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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: September 23, 2004 15:05 CDT
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This is a great story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me guess,the guy she fucked is the guy moving in with her right?...cool write again soon!
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 22, 2004 22:25 CDT
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Love this story! You've done a very great job so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:55 CDT
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i enjoyed it and would like to c more =)
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Title: One of the Greatest AU i have read so far...(and i have read a lot)
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was good, if you can try to update a little sooner, hell if you can write during school, do it. I do and it doesn't bother with my studies.
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Reviewed By: Vellakitty(hm.... very nice) On: September 22, 2004 19:30 CDT
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very nice!!! AND KINKY!!!! all the better! lol, anywa, great work, looking forward to your updates!
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: Tiana-Kun On: September 22, 2004 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable fic!Made me wanna keep reading! n_n Anyways,keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:59 CDT
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I like how this started, just a one night stand and that it might grow into something more. Please continue ^__^
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 16:54 CDT
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Oooh...I love Inu and Kagome smut :) I'm all happy. Not only that , but you wrote everything really well...nice buildup as to what's going on with Kagome in terms of what's going on in her life on the social and emotional levels. Of course, next it would be nice to know what's going on in Yash's head... Your descriptions were very believable...and the lemon was well done :) So, Inuyasha is somehow able to disguise his true appearance or did he meet Kagome on his human night? Looking forward to the update :)
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likey da fic!! please update soon!! i LOVE this fic!! the hanyou guy is InuYasha!! hehe kinda a given -_-. UPDATE!! Ja!! ^_^
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: Coca *not signed in* On: September 22, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this first chapter, and I look forward to more. A very nicely done lemon, and the characters are very likeable, even though somewhat OOC. Good job, keep writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 13:23 CDT
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ooh I likey!! It made Kagome like an actual american college student!! Whoo Hoo!! Update soon!
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