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Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, poor Kagome. You know...it's really remarkable the number of men that act just like Koga did, only caring about their plesure... She is so unhappy, and yet the only thing she knows about sex is what he has showed her... I wonder if that will make her relationship with Inu a lot harder than I thought at the beginning. Anyway, great chappie!can't wait for the next one.Update ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 20:14 CDT
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You totally took me by surprise since I thought that this was an Inu-Kag scene (tho, I'll admit that I was puzzled that you were describing "Kagome" as a quiet lover....since she really is sooo unrestrained when it comes to Inuyasha..I mean those two are like thunder and lightening when they get started!) So, now I'm left wondering why Inu is with Kikyo?! The only pair that is right and good in my mind is Inu-Kag (I know you're the same way) :) I mean, even when Kikyo is not of the evil undead, she still has a very conditional love for Inuyasha (which you've illustrated quite well thanks!)...whereas Kags loves him - human, youkai, hanyou parts and all. Please write soon since I'm dying to know how Kagome gets into the picture and when she and Inuyasha are going to have wild hot monkey (err doggy..sorry Inu!) sex :)
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Reviewed By: shaid (nlo) On: September 28, 2004 23:36 CDT
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ooooo.... Now, you know I don't really like Kikyou all that much. I respect the character, but I think she's... Arrogant. This looks like it's going to be interesting. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: September 28, 2004 18:14 CDT
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wow lemon already that's great we love lemons
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww..... that's sad i love his ears! they turn me on! ^_^ he he he he he he he he he he he he he i wisk all men had ears like that *growls at boyfriend* dam it i told you not to take them off now put thouse dam ears back on *purrs happly when he put's them back on* yea ! ^_^ kiwaii!!!! ^_^ ......... anywho keep up the good work great fic!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 08:22 CDT
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he's getting her sooo hot and than she had to ruin it, ne? i would never wince at his adorable ears! i would love them, they are way cute! i can't wait to read the next chapter, hope the lemon is in it! ^.^ ja ne! (thanks for the brownnie, it's my fave!)
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Reviewed By: Inu & Kagome On: September 28, 2004 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this as soon as you can I am hooked!
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Reviewed By: Big Bad Wolf On: September 28, 2004 01:35 CDT
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Great start, I think this is going to be a more orignal idea to bring Inuyasha & Kagome together I think I have read just about every way but this one.
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Reviewed By: Venus1 On: September 28, 2004 01:34 CDT
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Wow I actually had to reread the first part to make that it was Kikyo and not Kagome name but I think this is going to be a cool story.
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Reviewed By: Cold Demon Lord On: September 28, 2004 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very orignal story idea, I also find adultery very intersting to read about what are the motivations for looking for a different lover. So I will sit and wait for the next chapter. Please post more soon!
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Reviewed By: Keade Baba On: September 28, 2004 01:30 CDT
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You got me intersted to see whats happens and Inu/Kag are going to hook up. Awesome Story!
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Reviewed By: Albino Elf On: September 28, 2004 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent start, I wander how you are going to bring Inuyasha & Kagome together. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: September 28, 2004 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking the idea for this fic, and I love your quick updates! Great great job and I can't wait for more. :)
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok... I have to admit that it shocked me when I read Kikyo's name(lol). It literally snapped me back to reality, 'cause I was expecting Kagome's name... So I read it twice(lol). Wonderful beginning! I already want to know what's the deal between Kag's marriage to lead her to infidelity. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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grr it was Kikyo(am not kikyo hater just not a big fan of her). why inuyasha? i am still a faithful fan to u but, where is kagome? i like the story so far. it caught me like y is he with her and where is kagome and i need more cause ur such a good write that i must kno what will happen. i am luck that out of my busy life(skool, sports,homecomin ect.) i pick today to read me e-mails to find a new story by u. hope u keep up wiht this story and ur other since ur doin a great job. laterz 4now
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