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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Kilika [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2023 19:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great fanfic! I loved every word of it and am a bit sad to
see it done. The lemon sections were extremely hot. Characters
stayed true to themselves, yet grew as people do. Sessh's pain was
so heartbreaking in one chapter that I was tearing up. I would have
liked to have seen a bit more shock from Mrs Higurashi due to so
many of Inuyasha and Kagomes friends still being alive. That would
have been a weird one to me, even if I knew logically yokai were so
long lived. Still, if was amazing and off to read another of your
fics.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: TheWarlock [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2013 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic has always been my favorite, I love all your work, but this was the first one I ever read and i've never gotten over it. I started reading this story about halfway through the stories creation, that means I not only used to anticipate your updates, but i've been a looooong ass fan of yours. I've never stopped to leave a review and let you know How much I loved your stories, after so many YEARS I actually feel like a brat for no letting you know what an AMAZING writer you are! You probably express great humility to people that praise you, but trust me, I wouldn't tell you you were amazing if you werent. This story made me cry, laugh, grin, blush, hell I think experienced just about everything. The characters and their real-life problems, the tension, the heartache, and the love through it all made it so thrilling. THANK YOU for releasing such an amazing story to the public and giving others a chance to imagine a whole different world with the two characters. I Love it, and i'm sorry it took 8-9 years to finally tell you so. But hey, better late than never right? Never stop writing (though im sure no amount of mobs would make you) and never stop unleashing your imagination, theres always some crazy fan of yours waiting for your new stuff! Sincerely, Heather, a long time fan. |
Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2011 05:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished this story for the 2nd time and i must say that it is better than i remembered! It was like reading a whole new story. I forgot all that happened! It was wonderful, kept me hooked from beginning to end. I think you should continue this like your Purity stories and write stories about Sess's son and then Inuyasha's kids! And I lovvveee shippo! He should get a grown up story! ^_^ Loved it all! |
Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: sunnymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 13:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much n I love the dedication n commitment u put into it. I enjoyed it so much n it took me like forever to read n I enjoyed every moment of it! Thanks for the great story n even greater read! It was awesome!
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Reviewed By: Jason Bourne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 16:40 PST
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One word describes this. Damn!!!!!! This story was not a joke I got mad respect for u as a writer. u wrote a thousand page story n it never never got old.. I love it to death cause everything was original character personality not manipulated it sounded all like em I'm just amazed at your ability. I believe u should b published and if not then thats a fucking travesty cause u own ur better then Samantha Myers no lie. only problem at all I saw in the fanfic was just like ten to twenty total spelling mistakes really freakin good for a hundred chapters. I got mad respect like I said earlier n I'm going to pick up reading metamorphisis again I liked the story just never got to finish it cause I lost where I was at lol. u got mad skill and I'm so envious because of that. ur like Rumiko Takahashi cause she herself comes up for material for Inuyasha without having it completely planned. they should have put u in charge of the movies maybe they can for the next one since Inuyasha final act is out n that needs a movie man this is a long review. But I guess I owe it to a long story. I freakin adore the way u capture the moment as well. Its why I love Inuyasha fanfics it always has a great story added to what already is a great story and is so original yet always the same in terms of character personality no one seems to have a problem writing about then and that's what I love. Thank you for being a part of the vast legacy and if u r infact a published author please tell me what stories r published so I can go show it off lol have a nice day n thanks again for the story u will b seeing more of me in different stories that is for sure!
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Title: I know this is one of your older stories...
Reviewed By: KAZ714 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 00:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this is technically one of your older stories, but I felt compelled to review it anyways. I read this story probably about two or three years ago and loved it. A few days ago, I decided to reread it, which reminded of how much I loved this story. I've read an absurd amount of fanfiction, but none of them captured the essence of the characters the way you do in each of your stories. Your writing is beyond beautiful and you seem to approach everything you write with general respect for the characters or what they experience, specifically the mating scenes. None of them felt uncomfortably graphic or tasteless, in fact, they were beautiful. Now, I have absolutely no idea if you will even see this review, but I wanted to let you know that reading your works inspires me to try and write again. This may seem out of place, but I wanted to acknowledge the most recent post I read on your official website. As corny as this may sound, I really can understand what you are experiencing. Ever since my parents got divorced, my mom has sacrificed so much to try and support me and my sister as we grew up. Although she works as hard a possible, the money she earns can never stretch far enough. When people say things could be avoided if my mom saved her money, they never understand that saving isn't an option when you're barely making ends meet. I desperately wish I could donate to you, to offer you some sort of relief from the stress and depression you are experiencing, but being that I'm only 18, I'm unable to at this time. However, having watched my mom struggle and having experienced financial hardships, I just wanted to say something that, hopefully, will help even just a tiny bit. During times where we struggled financially, even when I was younger, I never, ever viewed my mom as a failure. I saw her strength through her ability to push through times when things appeared hopeless; her faith through her constant belief that things would turn around, and I knew she loved my sister and I more than anything. Although I do not know you or your children, I'm sure your children see you and your husband as everything but failures. i hope this did not seem too invasive or out of place, but since your writing and stories have given me inspiration and comfort, I hope this at least helps to lessen the negative feelings you are experiencing a teeny tiny bit.
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 05:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Oi, wench! I can't breathe!" ....ROFL... Shippo cracks me up!!!! Love it so far!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 01:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... i have enjoyed this story so much.. it has to be one of the best stories i have ever read and i am only on like chapter 30... ya speaking of i had to write a comment about this `If we aren't meant to be together, like this . . . then holding her wouldn't feel so perfect, would it?'.. its beautiful... i can not wait to read more.. great job!!!
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Title: Sorry I didn't read this earlier
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 15:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I had read this when it was first published, but as you know there are so many fanfictions to read. I'm just glad I got a chance to read this now. I really love the emotional ride this story gave me. I love a story that makes me laugh, cry, angry and any other senses you can touch you did. I enjoyed the way you build the relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha. Your OC's were simply fabulous. The villain relative who just couldn't get over being envious of his family's fortune, lived long and learned nothing, then the villains who learned later on how a mistake can be costly. I love the way the trials and errors of Inuyasha, and how he was able to overcome the evasive obstacles that engulfed he and Kagome's happiness, not knowing can drive one insane. Overall you write beautifully, and I will enjoy any other stories you may have out there. Keep on writing and know you've made my day when my days were all but joyful. Coming home to read such a fine story made life bearable. Peace and Love! TAJE.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: SilentQuill23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 15:30 PST
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So, I'd like to thank you. I've read many, many fan-fics and so it is only natural that I've come across quite a number that involve Kagome and Inuyasha mating. In many of these stories (in fact, in probably 99% of these stories) Kagome's mother find outs soon after about their union. This is where I get irritated. In most of these stories, Kagome's mother is ANYTHING but concerned or upset. On the contrary, Kagome's mother is extremely UNmotherly in her school girl antics about how tickled she that her daughter had sex and how much she hope the babies have puppy ears. It makes me sick. Honestly, what mother would want their ONLY daughter to have sex with a guy (even if they both love and trust him) while she is still in school and off fighting dangerous demons and be totally ok with the fact that A. she could get pregnant (endangering herself and her unborn child) while still in school B. She is not married (and in most of the stories still only a little older than (or at the age of) 15 and C. Neither Inuyasha or Kagoem knows what the future holds, where they will live together (in what time), what they will do to support their possible family, etc. So I just want to thank you very much for making the story that much more believable by NOT making Kagome's mom some crazy school girl who is acting like Kagome and Inuyasha having sex was the one thing she was living for and the only thing she's wanted for a long time. Thanks :) Oh by the way, this story is really good, I'm addicted. Seriously. I got a dinner invite to one of my favorite restaurants and I'm sitting here trying to squeeze in one more chapter of reading before I leave. Haha!
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Title: InuYasha's Father
Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 14:11 PDT
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In one of the movies, InuYasha's father is referred to as "Toga". Great story, I've read most of your other stories; all superb. Keep writing stories for us InuYasha fiends.
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Reviewed By: AquarianMstermind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love your fics. theyre so cool and theyre fun to read! I read Metamorphosis(sp?) a few years ago, and I just recently found MM.org again. THen i found your stories and I was like "OMG this is the woman who wrote Metamorphosis!!!!!" So I just have to read a ll your stories. I love the way you leave final thoughts at the end of each chapter. They're are so funny; you have a good sense of humor. I actually am kind of taking after your writing style in my fan fic, although it's taking me forever to get the first chapter done lol. But I just wanted to comment on this story LOVED IT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Novemberkid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 13:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... i just can´t stop reding... o.O
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 19:05 PDT
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The chapters just get better and better. For once she was the one watching over him but of course he'd flip out over it. The fact that she took out a youkai without him waking should be good proof that she's able to defend them when necessary. 'Nice' made me laugh a lot cause it's definetely someting I can see him saying even if it was to cover his frustration and slight embarrassment.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 18:48 PDT
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Man InuYasha's stubborn! He might as well just tell her she's just gonna question him everyday lol. That's just as aspect of both of them that'll probably never change. I bet the rest of the gang miss them in the village. I love the ending of this chapter the most out of the others so far lol. InuYasha definetely won the unspoken battle with her book.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 18:17 PDT
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Well at least we know he would of helped if he knew. Someone should draw a pic of Kagome and Rin having tea time with Jaken serving them lol. I wonder what Rin's expression was when Sesshomaru told her that little piece of info lol. Little baka babies lmao. InuYasha looking into the water at his reflection would be another good pic! Anyways lol great chapter, can't wait to see what's next!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 17:44 PDT
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InuYasha's definetley more on edge the closer they get to the castle. It must be a really bad book. Would Sesshomaru be stubborn because of some unknown grudge he has on InuYasha or will he help because he doesn't like his things taken? So much mystery still lol. Let's see what happens next ^_^
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 17:28 PDT
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I had a feeling that's where they were heading. But I still don't know why so I'm not even gonna venture a guess. It's funny that part of Kagome's brain went straight to the gutter after that last answer lol. Well no way to tell what's next except to read on, so onward I go!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 17:03 PDT
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Well I must say that I'm still entertained. This fic has caught my attention and isn't letting me shake it off. With Kagome being exhausted almost constantly and her being able to feel the jewel nearby it makes sense because InuYasha is no threat to her and he's another confort factor for her so naturally she'd have the feeling that the jewel is safe. InuYasha singing is too cute though! Too bad it's not in the anime lol. I like the fight with the bull, it showed that yes InuYasha is tactical and Kagome recognises that without questioning it. Anyways I still love this fic and can't wait to see what this mission is!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 15:47 PDT
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That was a close call for Kagome and she didn't even know it lol. InuYasha's smart leaving everything for her to make it easier to travel, that aspect of the chapter was nice. It was kinda cute that she answered him in her sleep and niether of them thought twice of it.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 15:24 PDT
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Another great chapter! I'm still wandering around in the dark with this mission thing. I think we all knew Kagome was going to end up coming back to see him, it would of been too unKagome otherwise lol. Let's see where InuYasha is heading.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 15:09 PDT
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So odviously InuYasha is still pissed but Kagome's right he did the same thing long before she did. At least Kouga didn't try to take her away sheesh lol. There's still this mysterious mission to complete so they still have time to be together. Let's see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 14:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm definetely impressed so far with this fic. It's very descriptive and well within the traits of the characters too. You get a lot of info while still keeping some of it wrapped in mystery. Very awesome I can't wait to get to the next chapter and see what this new mission is. *Adds to Favs*
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Reviewed By: The_Red_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few days ago i started to reread Chronicles and i was reminded why it is so incredible. It is one of the best Inuyasha/Kagome Canon stories i have ever read because of the perfect characterization and the unique plot twists. I still find myself laughing hysterically at Inuyasha's antics even after reading it for the third time! ^_^ Keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 12:56 PDT
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Once again I'm blown away... I've just finished rereading Chronicles, I still love it as much as I did the first time. Now time to reread Metamorphisis!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 09:48 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. It was so long and it still managed to keep me interested the whole way through. I loved the character growth. You made the cast of Inuyasha your own and I loved how you did it. You are very talented and I hope you continue to write! Thank you.
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Title: Urm...somehow, I put this in the wrong place about months ago--in reviews for Purity 7...my bad. **grins sheepishly**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 10:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Title: I was gone for a while...I know... Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 15:40 CDT Rating(s): Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I was sick so I reread some of my favorite FFs...yours came up OFTEN! So i reread Chronicles and I was blown away again! I'm gonna SO blow up 'Famous Last Words' when I get some free time! Thank you for writing this story, Sue. It really cheered me up and took my mind off my...issues. I laughed so hard at Miroku and InuYasha! I was like, "OH, Kami!" wiping tears and all that. I never get bored with your fics and get something different out of it everytime I read it. You RAWK, SUE! So...urm...yeah... Happy new Year!
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 09:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! YES!!! I had a PE teacher like that as well. It made the 8th grade miserable for me...I'm gonna have to read "Purify" after this one now. =)
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Title: what a way to spend a sick week! ^_^
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was sick so I reread some of my favorite FFs...yours came up OFTEN! So i reread Chronicles and I was blown away again! I'm gonna SO blow up 'Famous Last Words' when I get some free time! Thank you for writing this story, Sue. It really cheered me up and took my mind off my...issues. I laughed so hard at Miroku and InuYasha! I was like, "OH, Kami!" wiping tears and all that. I never get bored with your fics and get something different out of it everytime I read it. You RAWK, SUE!
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Reviewed By: inu_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 11:05 PDT
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chapter 72 i call that 'we got caught' red. i love this story
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