| "The Queen's Gambit" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 19:15 CST
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YAY! THEY KISS!*Dances* [sarcasm]Great[/sarcasm] ....some dumb butthead just had to attack just then.... he nearly atacked her mouth. You miss the other t in attack.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 18:28 CST
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.....Why is King Vegeta smirking for? *Reads the talk between Raditz and Hikono*....Oh great... Hey, Goku is coming. ^_^ *Is reading what is happen with Vegeta and Bulma*....This isn't going to end will, is it? Welcome, Vegeta's Mate! ^_^
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Title: Amazed
Reviewed By: starbrella (not signed in) On: February 08, 2005 17:07 CST
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EKKKK! another great chapter from yoU! Keeep up the great work and remember to update soon!!!
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Title: I'm sorry!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!!! I loved the last two new chapters, but I've been a very naughty dragon, and I haven't updated my site yet!!!! *runs into a dark corner* As soon as I get home, I'll update my site, including the link to your 2 new chapters. I know, bad dragon, baaaaddd dragon!!!! ^__^ BD.
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Title: best of the best
Reviewed By: starbrella (not signed in) On: February 02, 2005 22:10 CST
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OMG, one of the best stories that i've read so far. I love it. The whole idea behind Bulma's past and Vegeta, and the KIng, and this new charactor that seems interested in Bulma (Hikono)::wink wink:: I love it definatly, you're for sure going to my alert list ^_^ Update really really soon for me ok?
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Title: Chapter 10 again
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:06 CST
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*Smirks* Bulma....Let hope the plans work. Good job, Hikono! *looks at chapter 11*....Though it doesn't look like plan is working right now. >.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 17:56 CST
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....O_o....it Chapter 9 now...doesn't look that good.....Sorry if I am annoying you.
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 17:43 CST
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.....Oh heck, It going to be bad...Me think, I wonder how Hikono is going to explans this? Bah, I still can't see chapter 10....GRRR!!! Hopes you don't any more writers block.
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Title: ....Well, I can't change my name anymore.
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 21:10 CST
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Go, Bulma! Claim your future mate..husbund...Whatever! Follow your destiny! Vegeta...*grins evilly* you can't escape Bulma that easy. And Please Vegeta's Mate, don't blow a head gasket...you need those.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: November 22, 2004 21:42 CST
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Aha...Looks like I was half wrong in my last review, Poor Bulma. This chapter was better than the last...Because it told what was going on in the last chapter.*Is eager to see the next chapter*
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: November 18, 2004 22:01 CST
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*Looks at the chapter* Yes! I almost made you give the whole story away, Bwhahaha!! Wasn't Hikono and his squad the people who want to do...you know to Bulma?*Is confuse* *Reads the last part of the chaper* Bulma is going to give Hikono a earful? And My email is xiahouli89@yahoo.com, I hope I can be a good beta reader.*Smirks*
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Title: interesting!!!!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, awesome update! Can't wait to read what happens next! Your style is fresh and original, and it invites me to come back and keep reading! LOL, keep up the great work! ^__^ Blue Dragon.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: November 05, 2004 21:28 CST
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What!? You mean Consort Vegeta and Goddess Rhiannon is Bulma's Father and Mother!?*Blinks in disbelief* So much for my idea of Vegeta being the descendant of Consort Vegeta..*Throws the idea out of the window, stare as the idea hits someone on the head*...Um...I would love to beta, but I don't have a spell check on my compter, though I am okay at find mistakes without it.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: November 01, 2004 18:43 CST
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Is Vegeta the descendant of Consort Vegeta? or Something else? *Read the little story about Consort Vegeta*....That kinda sound like Vegeta....Kinda of. *reads the ending of the chapter*...0_0...that could be bad.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 04, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Hm...This is interesting. Soon she will meet King Vegeta.
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