| "Temple of the Dog" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Title: Temple of the Dog
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it.But is it finished?If it is please e-mail me Janie50989@sbcglobal.net well 'till next time bye.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated!!! yipee-doodle-do!!! :P i'm so glad! will hojou just give up?? i'm not interested in a kag/hojou relationship, but it WOULD perk my interest to see how Inuyasha would act! *wink*wink*hint*hint* well anyway, i totally hope you update soon! P.S. i checked out your fanart page on deviation, and i made my own account, but i couldn't seem to find any of your art again on the search pages!!! :( so i couldn't leave a note or anything! lol i was so frustrated...
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to give up on this fic? i mean, PLZ don't abandon us!!! i am totally ABSORBED!!! I NEED to read more! plz update A.S.A.P. or leave a note saying whether you will continue to update or not!! PLZ!! just a little note!!
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Reviewed By: kagome_inuyasha123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 08:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. It was cool how you made them egyptians and all. I haven't read the last couple chapters but it is really awsome!
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Title: Temple of the Dog
Reviewed By: punk_rock_viper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 00:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. It was very discriptive and just all around awesome. Love it! Keep it up dude! You are a really talented writer.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
was that the end? if it was..*ahem* NOOOOOO!!!!! why was Kagura surprised at the new guy? (The new pharaoh) urg! this was a amazingly fantastic fic! why are there only nine freaking reviews?? This should deserve OVER a million! wowy wowz! I hope you make SOME sort of epilogue or sequel, because I absolutley ADORE your writing style!!! One question Urdchan!! where is Inuyasha originally from? you never told us.....im dying to know!! LAZY PEOPLE! REVIEW THIS FIC!!
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Reviewed By: Laurachan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 11:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Great story! Original and absolutely stunning! I love the lemons, they're great! Please keep updating! ^^
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 02:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story ROCKS!! It's so original and I love the setting(I'm big into ancient Egypt). I hope more people will realize how wonderful your story is!
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Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 10:30 EST
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Hi, I just wanted to leave a quick review for you! I read through your story, and I enjoyed it. Your pride in your work showed in the way you made sure to pay attention to grammar and such, which is a *HUGE* thing IMO. Impressive! It's hard to find fics (especially Yasha ones, go figure) where the author cares about such things, and I'm so glad you do! I enjoyed your story, and wanted to offer you encouragement to keep writing because I think you have the skillz. The only thing that I wanted to point out to you, and I hope you don't become offended by this, is that you really might want to watch the POV changes. They're frequent and often misplaced, making it a little more difficult to truly 'get into' your story. I don't know if you're seeing to hone your skills toward a professional publication, but this is one thing that I've had problems with, myself. I do hope you don't think I'm being overly critical. I don't review unless I see real potential, and I hope you take this in the vein intended, and that is that I really think you've got talent and would love to see you perfect that talent! Good luck with your future writings, and thank you for sharing your story!! ~Sueric~
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Title: (^.^) wonderful job!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 12:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been wanting to read this for a while from what my friend kola has told me, but I could never remember what it was called or who wrote it. I'm glad to finnaly get the chance to read and coment on your wonderful work. This is truly a masterpiece!!I hope to read more soon. You are a wonderfuly talented writer. (^.^) and your good to! I really really REALLY liked it!
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Title: bravo!
Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 15:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is amazing. why do you have only 4 reviews?!?!? there should be like 300 or something! I cant wait until your next chapter. who\'s the new pharoh? i thought it would be inuyasha... but i guess not. anyway, until later! ps- i\'m adding this to my favorites list!
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Title: YAH!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 13:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF? How come you only have 3 reviews for this masterpiece? Okay, I\\\'m only at chapter ten but I\\\'ll read the rest later! Good work!
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Reviewed By: angelcutie22334 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 00:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say I really like this story! It's a totally different plot from all the rest and it's written very well! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 16:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this story before from the guilty pleasures site and i'm glad its here where i can mark it as my favorites! great job with this story. i love it
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see you posting here, Urd-chan! I look forward to updates! ---wj
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