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Reviewed By: Tanya (Dragonlady) On: March 09, 2005 00:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A long time ago you gave me permission to post an illustrated version of "Lucky Ones" on my site (which is annoying me now cause I can't seem to access it for revisions... grrrrr). Anyhow, I remain a very devoted fan of that original story... and I'm now, also, completely caught up in this one too! Once I can access my site again, I was hoping I could have your permission to post this story as well- also with illustrations. The story, as well as Lucky Ones, would be posted intact, in spite of the rating rules of my page... to remove anything from this magnificent work would be like butchery. So, once more, this is just so fantastic, and please, do not feel pressured to complete it NOW NOW NOW!!!! As a writer, I know how frustrating it can be to have all your reviews be urges and orders to stay at the keyboard all day long! So, write slow, write as wonderfully as you always do, and I will read with the delight of a 5 year old on Christmas morning when you post your next chapter! www.geocities.com/naninuyasha/index.html I'll send you a private message with my e-mail if you want to respond. :)
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Reviewed By: Hlikari no Tenshi On: March 08, 2005 18:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the chapter. Though I was hoping for more Emma/Yukio moments. But I guess finding out your love interest is over 400 years old, would slow anyone down. I glad you finally updated and I can't wait until you post the next chapter.
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Title: AMAZING!!!
Reviewed By: inu-ears On: February 27, 2005 18:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! amazing chapter once again!!! please, if you can find it in your schedule as well as in your interests, update as soon as you can!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! im so excited!!! i love all your Metamorphosis!! I praise you on your magnificant ability to portray the characters so well and your amazing ability to right. I just love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: -=Cloud=- On: February 27, 2005 18:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUST.....READ....MORE.... Ok, please update soon. Good story. But i shouldnt expect less from the writer of Lucky Ones. Come on, please make more chapters... I want to read more... So interested.... Now, just so you remember, UPDATE COYOTE CHILD!!!!!!!!!! SOON!!!!!!!! yes, i know its... a little... you know... But thats really not the point... What the point is, is that YOU MUST MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bye Bye ^_^;;
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Jolaine On: February 22, 2005 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow keep it up this story is just as amazing as you other ones!!! I read the Lucky ones in less than a week!!! It was so good!!! So happy to see that you wrote a sequel. Please update soon!!! I feel like I'm watching a mivie when I read your story :)
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Dark Lady of the Moors On: February 21, 2005 07:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid ratings won't go to 11 Oh, Hi! Just tried to give you an 11 out of 10 but it wouldn't work. (Big cheesy grin) I have to tell you how much I am enjoying your new series. You've spoiled me for most of the fanfiction out there. Rarely, if ever, can writers take someone else's characters and situations and turn it into both something uniquely their own, and yet seamlessly fit into the original author's 'universe'. You have supremely done this. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: February 20, 2005 18:44 PST
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Neglected to mention how further authentic the lore you've already so marvelously expanded upon became upon reading Kagome's acknowledgement that the Native American's system of magick differed from her own...yet purification itself offered as a universal concept. I applaud how far you've evolved Kagome's character.
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: February 17, 2005 13:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite the inventive incorporation of Native American legends. How elated I was to learn this unfolding Saga continues the same universe established in "The Lucky Ones", with all the marvelous OC's, the intelligence of our beloved mains, plus your unique plots and subplots. It is my fond hope this shall be updated soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Patriot On: February 16, 2005 02:48 PST
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Keep it up! Keep it up! You've got me hooked!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: February 14, 2005 14:22 PST
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hm, I don;t trust that woman at the end...
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 21:18 PST
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Cool a part two!!! Nice job so far. If this is going to be the last part i would like to know if kagome and inu go through with their plan for death in the end. That was the onlty grip i had with the last one.
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Reviewed By: freefallingtowardthesky [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you always put such thought into each chapter. i'm love it. i'm so glad you updated. it had been a while. i am anxious for the next chapter and i have to wonder if this will be another epic like the lucky ones? because it would be great if you were planning to do that.
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Title: Dea Mariella
Reviewed By: Dea-chan On: February 08, 2005 12:25 PST
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w00t! i was happy to see that you had updated, but it took awhile for me to get back to reading it -_-' i like the way the story is progressing...i wonder if kag will end up apprenticing herself? you know she wants to...i hope everything works out for yukio...but he's SOOOOO wrong in pushing away emma...i have faith that she'll snag him (heh heh...) i can't wait until we meet the poor mother (i've forgotten her name already...-_-'...) and i wonder what happened to coyote. hmm...lots of characters left...can i fill it up...? nope. well...i wish you beaucoup of luck with this fic. if it's anything like your others, i know it'll turn out well...albeit a tad long (not that i'm complaining!) until the next update...ta! Dea-chan
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Reviewed By: Colhan On: February 08, 2005 12:23 PST
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I was wondering what happened, you took a long time but at least you got six chapters up. I liked Lucky Ones and was very depressed when it had to end, but I'm galdd your making side fiction stories for it. I agree with you about FF.N, I moved here mainly since they took alot of my best work off even when they followed the rules. I just wish people here would give me feed back in reviews, nobody gives feed back here... (Your reviewer: Colhan3000)
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Title: aaa
Reviewed By: Lilywyskov On: February 07, 2005 07:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved to read it. You're very creative and have an involving style. I never thought I could care about a character created by a fanfic author, but I'm loving Yukio that you created the some way that I love Inuyasha and Kagome =P I'm very anxious and wating for more, update soon!
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