| "Leather and Lace" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: mtgranola [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 14:36 CDT
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yay!! *Jenn dances a little happy dance around her room* you updated!! thank you, thank you thank you! You have made my day!! I love how you've mixed Tasuki and Miaka together in the real world, it's made for a very interesting story that leaves me wanting more!! hope to see you update again soon. ja na!
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Reviewed By: kathryn On: March 22, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered this story today and I have read every single chapter, hanging on every single word! Its wonderful. I'm an avid fy fan, but I've never really read a fic with tasuki (my favorite character) and miaka! but I really like it. a whole weekend with dante...she's not gonna last. I've really enjoyed this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! and i want my cookies.
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Reviewed By: liquidstar On: March 17, 2005 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your other fanfic, Burned, and both are absolutely wonderful. You have a very good grasp on the characters, and your portrayal of Tasuki is just perfect. The sexual tension is killing me. x_X And I really hate Miaka. She's such a crybaby. Ugh. But that's not your fault, that's Watase-san's.
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Reviewed By: Bishiglomper (not logged in..) On: March 17, 2005 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I love this fic. It's by far, the best I've read. I love the image you gave Tasuki. "...was definitely the epitome of a well-mannered, Southern gentleman" lmao, that's got to be the most OOC description for Tasuki, if I've ever heard one. I love it. XD And is Kevin Nakago? or would it be Thronton?! and Alan crossed me as Nuriko, but that didn't make much sense either, Damn you people are good. XD Looking forward to the next update! -^_^-
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Reviewed By: Flame Haired Wench On: March 11, 2005 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the whole scene at the drive in, and the follow up in the park, I may die from the overwhelming sexual tension before this is over, but I'll die with a smile!! XD That tension and not knowing what's happening with Taka, or if Dante will get his memories back and wondering who the heck Mizu (c'mon, I can tell that's no ordinary cat!) adds a ton of enjoyment to reading this. Great job, please update again as soon as you can!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 30, 2005 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh bother. Sigh what a situation. Poor...Everyone. I do still prefer tasuki though LOL. Ok I'm dying to figure out how miaka reacts to the pictures (other than tears) and what Dante will think about it. please update as soon as you can. I really like this story. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 29, 2005 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TITSU KUN!!!! lol i nearly fell off my chair. and Kevin makes me shutter and remindes me of Nagago(sp?) BAKA TAKA!!!!!!! DROOLS over the undeniably sexist of all the seshi Tasuki (swoons) Great job off to read more 'Orion
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 07:33 CST
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can't review i just can't because of the EVIL COP thing going on and the HORRIBLE memoried of my Ex who use to do EXACTLY what dante was thinking of doing. I HATE EVIL BASTARD POWER ABUSING STALKING...Ok I'll shut up now. good story (despretly tries to forget hiretsukan ex) 'Orion
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Chilita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh your fanfic is absolutely awesome! I love it. Please update soon I wanna read more!
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Reviewed By: carelove203 On: November 28, 2004 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you so much for updating so soon this chapter was really sweet and cute even though dante was a jerk at the begining but it was understandable. by the way i love the name you gave tatski. dante really suits him. ohohoh is kevin nakago? can't wait for the next chapter please update soon( giving puppy dog face)
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Reviewed By: carelove203 On: November 19, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love your story. your both great writers! This story is definatly one of my fav stories of all time. great dicription of miaka and tasuki yhere both great. I love your pot too!Please oh please update soon i can't bare waiting much longer for the next chapter im to impatient. please
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Reviewed By: Sinnamonkat(not logged in) On: October 14, 2004 08:51 CDT
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Yay! You guys updated! I really love this chapter. I truly enjoyed how you finished hammering the nail in Taka/Tamahome's coffin by making him a money hungry jerk. ^_^ And Dante/Tasuki in denim cutoff's... Low-riding ones at that,YUMMY! *drools* I almost thought the bathroom scene would have gone further, but oh well. More tension to the pile. Leaving Miaka in the bathrrom was a cruel place to leave off. I had visions of her wearing Dante's robe and it slipping down on one shoulder constantly teasing the poor guy. *giggles* Can't wait for your next update!
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Title: scourge of the seven seas
Reviewed By: Flame Haired Wench On: October 08, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked chapter five, there was so much that happened in a short time and it was all exciting! I thought it was great how you got Kouji in there, and how you kept him in character! The details you put in are totally fun and creative. For example, the coffeehouse name (loved that motto! lol) the weird handshake between Dante and Craig, Miaka's reactions to Craig, and to overhearing the two of them talk about Dante's ex, Mizu the cat liking Dante, and how the cabbie was watching Miaka and Dante say goodbye. Great writing, that. This fanfic is far above most. In fact, it's got better characters and writing than most of the print romances I read. Please- update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sinnamonkat(not logged in) On: October 04, 2004 19:58 CDT
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*growls in major frustration* One kiss. One kiss. I totally expected them to get busy on the living room floor just from the pent up tension of the previous chapters and this one, but it didn't happen. *sobs* Ah well.. Maybe in the next 4 chapters they'll literally hook up. ^_^ By the way.. Thanks so much for bringing Tasuki's bandit buddy over. Now they can do the bandit dance. *grins in anticipation*
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Reviewed By: Seismic Toss On: September 26, 2004 12:06 CDT
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You posted another fic! Sweet! I've read 4 chapters and I want more. ^^ I really like the way you've developed Miaka, and Dante is a total hottie! ::drools:: The two of them are have great chemistry, and the sexual tension is so thick I could cut it with a knife. Great job, looking forward to the next update of this!
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