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Reviewed By: Sugarhighs:P [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, it's definitely been a long time since I've first come across "The Lucky Ones". The last time I ever read it was back when ff.net still had the story and they weren't so anal. I have a habit of saving ff.net webpages onto my computer (when I'm busy) so I can read them later, connection or no connection. It just so happened that I had forgotten to delete the epilogue of "The Lucky Ones" and its been collecting dust all this time. Well, imagine my surprise when I open it up and it's still as good a read as it ever was. Of course, that led me onto a wild goose chase through ff.net's databases and finally, I ended up on your wordsmith's page. I have been, dedicatedly, off the Inuyasha-fandom for quite a while yet I have to say that you are, by far, one of the best writers in this section. You've managed to drag me in for a whole other story! You have a wonderful ability to lay out a scene with a huge amount of characters and still keep it to a workable level. I usually steer clear of works with multiple original characters yet yours is the one story I've truly enjoyed. I don't believe anyone else can deviate so far from the given Inuyasha and Kagome and still have such colorful characters seamlessly blend into the canon ones. The characterization, suspense, and plot (which you don't find everywhere) are amazing. It's a brilliant story, and fabulous sequel, and I'm hoping for more soon (though judging by your livejournal...maybe whenever you're free XD). ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: Deadly Crimson [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 16:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you plan on updating or have you left the story? cause it's been more than a year since you updated, literally.
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Reviewed By: sizzlinghotcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 21:51 PDT
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I love your stories...The Lucky One is my favorite!!! I have all of my friends read it! I was wondering if you where planning on updated this spin off which is also very good?? Please let us know Thanks
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Title: Keep going!!
Reviewed By: kane-sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 08:13 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read "The Lucky Ones" a few months ago and decided to look up on your name to see if you had anymore. I found this gem and thought, wow! A sequal...I think. Anyway, I hope you finish this. It's been over a year since you updated, and there are so many people out there that love this story and your other ones. It would be a shame to leave this one alone and leave people hanging.
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Title: More Yukio! ^.^
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 05:20 PDT
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Yeah! When i finished the lucky ones i was gagging for more- especially on Yukio! When i found this i was thrilled- more of my fav hanyou pup, and with a nice girl, too! Please continue this story...when you have the time!! Keep up the excellent work!! Kawaii-Keke-Chan !xxx!
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Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 21:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... your pattern of updates shows you used to update about once every month or so... so here is my question... Is everything okay?... If something is going on that is preventing you to update people would want to know and they might also be able to help you I mean there are a LOT of people who LOVE your writing, and I personally think that you should change the names of the characters and have the book published... but that's just me
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: LilSis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read TLO and plan to reread it until i see more on this one. you have a very big fandom and i am pleased to be part of it. i love your writing, pleas continue! i cant stand stories with a whole bunch of mistakes in them or that have inexcusably bad grammar, but i dont think i found hardly any in your works (and believe me i look ^_^;;) i would love for you to keep up with this story and to write many many more in the future! please please please!
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Title: What Happened?
Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 16:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey whats up are you ok? it been over a year since you updated and i love this fic and TLO i have reread TLO atleast three times and im just wondering whats going on i hope you havent decided to quite writing this cuz i have seen your yu yu hakusho ones so i know you didnt stop writing all together i hope you update soon i miss reading about kag, inu, yukio, ian and all the others.
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Title: what happened?
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:49 PDT
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its been over a year since u have updated this story..did u quit writign for some reason? i am waiting for an update..been with you since ff.net....and the start of TLO...in fact i just reread that one today..please update soon! an old fan, tessie_fanfic
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing and well written fic. I am hoping that eventually there will be more. Good luck with your future projects. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 08:17 PST
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Okay now I'm asking for and update. But I'm asking very nicely, so pleeeaaassee update.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 23:32 PST
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so i never really sat down to realize that this was a full continuation based off of TLO. When i did...you better beleive i was all over this like white on rice. so why is it i get up to chapter 5 and am suddenly slammed face first into a continuless wall? chika!!! this is to good to NOT continue! you're writing is amazing! but it's been over a year now! you have sooo many fans hun, who know you by name (NAME!!!) on the web. come back to the good side!!! (we got virutal pocky!!!)
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kanome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 12:33 PST
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Oh please, in the name of all Kami's update! I loved, I mean loved 'The lucky ones' and I have loved the new one. I've re-read it 3 times and can't wait till you update it so I can know what the babys father is doing in all of this. So, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update!!!!! I will give you lots and lots of coconut bon-bons if you do! they are really good!!!!swear to kami!!!
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 05:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I decided to re read the coyote child and man i hope life is ok for you in everything you have going cus i cant wait to see what happens. I absolutly loved Lucky Ones and i am one of those that Recived that special item you created for the fans ;)It has a place of honor in my home. Well cant wait to see what happens. see ya next chapter
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Reviewed By: merellia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 11:08 PST
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This is very belated, as I've enjoyed reading "The Lucky Ones" several times and have yet to express my appreciation of the story to you. I love the detail you have given both this story and "The Lucky Ones," the way that you have characterized Inuyasha and Kagome as they have grown in experience and as parents. I hope that you continue "The Coyote Child" at some point. The hints you have given about Emma's and Yukio's chances for a relationship are appealing, and the scenario with the coyote-hanyou pup is intriguing. I look forward to learning more about the situation in Arizona and sort of have my fingers crossed that circumstances work out such that Inuyasha and Kagome return home with another son in the end. Ian should have an opportunity for a playmate and to learn about being a big brother!
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