| "Two Kitsunes to many" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 20:28 CDT
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O.O whoa, man. that was strange... ^.^ But I liked it anyways!! YAY!! *Glomps the prisoner, Sesshoumaru* Sess: @.@ what'd you do that for!? Star: cuz I felt like it!! so, there *sticks out tongue at Sess* and besides, I have cookies!! *waves pack of oreos under his nose* Sess: oreos!! gimme!! Star: okay *tosses the package into the closet* sic 'em, boy *Sess dives into the closet* *slams the door shut* anyways!! update soon, pleeeze? *bambi eyes* or I'll sic my puppy on you *points to the closet, where crunching noises can be heard* and he won't be nice, either!! *laughs evilly* *ahem* update!! *cheery smile plastered on* ~~~Starlett~~~
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Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 20:05 CDT
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nice i love the story so far but please update and make the chapters longer love it though.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^_^
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Title: UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: BookNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 20:18 CDT
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Cool, adverage start. You need a little more to get readers into your story though, try turning up twist and making longer chapters, then you've got a pretty solid story. I can't wait till Kurama meets Kouga, I still can't decide which on I like more. Inuyasha is cute and all, but those two just have some sort of charm about them, more Kurama than Kouga but still.
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Reviewed By: susie202 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 13:26 CDT
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