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Reviewed By: Foxy Grampa On: April 04, 2005 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
n____n I'm surprised how much I enjoyed your fanfic. Maybe 'cause I'm a perv when it comes to gay guys... o_o Yeah xP The whole reason I wanted to read yours is because I found out what "3x4" meant and I was like "OOOOOOHH..... Omg... *goes back a couple of pages*" >_< I came here specifically looking for TrowaxQuatre fanfics ('Cause ya know they want each other x3) and your's was the first one that I enjoyed o_o; I was actually quite taken aback when I relized that it was now based around the actual Gundam Wing plot (I didn't quite get the gist of what "Alternate universe" meant.. first time reading fanfics actually o_o I'm still getting the hang of all the terminology and crap n_n;) but I was delightfully surprised n_n I got super addictied to it, and had a withdraw whenever my brother or sister kicked me off of the computer >_o Anyway, What I only found anouying about it is, in the chapter "climb" it seemed to be like.. in the middle of the chapter rather then the begining at the top @_@ Can you somehow fix that, I don't like the feeling that I missed something >_< And you made a lot of typos... but I'm a real reader, so I just like, think with my mind what that sentance would be like without the blant disregard for the english language xD No offense.. really o_o; Yeah. Update soon or I'll cry >_____
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Reviewed By: Lady Frisselle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the story. I loved it when Quat stood up to Heero. I am looking forward to seeing Quat prove himself to the others and to seeing Trieze and Wufei make up.
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Reviewed By: Romie On: March 10, 2005 19:54 CST
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You go Q! Quatre is the bravest of G pilots and I like seeing him display his fortitude. Nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 15:39 CST
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The relations are advancing well! Keep it up! PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: February 21, 2005 08:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, things are finally heating up (literally!). The old "we've got to share body heat" ploy, eh? *grin* Great action and some more hints of a larger mystery. The grammar errors are still distracting, though. Swirls in a river are eddies, not Eddies, btw.
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 18:30 CST
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I love Your Story. I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Manga-Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 15:53 CST
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I still read this fic!! I am faithfully following this story on both...uh...places...and I might have reviewed on the double f, but...I don't remember. But I am so glad you updated! I was wondering where you were! Anyway, that silly Treize. He's such a gentleman. Wufei's little b*fest was pretty cool---I could never do that in real life. I'd just stand there and scream and throw stuff. Such class...And Quatre's getting better at things! Yay! He's getting confidence in doing his thing with the evil outdoors people...That's way awesome! Anyway, am happy that you've updated, and you haven't lost me at all! I haven't been hanging around the double m for some reasons...looking forward for the next installment! Oh, and thanks for the compliments! Love the image of Trowa the Ranger! *drools*
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Reviewed By: Sayo-chan On: February 03, 2005 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It was a little rocky at the beginning, but it's getting much better! Keep up the good work!
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Title: Opps
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 09:49 CST
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That should have been "count for something" *blush* Btw, thanks for the kind words on "Broken Warriors"! :-)
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Title: Yikes!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 9-- Nice twist with Treize and Wu. How embarassing! It's good that the others finally realized that his past reputation should could for something. Ch. 10-- Oh what a wet, cold, nasty cliffhanger! Your out door details, especially the canoeing, are really good! Still a lot of word choice errors, "limps" for "limbs" and that sort of thing. Spell checkers won't catch those.
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Reviewed By: mageofthebooksOlivia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do very very much hope you continue this soon because I really really like it! Meanie! I mean sheesh! leave me at a cliff hanger why don't ya! Geer! I want more! ^___^ Yum! Thanx so much for writing I have really enjoyed myself so fare.
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Reviewed By: Manga-Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 22:04 CST
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Hooray! you updated! Mucho thanks, for that. I was starting to worry that your fic dropped off the planet, there...anyway, very happy that you updated, and that things are getting way more interesting...not that it wasn't interesting BEFORE, but even more interesting than...before that...Er...glad you updated. More? Anytime soon?
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 09:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Off to a fun start with this one! I like the take on the characters. **note: "Rouge" means red. Do you mean "rough"?
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Reviewed By: avid fan On: October 22, 2004 09:29 CDT
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I so agree with that "vote" Quatre's father is a son of a bi***. Wufei *dool* seems more aware then in the show *I think* AH I don't know I haven't, much to my greif, watch or seen any Gundam Wing in like six months or so *groans in sadness* Wufei, Trowa, and Heero (if my sister sees that I'm dead...) ARE DA** HOT!!!
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Reviewed By: Manga-Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 20:19 CDT
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Did I write a review for this last time...? Anyway, this story's still SUPER! A little mean and there's a little tugging on the heartstrings, but hey---this is a good fic. Just do what you've got to do to satisfy yourself with your work! ~_^ Please finish!!!
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