| "Heart of Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 181 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mandie On: October 20, 2004 15:25 CDT
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Great fic! Very original! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: evlmnkyslvenmyarvnt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this rocks you better update because im hooked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please please please please please please please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And please make it ether a Hiei/Kagome or Hiei/Kag/Kur!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dark moon (not loged in) On: October 16, 2004 20:12 CDT
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very good please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 19:43 CDT
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this story rocks keep going going going going going goin going going going going like the Bunny Bunny Kurama/Kagome/hiei parring
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Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 19:42 CDT
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this story rocks keep going going going going going goin going going going going like the Bunny Bunny
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Cool story!! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 23:04 CDT
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hey i love this story so far you have to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: unimportant On: September 30, 2004 04:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, but it could have been better. The story seemed a little rushed. You needed to spend more time showing and explaining more on the feelings of the characters. Just take your time and this fic could really be great. As for the pairing, I would like to see a Hiei/Kagome pairing. Kurama would be a little too easy to do, being the seductive kitsune that he is. Hiei would be a challenge and more fun to read. Oh yeah, the Spirit World is called 'Reikai.'
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Reviewed By: Hiei's gurl On: September 28, 2004 18:25 CDT
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Oh! And also i vote for Hiei/Kagome And you could make Kagome a demon
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Reviewed By: Hiei's gurl On: September 28, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loove this story please continue!!!!!!
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Title: Kanna_Fan
Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon, i vote a hiei kags pairing, and a bring back shippo. ^_^
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 15:08 CDT
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unless you already had a pairing in mind, i vote for Kag/Hiei!! yay!
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 15:00 CDT
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i cant believe im only the second to review on this awesome fic! the only consructive criticism i have, and please dont take it the wrong way, i think the chapter should have been divided into two, for what happens in the Sengoku Jedai and what happens when she gets home. it was beautifully writen but seemed kind of thrown together. you might have wanted to give the readers time to absorb the first tragity(sp?) by going into more detail about Kagome's feelings before she went into her emotionless state. then, you could move on to the next tragity. but the way you did it was still a really good read, and i will wait anxiously for future updates! ^_^ ~~aliya
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 13:50 CDT
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the spirit world is called reikai. oh, and by the way, this is so terribly...awesome! you thought i was gonna flame didn't you? anybody who flames this lil' beauty has serious mental issues! so dramatic, rich with vibrant detail, i could see it all happening in my head! this is just absolutely incredible! updates are required missy!
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