES IN "COMING CLEAN" AND "BUGS" SINCE YOU POSTED THEM!!! You update pretty fast but even if you updated every single day it wouldn't be fast enough because I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!! Love them love them love them!!! So update!!! Please???
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 22, 2005 11:54 CST
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dude! kurama being comatose at the end fo the chapter is such a cliffy! you've got to update again soon! please! @_@!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 09:25 CST
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Ah! Hatanaka should die!! *evil laugh* Anyways, whoo hoo their going to tell Shuu-chan!! But that's besides the point. You must finish this awesomely lovely fan fic. Can't get enough of it, must have more now!!
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Reviewed By: Hatanakamustdie! On: January 20, 2005 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
KURAMA!!! LET GO! IT WON'T HURT IF I KILL HIM FAST! BESIDES HE WON'T EVEN SEE ME COMING. LET GO! :pushes Kurama away and chases Hatanaka: LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO YOU B@$T@RD, YOU MADE ME HURT KURAMA!:catches Hatanaka and kills him, while Hiei checks Kurama for injuries: Hatanaka:x_x I loved your story, but I just had to kill that little @$$hloe. Update Soon
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: January 19, 2005 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT BASTARD!!!! *puts Hatanaka voodoo doll on a hot skillet* poor kurama...u will update soon, yes??? so i can hate hatanaka some more?
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Reviewed By: kikira-san On: January 17, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhh...hi! I'm giving reviewing on mediaminer.org a shot since I read your stories here a lot. Well I'm just a little scared by the format but that's all. sorry anywayz! I love this story!! absolutely wonderful I can't wait until Hiei just loses it and starts throwing out the insults. Poor Kurama though! The refrigrator would've just driven me over the edge. Kurama had saintly amounts of patience. I love it and the fast updates are absolutely wonderful! I do miss the comedy a bit but I feel this angry not happy stuff was inevitable. Mou I don't know if i'm reviewing a chapter or the whole thing or what? but well I've read up until the last chappie I think you're updating so fast I can't keep up! Anyway Kurama just took the tumble down the stairs and all secrets were revealed and I can't wait to see what you're going to do! Margh! It's so i don't know heart stomping! Anywho! sorry for the longness and confusion-ness! ^-^ I think I might just review coming clean on ff.net. excellent job as usual! Now if I could just find the finish button...
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Reviewed By: Mea2 On: January 17, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was the best update yet. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so excited. Update Soon! Sincerely Mea ^_^
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue soon. This entire story i have been screaming at Kurama to kick Hatanaka out, or yell at him. I love this story
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: January 17, 2005 14:30 CST
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Yep yep, I do love to hate Hatanaka...LOL...anywayz, i go read next chappie now, yes?
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Reviewed By: dogmatix On: January 17, 2005 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I enjoy this fic very much. It is also almost 6am and I need to get to bed, so I'm not very coherant. One point - the reactions seem a little bit off to me in two places in particular - when Suichi asked Kurama about Kurama and Hiei and Kurama dropped the plate.... that should have gotten a response from Suichi, or at least we should be given clues about why it did not(nervousness, or something, maybe). also, when Kurama fainted, his step-father may not have done anything, but Shiori sure as hell would have, and Suichi would have said ~something~, I think. Again, I really like this fic, and I look forward to reading more of it :)
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Reviewed By: Hieis Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 19:08 CST
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BWahaha, I'm able to comment....its about time! Anyways, like I said before, awesome story! I love it a lot! BTW, this is ShadowHeartless from livejournal.
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