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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no never hate your fiction or you my dear. just someone trying to destroy something they dont have. see look while she thought she loved sessho all those years shippou fell in love with her and she missed it. sessho needs to wake up before he loses kag forever. please keep writing your lovely story {s} see look what you did you upset the author [y] but all she wrote was that she didnt like kosh leave her alone baka (k) well i didnt care for her either the way she scared off me. but you didnt help eith sessho so dont you yell at her :me: no no leave them alone kag kosh is just a lost lil girl with hero worship gone on way to long. maybe shippou can change that. *shippou* change what lady? :me: not you hun the story your charater is in *shippou* oh ok can me and rin go play the playstation game of inyasha :me: sure can sweetie but dont get mad and throw it again that game is hard to come by and the tv isnt cheap either. {s} dont know why they like playing that silly game anyways [y] keh really its stupid (k) well wouldnt you know and here ive got a video of you two playing that silly game O_O {s}what [y] no your lying :me: oh grow up you two hey saki if you want them you can have them but please give us a new chappie soon :) :me:(sits and writes "i love Murasaki K fanfictions... i love Murasaki K fanfictions) {s}get up teiya i think saki got the point. now come and fix us dinner (k) uh sessho i... [y]come on kag lets go. see ya later bro :me:fix you dinner... baka (slams door)
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess... On: October 30, 2004 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was kind of hoping that Rin would some how still be alive, but after reading that chap it makes since. And I don't think that Kagome's going to take the possibility of being a replacement again good...
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Reviewed By: LadySessho-not logged in On: October 30, 2004 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:lady:*wipes a tear from my eye* you dummy sessho. giving kag a coloring book. do you think she is a replacement for rin? {s} what... no no i didnt do it. she made me do it i would have giving her... uh...uh :me:given her what??? {s}nothing my love (k)damn he doesnt love me anymore *snicker* i dont want a coloring book [y] whats a coloring book (k)the thing i give shippou all the time [y]oh... then how come you dont want one? (k)*bonks yasha* you dummy you give girls prez like flowers and candy and jewerly :me: and here i thought your last gift meant something :( gave me some perfume. now what im supposed to think? i stink or something? {s}i...i... uh help me yasha [y] what im supposed to do? im not the one who gave her perfume hehehe (k)*bonk* stay out of this yasha :me: love the chappie but hate kosho dumb b*tch trying to look and act like my lovely step daughter shes a sick b*tch @rin@ who a sicko maman? whos trying to look like me? :me nothing my dear go and play with shippou and try not to beat up jaken to much @rin@ k maman here papa have a crown of flowers {s}O_O; uh... :me: see your daughter has the right idea *walks away and slams door in sessho face* please saki give him what for in the next chappie. he shouldnt treat kag like a lil kid. and he says he loves her the perv. [y] hey saki do as my sister-in-law says. beat up sessy hehehe (k) hush doggie sit boy *pulls yasha by ear* saki love the work *bows* please give next chappie soon :) beat up kosho to hehehe love u |
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 23:51 CDT
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Oh no, he did not buy that. What was he thinking. And I liked Koshosho, she seems to be hiding behind the "I love him, but can't have him" idea. I think she sees him as an Uncle. But then I could be wrong. And please don't let him fall into thinking she was Rin back. No matter what. He better explain himself in the next chapter. Well until that chapter, later.
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Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:17 CDT
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update soon please
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
evil cliffy!!!!!!!! why for you leave it there!!!!!! you dare make the pancake queen wait for the next chapter *falls off ebd laughing* ok ok so that was weird but that's how i am *big blinding smile* it's doing fine here, it's been raining for a while but i don't mind i love raniy days *giggle* they are the best days to curl up on the couch or bed with a nice light blanket, light enough to let a little cold air through and take a little snooze *sigh* lol :P i'm getting ahead of my self ^^ anyways.....that was a great chapter!!!i loved the way you had him censour what she was reading *rolls on floor laughing* or what he said about his heart *sob* that was so beauitful ^^ (i'm not being sarcasstic i promise)the evil cliffy!!!! what the hell is rin doing in this story?? wouldn't she be dead??? ok *gets on hands and knees and begs* please please update soon. -jinx
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ok i admit i like you... no i love you and your stories :) it was so sweet how he was trying to stop kag from reading certain parts of the stories. and to call her constanly during the day just to hear her voice such love and devotion sigh... tho others might say its stalking {s} cough.. cough.. but you dropped thoses harassement charges tho huh? :) [y] nah i dont think she did bro (k)if she didnt then how come sessho is still here? :ME: i use them once in a while :D but i would never have my sessy behind bars. {S} see she loves me... once in a while what do you mean? [y] snicker see the pretty lady likes to lock you up now and then (K) uh yasha i think we should leave. thank you pretty author for such a wonderful story so far. {S} i want an answer :ME:o_o; i was just a joke. see i got the furry handcuffs and the whipped cream and the cholocate and... whoa where we going sessho? {S} back to your room *grins evilly* lets see how you like to be locked up :ME: later ppls gonna have some fun tonite. please leave a great review so we can read so more chappies. love ya lots Murasaki we all bow before a great writer {S} this sesshomaru bows before no one! :ME: oh.... {S} uh... except you my love? :ME: and??? {S} fine *bows* o great author :ME: come now let me scrath that itch hehehe
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:21 CDT
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Possessiveness doesn't even come close to what Sesshoumaru has. And he has it really bad. Oh, and is it really Rin. Wow, that is just cute. Loved that he has an addiction to something other than Kagome. Though I think his lossing it to just her. Keep up the great work, later.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: October 21, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a mean cliffhanger! Really can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 16:16 CDT
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HEY YOU GET UP OFF YOUR LAZY BUTT AND UP-DATE!!! please, pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty please!
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you dare to threaten THE Pancake Queen?...........*falls off bed laughing* don't ask? :P anyways that was a cute chapter ^^ i would have done the same thing, i'm not really in to watching romantic crap on TV but i do love to read and write about it ^^ anyways......you'll find out about why sesshomaru is in my story sooner or later *evil laughter* ^^ and if my editor doesn't get back to me with the new chapter here soon i'll post it as soon a possible probably in a day or two we'll see ^^ i sent it to her on the 14th and haven't heard anything sense then *sigh* Great chapter!! update soon please ^^ *runs away giggleing* -jinx
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sweet so sweet. i just love how caring and touching sessho is being but possessive of kagome. wish i could find someone to care for me like that. kagome is sooo lucky. chills and thrills love the sex scenes. i think i'll read my stories before i start on my own fics from now on sorry i left you so long. {s} what do you mean by you wish you had someone like that? you do ME [y] dont be so overconfident bro. she might be your lady but she aint if you get my drift {s} what do you mean? she's not cheating on me, i'll kill him then beat her. (k) shup up you two. sessho your so stupid you know she not cheating she loves you. :ME: you think i'm cheating??? why you... and going to beat me to boot! SESSHO!!! you should be ashamed of yourself. look at what you do with kagome!!! and you falsely accuse me??? [y] what did they do??? let me see the puter. WHAT??? are you two crazy??? you hurt her last nite with the last chappie sessho i'm going to thrash you (k) but its just a story. a good one, beautifully written but just a story. sessho go apologize to your lady NOW!!! :ME: i'm going to my room to think of a plan to beat sessho. loved the chappie :) we'll see ya later. eveyone write good reviews so we get more chappies :) later got to stop sessho from breaking my door again.
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Title: excelent
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 18:37 CDT
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excelent this story is absoloutly(sp?) excelent. it's sweet funny romantic full of suspence (sp?) indearing(sp?) and just excelent thats the only thing i can come up with to decribe it. pls pls pls pls pls pls up-date soon pls pls pls pls. oh and forgive my spelling i'm horrible at.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 12:39 CDT
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Well of cousre he wouldn't know what was wrong with her. Just that she was experiencing some emotion. No man can ever really know what is in a woman's heart. But it's nice that they try. And even sometimes achieve some insight. This was a good chapter. Lots of them bonding. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: October 17, 2004 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the info. Everything is clear now...lol. Can't wait for the next chap!
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