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| "Tornament 1" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: Is it too late for a chara?
Reviewed By: The Black Cat On: April 19, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Ebony Kai Age:18 Hieght:6'2 Outfits(2-3):1)Black turles neck skin tight shirt, Long dark blue formal jeans, Purple sash for a belt, black running shoes 2)-swim suit-Black trunks with purple trim, white muscle shirt 3)-pjs-Black silk pants, dark blue open dress shirt Paired with:Does it matter? Weapons:Fists, Short throw daggers Pet(s): A small black feline that tends to sit in his pocket, it is small enough to fit in the palm of his hand. Large Leopard that chills at home Personality: He is cold to many, but he tends to warm up. He has a great sence of humor, laughing at any joke, to be polite Demon side: His hair stays the same rick deep purple it is now, the hair resting at the bottem of his neck, a small braid, no more then a quarter of an inch think comes from behind his left ear, sliding down to rest at his lower chest. His human ears are replaced with black furry cat ears, finger nails now claws, and a black slender tail potrudes from his pants. His eyes go from a warm light blue to an icy crystal blue Demon Info: A Feline born of the ages, he is reborn every century, he has poison claws, and something called "Death Ray" A red lazer like beam that comes from his hands. Physical: Like I said, Rick dark purple hair, the braid, warm light blue eyes, slightly tan complection, doesn't like the sun much I'm going to continue with a new review, okay, don't go away. Heh.
| Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 18:24 CST
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my pet's name is Fukai
| Title: have to continue, sorry!
Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 18:21 CST
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FAVE SONG AND ARTIST: Ningyo Hime by Tanaka Rie DEMON SIDE: Same everything, except more strenth and agility. Has red fox ears, two red fox tails with gold, and claws and fangs
| Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 18:19 CST
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NAME: Tsuki Fushin (Nickname: Sadie) AGE: 15 HEIGHT: 5'8" OUTFITS(2-3)(include casual, bathing and pajamas) : Red tanktop, red fingerless gloves that start at elbows, black bell-bottom jeans with chains, and black sandals. Red and black bikini. PJs: white t-shirt with random words printed on it (I'm starting to think of batsu ties...), red silk pants. BISHI(paired with): Kurama WEAPON(s): A dao, sometimes a metal fan (think Kagura's attacks), and plain martial arts PET(s)(something small that will sit on your shoulder, head, etc): a small red fox with black paws and tip of of the tail is black. It has black dragon wings (don't ask) PERSONALITY: Extremely witty and sarcastic, will go hyperactive when given too much sugar, likes to blackmail, and tease people, when you get to know her she can be more caring, funny, carefree and seems more loyal BACKGROUND INFO: She is a reincarnation of a chinese fire fox demon. Her incarnate lived with her family and clan but then one night, and enemy clan slaughtered all the full grown demons, burned the village, and tortured the children to death, killing her. Her soul was vengeful, so once in a while, Tsuki will go evil when her/her friend's life is in danger and lose control of her power (like InuYasha when his demon blood takes over) PHYSICAL APPEARENCE(like hair, eyes, etc): Her hair is bloodred except for 2 black highlights. FAVE FOOD: raaamen!!! FAVE TIME IN THE DAY: bedtime (sslllleeeeep gooood) FAVE SONG AND ARTIST(if girl)(telling y | Title: past
Reviewed By: shadow demon Lirin On: October 04, 2004 19:51 CDT
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what happend to Lirin in more detail... Backround info: her parents abused her since she was 4. when she was 11 she accidentaly killed her mother trying to defend herself. her father got realy mad and tried to kill her, she was able to get away but not before her father managed to cut her across her cheek leaving a scar. she ran away from the village and has been on her own ever since and she became a great thief.
| Title: oops, part two!
Reviewed By: spendragon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:23 CDT
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Favorite song and artist(if girl)(telling you now, your going to sing):welcome to my life, by simple plan, and all of evanescence's songs. Demon side(if you have one) info(same as the info above):vampire deamon, she can eat reguler food, and can go out in the sun, but cant deal with sudden sunlight, her neacklace helps her deal. Beyblade(if you are going with one of the characters in beyblade you need one):Black and dark blue, type, it's attack ring could shader blades if it hites them hard anuff(sp?), razer sharp spinning point and edger, realy fast and balenced. her launcher is blue and black. (if you need any more info. have questions, and/or pick me for this plz e-mail me at silverfang87@hotmail.com)
| Reviewed By: spendragon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:19 CDT
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Name:Cassandra Age:18 Height:5'11" Outfits(2-3)(include casual, bathing and pajamas) :(this is going to be long)swimming: two piece, black skull-and-cross-bones., pajamas:silk tank-top, skull-and-cross-bones on it, black silk pj bottoms with skull-and-cross-bones.normal:baggy black pants, black half shirt, black fingerless gloves, steel-toed boots, pentagram neckless, black cloke(sp?) Bishi(paired with):Touya, Heero, Kira(sp?) tala, ot kai Weapon(s):she carries a grim reaper thing, and bow and arrows(she's a trueshot, but she dosen't know)daggers, razor-sharp rippon dancer-thing. Pet(s)(something small that will sit on your shoulder, head, etc):snake, hawk, egale, crows(12) Personality:your typical silent but deadly type, gets pissed off easily, real attitude problem, finds most people annoying. pretends not to like people, she's afraid of being hurt or abandoned by the people she cares for. though she has a soft spot for little children. Background info: she has no brothers or sisters, her parents were killed when she was little. Around the age of 9 she was cought in the crossfire of some powerfull warriors and lost her memory, after she woke up, her powers were altered greatly. She then started wandering, giving her self the name umbra, or "of the shadows" she wander here and their trying to fing what was lost. Physical Appearance(like hair: dark Blue-green, eyes: silver,deathly pale, has fangs. Favorite Food:twizlers Favorite time in the day:midnight Favorite song(s) and a | Title: My info
Reviewed By: EvilCareBears [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 17:38 CDT
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Name:Kirsten Graf Age:14 Height:5"2' Outfits:Casual-Black T-shirt with a cresent moon in the middle on the front. dark blue jeans the flare slightly at the bottom and white sneakers. Bathing:Navy bikini top and matching boyshorts bottoms. Pajamas: White tanyktop with black and blue flannel shorts. Bishi:Yusuke Weapons:Power to move things with mind and throwing knives. Pets:Baby wolf that can fit in her hand, and her name is Eaoko (girl). Personality: Brave and the fighter type. She loves to have a people surrounding her. Very sensitive, when it comes to soemone talking of her family. She is nice and sweet to friends, but to enemies she acts like an enemy. Protective of her friends. Background: She grew up in a Indiana (Usa pretty much), but moved to Japan when she was 5. She has no known family. Her parents and little sister were murdered by someone who wanted to kill her for her power. She blames herself for their deaths. She lives in an abandoned chapel. Physical Appearance: She is tan and slightly muscular, becase of her training outside the chapel on her freetime. She has darkbrown hair that shines slightly golden in the sun, it reaches her a little past her shoulders. She has dark purple/brown eyes with a white pupil. Favorite Food:Cheese Pizza Favorite time of day: Late in the night (10:00-12:00p.m) Favorite Song:Britney Spears, Shadow Demon info: Her hair is black she has claws and fangs. She has wolf ears. Her ki is blue. Tail and ears are white.
| Title: Itsuko Ryusaki Part 2
Reviewed By: Itsuko On: September 27, 2004 22:12 CDT
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Background info:when she was 4 her parents were killed by the birds of paradise, she was to fend on her after that untill she met kouga and became his friend though at first they did not like eachother but soon warmed up to one another, when she turned ten she was split up from kouga, finally when she was 15 she wanted to kill the birds of paradise as revenge fpr her parents but someone else had already done it. Physical Appearence:Long black hair(to her waist), lavender eyes (think shiori's eyes). Favorite food:rassberrys. Favorite time in day: sunrise and sunset. Favorite song:my perogative by brittney spears. Demon side: white wolf demon. ok if you need anymore info e-mail me at shadowwolf118976@aol.com ok bye bye
| Title: Itsuko Ryusaki
Reviewed By: Itsuko On: September 27, 2004 22:03 CDT
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Name:Itsuko Ryusaki Age:16 Height:5"0' Outfits(2-3)Casual:a black off the shoulders long sleeved top, black jean shorts , calf high black boots, black fingerless gloves and a moon choker. Bathing:a red and white bikini. Pajamas:a black tube top that says "c'mon i don't bite..much.", white draw string shorts and same moon choker. Bishi:Kouga Weapons:Twin Blades Pets: a small fox (Name:Ryo) Personality:happy, hyper at times, quiet , funny, sweet,and kind.
| Title: my character
Reviewed By: shadow demon Lirin On: September 27, 2004 20:01 CDT
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Name:Lirin Ishimura Age:178 but looks 17 Height:5'0 Outfits(2-3)(include casual, bathing and pajamas) :1)black tanktop with a picture of a silver cross in the center with black baggy pants with chains on the right side showing her midsection, black sneakers, and black fingerless gloves. 2)bathing suit-black and dark blue bikini with black shorts. 3)pj's-blood red tank top and black pj pants
| Title: my character
Reviewed By: shadow demon Lirin On: September 27, 2004 20:00 CDT
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Bishi(paired with):HIEI Weapon(s):twin katanas and two ivory daggers Pet(s):small black dragon (name:Hakaru) Personality:loner most of the time, you have to earn her trust and/or respect, not afraid to speak her mind, stubborn. Background info:when she was a baby her parents tried to kill her by poison. when that did not work they left her to die in the forest. she was found by wolf demons and raised by them. when she was 11 they kicked her out of their pack because she was not one of then (meaning not a wolf demon). since then she has been on her own training, killing, and stealing. she has become a very skilled thief. Physical Appearance:blood red hair tied in a high ponytail, violet eyes, light tan skin, thin, has a scar on her left cheek (wich she got fighting her father) Favorite Food:strawberries, pasta, and icecream Favorite time in the day: when the sun rises, and when it sets. also night time Favorite song and artist:somewhere I belong, Likin park Demon side(if you have one) info(same as the info above):everything same but she has pointed ears (like an elf) and dragon wings (she is a half fire half shadow dragon demon)
| Reviewed By: Kimba On: September 26, 2004 19:36 CDT
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for thr Pairing I take back Yusuke and Keshin.. i would yo put Kuwbara( Yes a Fan of Kuw)
| Title: continued from my last review
Reviewed By: Yamifanner(not logged in) On: September 26, 2004 13:06 CDT
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Please e-mail me at Jacfrog@aol.com if I made it in your story. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner(not logged in) On: September 26, 2004 13:05 CDT
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Name:Jacquelyn Age:16 Height:5'1" Outfits(2-3)(include casual,bathing,and pajamas): 1)casual:a black tube top with tight blue jeans and black stillettos 2)bathing suit:a hot pink bikini with glitter all over it 3)pajamas:a pink velvet top and bottom with white fluffy slippers Bishi(paired with):Yami Weapons:twin swords,katana and a chinese sword Pet(s)(something small that will sit on your shoulder,head, ect.):like Sango's pet Kirara but the fur is black and white and has blue eyes Personality:everybody sees her as a kind and gentle person, but she can be cruel and cold hearted sometimes to her enemies. She is respectful,brave and responsible. Demon side:has ankle length red hair with black highlights,has black cat ears and tail Demon info:she is the cat demon, like the rarest egyptian cat breed in the world. She fell uncontious after she fought in battle against a human being. When she woke up, she was in human form and was forced to live in the human world. Physical appearance (like hair,eyes,etc.):waist length black hair with golden brown highlights,blue-green eyes and has curves Fav.food:pizza Fav.time of the day:night Fav.song and artist (if girl)(telling you now,you're going to sing):Dip It Low by Christina Milian, My Place by Nelly feat. Jahiem and Sunshine by Lil'Flip feat. Leah Background:she doesn't remember her past,what happend and what she has done in the past. Now,she is trying to recover things that she will remember. Please e-mail me at Jacfrog@aol.com if I ma | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] |
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