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Reviewed By: Foamyfun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 18:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
i love it! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller On: July 19, 2005 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job. get the next chapter up soon
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Title: He he
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter, I really like how she faught back this time. I just hope Inuyasha can work through his own stuff, cause Its nice to see him being nice to Kagome. By the way you were nominated in another catigory by someone else, can't remember the name of the person, but the catigory is Best Inuyasha\Kagome Romance...so good luck.
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is freaking adorable. Just so damned precious. I can't stop grinning like a fool for hours after I finish reading. The only problem is one I'm sure you're aware of, the spelling and grammar kinks, but honestly they're really easy to ignore in the midst of such an entertaining story. Interesting role reversal, with Kagome as the wounded soul that Inuyasha has to heal. Hmm...I can see you're chapter-naming abilities faltered a bit for the last chapter :)
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. WTG.
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man..I'm having issues logging in...but putting that aside...this was a wonderful chapter!! ^_^ And I actually found out about your fic because Miss_Mariyln69 nominated it. I was looking at the nominations to see if there were any good fics to read and I found yours! So don't worry, this will definately reach the voting because I so am going to second it so it gets there! Great job on the chapter! I love how the dream kept morphing itself. Hope to see another chapter soon, but don't rush yourself...just update when you can! Okay? Bye!
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood (Not logged in) On: July 05, 2005 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this story is awsome! I swear I am just blown away by your talent and the wonderful plot you came up with! This is so dramatic and emotional, and I'm wondering why I never found it sooner, because you are wonderful! :D This story is wonderful, everything about it is wonderful! Great job! Please, update again soon when you can...I will be patiently looking forward to the next chapter until then! Take care! :D
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Title: Bee's
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I have nominated your story for this quarters Inuyasha Fan Guild Alturnitive Universe Award. I don't know how far it will go, but it should bring some attantion to this fic. Good Luck, I hope you win because this is a very good.
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Reviewed By: *inuluvher151* On: July 02, 2005 14:16 EDT
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hey this is a really great story can't wait until you update again
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Reviewed By: LavenderValentine On: July 01, 2005 10:17 EDT
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Thanks for the update - I enjoyed the read.
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Reviewed By: AmandaWasHere On: March 23, 2005 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARGGGGGG!!!!!!!! must u torment me so!?!?!? such an evil cliffie...and from some one who doesnt update all that fast!! oh well...good job...actually its a damn good job! update quickly please!!!!!!!!!!!! before i go mad!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: shanana/cantlogin On: March 02, 2005 18:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story and this chapter is an 11!!! no more, i luv this story ive been checking it every day to see if you updated and you didnt disapoint me!! im so happy!! anyway, this is an awsome chapter, but....... OMGOMGOMG OMFG can inuyasha BE any stupider to not see whats in front of him,!! well cant wait!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 23:17 EST
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This is a beautiful piece. Normally I don't like AU, but this was pretty good. You do have occasional spelling and grammar errors, but I'm a bit of a perfectionist, so I notice these things. Inu is being a bit of a prat. Baka!!! He does do dumb things sometimes, ok, a lot. But for most of the story he's been fairly intelligent when it comes to Kagome's needs. Well, he was due for a slip up. Even this one great guy I know has made some typical guy errors. You left it hanging!!! Grr, please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 18:33 EST
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What a pleasant surprise to find your update notification in my email :>D Great chapter, and I like how you're pacing the story. Too many authors try to rush the relationships and the emotion winds up forced. I also really like Kagome's developing inner strength. Thank you for drawing a believable picture of her! Lavender
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 16:16 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...should i give up on this fic or what? please just post up an author's note indicating when you will update! please! i am getting tired of waiting...>0
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