| "Kaiba's VRPG (Virtual Random Pairings Generator)" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Whoops
Reviewed By: Serenity Ishtar On: October 14, 2004 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I acidently sent the same reviw twice because it usually shows up imediatly after you type it, I thought some thig went wrong and deleted it so I typed it twice, sorry. Oh yeah, all the credit for the VRPG belongs to you, and as for the pairing I suggested, Yami Marik seme Srenity uke but I don't want her to be completly submissive. Once again You are an exelent writer and if you you have the paitence to put up with my stupid request you are a god. Thank you.
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Title: I have a request
Reviewed By: Serenity Ishtar On: October 14, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic it's nice and dirty. Setty is a total perv, he's good boyfriend material. I also have a tiny little request for the VRPG can you do a Yami Marik/Serenity one? It's my FAVORITE pairing if you do this it would really mean a lot to me.
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Title: I have a request
Reviewed By: Serenity Ishtar On: October 14, 2004 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, it's nice and dirty. PLEASE write more! And I also have a request for the VRPG it's my all-time FAVORATE pairing, Yami Marik/Serenity. PLEASE do this pairing, if you do it would mean so much to me.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Bishojo_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lemons are always the best! I think i started reading this on AFF.net but i might be mistaken, regardless i luv this fic i hope to see more soon, if you're still taking suggesstions i'd like to see one with Ryou/Yami Malik(Marik) kind of a bondage ficcie but not rape or anything, Marik strikes me as that type and Ryou is a perfect canidate, anyway enough about that and i hope to see more from you soon! This fic rules!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG...OMG...and you'll let this be your entry? Really? Right, completely calm...completely calm...you realize you have just made my day? OMFG, the pr0n... I can see Yugi on all fours crying out, hear Kaiba's ragged breathing, and OMG Yugi/Kaiba (sorta) S&M! "I'm sorry," he says nearly in a whisper. "I shouldn't stare." You really have no clue what that did to me, just imagining Yugi saying that, and...and... *clicks back button hastily to read again*
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're releasing this to us public? OMG the ideas! thankyouthankyouthankyou... thank you! If I do use this, Most certainly I'll give you credit for it! Oh, the new meaning of 'In a meeting' you have given me... Need more stories. This one is even expandable if you really wanted! My first idea... have someone walk in on him... it would be priceless!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was good. Amazingly good. It gives me an Idea for a pairing that is not quit there yet. It will be the Dark Magician. Oh well. I love it.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE. Please? Damn Kaiba, so freaking lucky... I always knew he was secretly looking at porn when he was 'working' UPDATE PLEASE!
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Title: YES!
Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes write more and Byesie said have someone walk in on him. oh how about yugi?
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: w00tw00t On: September 25, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!, PERVY KAIBA!. THATS SOME HOT SHIT!, WRITE MORE OR DIE!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative. Kaiba/Yugi huh...that's one you don't see very often. Definitely continue this. It's awesone. =p
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Reviewed By: dead_ghost On: September 20, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you MUST update
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Reviewed By: Aruni On: September 20, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that was hot! I think that our little Kaiba haven't seen enough! If you know what I mean ^_^ Write more, please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods yes continue! How appropriate for Kiba... he does have all that technology at his fingers, so why not something like this? Perfect!!!! Oh, and you should have someone walk in on him watching... maybe all his friends are over for a group school project or something, and they're staying the night. Someone needs to ask Seto about something, figures out where he is, and doesn't bother to knock... wow, what kind of reaction could you get for that! ROFL Oh, I'm writing a sequal to my first fic... couldn't resist expanding on that relationship.
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Title: HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes continue it please!!!!!! hehehehe dirty lil kiba!!!!! hehehehehe
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