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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire(not logged in) On: April 14, 2005 17:40 CDT
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not so confused anymore... damn arranged marriages... THEY SHOULD DIE A HORRIBLE PAINFUL DEATH!!!! well, awesome chpater! i really hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: April 14, 2005 17:16 CDT
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intresting update. very odd turn of events. i was sure that the cops had been downstairs blaming her for kikyo's disappearence. i like where it's going...gramps needs a resperator though, i believe (how can a man that old talk so much???) LOL. i like Kagome's attitude as to the whole thing. kind of sadistically laughing it off and not crying or fainting (like our lovely kagome would normally do) props for that! keep it up and i shall keep reading!!!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Midnight Miko of light and dark [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and enjoyed the new chapter alot! I hope you update soon! It really is a great story I also like your other story. - Midnight
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Reviewed By: evil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I really like this story so far, but it would be nice if you would update more often because there are a lot of confusing things...^_^
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: March 12, 2005 18:53 CST
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i'm gonna take a gander that people think she's in league with those who took Kikyo...namely inuYasha. uhh...ohh.... that just can't be good. great chapter and i look forward to your update.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 15:03 CST
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WOOOOOOOOSH that, my friend, was the sound of the meaning of most of the chapter flying over my head. IM SOOOO CONFUSED!!!! anyway... awesoem chapter. really, despite the fact that i have next to no idea what's going on. and, that if you go to bed right after supper you will naturally wake up around 8. trust me. kind of unnatural to sleep for like... 18 hours strait... but STILL!!! really good chpater! i hope you update soon!!!^_^/b>
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 14:16 CST
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awesome chapter! oh! and is kikyo going to be evil? okay, i patiently await your next chapter(s) and i hope you update soon! excellent!
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 16:07 CST
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sorry, that review was for a dfifferent fic
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 16:06 CST
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awesome chapter!!! i wont bite your head of, but... I THOUGHT THIS STORY WAS ON HIATUS!!! why didnt anyone tell me it was still in commision???WHY? well, that's all i got. and to tell you the truth, i thought inashi would be working for the evil guy, befriending kagome, then waiting til she was asleep one night, and then stabbing her. that sort of thing. well, i really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 22:18 CST
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well...that really is one slimy teacher. i love how you had Kagome handle herself in front of the class and then alone with the teacher. pretty on key performace between both...somehow though i saw it coming. good creepy character. Kag's should have gone straight to the principal though...it can bite her in the ass for 'assulting' a staff member (good area to look for in future chapters, if you so chose to do so). great update and i'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: aka oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 18:43 CST
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wow this is reallllly good!!! i liek it so far!! update soon, it looks like its gonna be an excellent story!!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 17:43 CST
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go amazing punching skills!!! THAT IS SO WRONG WITH THE TEACHER!!! ick!!!::sticks tongue out in disgust:: yeah, awesome chapter, hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow...got to say, i normally don't read pg-13 but i have to say, this is awsome. you have a great story here, a great developed plot and some wonderful character depictions. absolutly awsome. keep it up. i'm looking forward to this fic.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 22:06 CST
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i think you like making kagome have a rough past! really i do. *holds fingers in crosses, and poses in good luck stance, while repeating chant* please let it be inu/kag... LOL! awesome, i really like this fic, and its off t a really good start. thumbs up to you. i await your next chapter with little patience. may your chapters be long and frequent.
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:11 CST
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Great start so far! This sounds like it's going to be a good story! Please update soon!
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