Title: UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: BookNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 20:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool, adverage start. You need a little more to get readers into your story though, try turning up twist and making longer chapters, then you've got a pretty solid story. I can't wait till Kurama meets Kouga, I still can't decide which on I like more. Inuyasha is cute and all, but those two just have some sort of charm about them, more Kurama than Kouga but still.
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