| "Past Meets Present" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: solqua unlogged On: November 17, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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boy, do you knbow how to do an excellent cliffhanger or what. anxiously awainting the next installment, :)
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 17, 2004 14:58 CST
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yup, they're in trouble now....
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: November 06, 2004 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Likes! please update soon this story is just so Kwaii! Bye!
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Reviewed By: heartburner On: November 06, 2004 12:14 CST
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i like i like,WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT WRIT MORE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 18:15 CST
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LOL! Its probly Youko and Kuronue
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 17:41 CST
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I have the oddest feeling that I know who the Thieves are... Why would Kagome bring Shippo and Hiei-chan back to the future? Doesn't the well only let Inuyasha and Kagome pass? And since when did Kagome become the head of a village? Nice storyline, but their are some open ended things that need to be explained, so please, enlighten me. Other than that, cute story, even if it needs a little work. Please don't take my critiscm too hard, after all, this has the makings of a great plot!
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not signed in) On: November 05, 2004 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! You updated!! The last sentence in the chapter where she says "..then to the well!" made me think she did a Superman pose..^_^'' weird I know but still!! Sorry I am laughing from that thought still but yay that you updated and I can't wait til you update again!!
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: October 11, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOW it's getting interesting. Kagome being Hiei's surregate mother when he was a child. PLEASE continue to update this one as soon as you can. I'm just dying to know how Kagome's going to explain this to Hiei and the others. I was also wondering if you'll change the rating to R. Because this story looks like it would make good for that kind of rating. Please answer my review in the next chapter, because I don't have e-mail anymore. And like I asked before, Please update soon. X's & O's
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Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love This story write more
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Reviewed By: Clutzoid On: September 30, 2004 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sssooooooooo your gonna keep going right (puppy eyes) pppplllllllleeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeee
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: solqua [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awwww, so cute, i love it
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: September 24, 2004 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much likes please do update soon this story is so Kwaii (Cute) could you e-mail me when you update? My e-mail is Mistic_me_@hotmail.com Anyways update soon.Bye!
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
holly chickens! this story is wounderfull! please update soon! eveil cliffy die! ...giggle... this is too good, think the two hieis are gonna merge or something when they see each other!? please update soon, i can't stop laughing, this is just to good. if you can e-mail me when you update, winter_solstce@sbcglobal.net
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Reviewed By: ewunia On: September 23, 2004 20:55 CDT
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I like the story. It is great. Please continue and I hope for more interaction between them. Wonder what happened when Kagome disapeared. And how Shippo and Hiei got separated.
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Reviewed By: ewunia On: September 23, 2004 20:54 CDT
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The story is great. you changed a second chapter a little I see. Please continue
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