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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 22:54 CDT
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gah! she's so perfect i want to cry tears of joy! *flicks a tear* alright, there's one. can't wait for the next scene with yume. i'd really like to see her and hiei go at it because she could piss him off no problem (well, she could do that to anyone) and he's funny when he's mad xD.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yume made her entrance! yay! she's so adorable ^_^. right when i read another elder is coming i was like "oh damn, that's my girl!!". yay for yume! she's great. yay for yume!!!!! glad she's just as childlike, but are we sticking to the brother idea? just wondering. keep writing!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'd be more than glad to create some angels for you. just tell me what you need. anything for a cute story like this ^_^.
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Title: nice!
Reviewed By: lub haruka On: June 27, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don;t know wat to say...it was really FUN!!!! but it would be better if it had a litle bit of comedy...only a little? i think the next part should be something like...the elders did come down to get her because she is needed for something...she runs away agian...kurama gets pissed off at the elders...he turns into youko and goes off by him self to look for her...hiei gets pissed off a little too and goes off by him slef too...koenma tells yusuke to get her before she(your choice)...kuwabara does something stupid that causes a little delay.... it's really your choice i'm just trying to help.BAI!!! (^.^)
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Reviewed By: bitter-sweet dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 14:25 CST
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Well...I guess I have to review here for your new story...oh! by the way, its me Green Breeze, I just got a new screen name...anyway, the storys great! Except chapter 3, it kind of caught me off gaurd, but I just kind of skimed throu it, but the storys sounds goo so far, and You welcome for the encouragement!^^
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 11:14 CDT
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Meow! =3 great chapter!! Update soon!!^^ Oh, and some of your sentensces got cut off...(hehehehehehehe.....i REALLY need to work on my spelling...^^;;)
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Title: hey sorry..
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 11:56 CDT
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hey sorry about how messed up this new chapter is.... my new labtop is giving me a hard time and i need to get a wireless router so i can connect to my regular computer so i can finish all of my fics! ja ne! gomen nasai! smooches!
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Title: last fic to review for
Reviewed By: KitsuneGal_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 13:56 CDT
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ok so i reviewed for all of ur fics, now please get off my back at school! lol, u know i love u...um, that didn't come out right....u know what i mean!! sicko...anyway, continue writing this one cuz its my favorite!! thanks! KitsuneGal_12
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 19:30 CDT
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Meow. =3 I got my computer back!!!!!!!! ^^ I'm so happy!!! ^^ Hiei:...Is there even a point to this review? hehehehehehehe...well, ummmm..I cause you're wondering thats why I haven't been updateing...so, UPDATE soon!
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Title: thanks for all the reviews
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 08:41 CDT
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i actually can't see, something with media miner is wrong cuz i can't see the reivews...it confuses me *^_^* bunny
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 19:46 CDT
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Wait..I have a question, do you WANT me to send in a angle or do you just want me to read and review your story? either way I don't care... Update! (Its probably getting annoying, me reviewing every single day..) ^^
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 15:45 CDT
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Meow!!! My computer won't let me update!!!!o.o Hiei:....and you're telling the onna this...Why? .......hehehehehehehehehe*sweat drop* well...ummmm.. Hiei: Baka onna! .\/. Well..I like your story, and maybe I will send you some info for an angle of mine...But only if you WANT me to...since I'm already in your other story, I don't want to be some annoying reviewer that follows you, or something so...yeah! ^^ Update! the storys GREAT so far!!! (I said that in the last review didn't I?) Update! ^.~
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Reviewed By: FireAngel-Kayona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 10:52 CDT
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Hey, I like this story. I was disapointed when I found out there was only one chapter. I'll let you borrow Kayona if you want, just e-mail me the dicriptions you need, you know, angel form, human if you want her to have one, everything you'll for the story. She's an elemental angel of fire but if it doesn't for your story, we can edit some things. I might be able to remember some of my other angels if you want to borrow them too. Kayona_Eriegusha@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 09:51 CDT
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Meow! =3 Great new story!! I lkie the plot, and suff, it sounds like each chapter will be interstring, so Update!!! ^^
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Title: remember!!
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 18:43 CDT
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hey there! I need angels ok? i thought i would let you guys know in case anyone looks here and stuff!! check out the begging of chapter one! Its got the details!! thanks!! *^_^*
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