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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: October 13, 2004 23:04 CDT
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That was intriguing and sort of fluffish. ^_^ A four sided triangle, interesting. Excellent story. Keep up the good work. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Meegan On: October 13, 2004 05:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolute wonderful fic to read. It was so well written and you kept everyone perfectly in character. I have been following it and it's a relief to see a good fiction that is actually updated. It's one of those stories that you can read multiple times, which is very rare in my books. 10/10. I hope to see more work from you.
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Title: This was great
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 02:16 CDT
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This was great I absoultely loved the entire thing.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 17:46 CDT
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That's it, you're going in my fav. authors list. Very nice ending, I liked the way Ryou reacted when it all ended. ^_^ Ish fluffable! Nice. V. much looking forward to the other stuff you'll be writing.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 15:19 CDT
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An excellent ending, but to me it seemed rather... rushed... With all the wonderful details you went into with the other three, I was expecting the same for Ryou... don't get me wrong though, it was still great! I am looking forward to your next story ideas! Keep writing!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: comletely in love On: October 12, 2004 14:40 CDT
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OMG! This isn't one of the best I've read but it was stil well done and cudo's to the very steamy sex scenes. Some of the best I've read. Anyway...you did a really great job abd you more then excided the expectations given. Anyway...must go now.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 13:01 CDT
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Just read the latest chapter. You should do one where the Yami`s get bodies and can love each other. It would be a great spin off of this.
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Title: Damn...
Reviewed By: Zaphi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was...whoa! I mean...*blinks, looks down*...*laughs nervously*...oops...ah, great story, please continue! Thank you, Zaphi *gets up to take care of...things*
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Why did I not read this sooner? *hits head* Very nice lemony goodness. Very hot. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress who is not logged in On: September 29, 2004 22:23 CDT
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So hot, so good, yummy. ^_^;;; I'm much more interested in Bakura and Yami's game than Yugi and Ryou's activities, though both are entertaining. Can't wait to find out what Bakura's real motives are.
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Title: nice imagary
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice imagary.. I cant wait to find out what Bakura true intentions are.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 18:21 CDT
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I love this. I can`t get enough. Hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: Beysie (I don't remember logging out!) On: September 28, 2004 13:39 CDT
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Wow, I have to admit those last two chapters were very well done! I love details... Mmmmm, lemony goodness! Please write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: September 19, 2004 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was excellent! And you managed to keep Yami and Bakura in character really well. I love the lemonygoodness. It is such an interesting game, though I wonder what would it be like with Mariku and Malik there as well. *grins deviously* Well keep going. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 14:54 CDT
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You know the really warped part is I can picture Bakura issuing this kind of challenge! You've kept Bakura and Yami in character pretty much, I'm impressed! Keep them coming (Yes, bad pun)
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