| "More Then A Doll" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Zorra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 22:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I really enjoyed your fic. I was disapointed when it ended. I think you had a good stopping point for the way this read, however it seems incomplete at the same time. It might be cool if you did a continutation fic to this story and touch on details of their relationship and Ryo's way of dealing with it. I must say it was a very inspiring story and I'm in such a better mood now that I've read it.
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Reviewed By: crimson flames On: June 03, 2002 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understood it...Poor Ryo...awasome fic
~*~CRIMSON Flames~*~ |
Reviewed By: Monnshade On: December 12, 2001 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
The scary thing is... I think I understand that. Scary... Good fic though. Poor Ryo...
Am I the only one that's noticed that everybody picks on Ryo? |
Reviewed By: Kaze Ryuujin the Wind King On: August 30, 2001 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is this posted at Fanfiction.net? it sounds familiar...eniway, i love songfics! i've writen 7 of them! ('course only two are up at this moment) The songfic fit the song very well, it was amazing how you discribed things so well. Unfortunetly i don't know the song. I have a bad habbit of listening to country ^.^ [sips tea] |
