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| "Shadow of the Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 23:25 EST
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I love the opening song, by the way. ^^ I'm very surprised by all the different storylines you've introduced here with Sakura's friends. It's very ambitious, but it sounds like you know exactly what you're doing, and I'm looking forward to reading the continuations of those plots. Just a little nit-picky thing, it's "kirei." Like I said, really detailed, but I noticed because I speak Japanese and when I read it, I was like, "What...?" Hahahaha comic relief with Li-kun. Hooray for introducing Fujitaka! Sakura's dad is so awesome; I'm glad you discussed him and Nadeshiko. It was such a sweet story... It depresses me just a little that Sakura seems to be staring the same fate in the eyes, but it's completely out of my hands. WOW loved the Touya/Terada conversation and Touya's advice. Was also surprised by the Touya/Mizuki thing (maybe I missed the nuances somewhere during the anime... *sweatdrop*) Still absolutely love the Touya/Yuki pairing. EEEKKK what's up with all these people nosing around??? I think Sakura should use Erase NOW before things get out of control, which I'm sure they will...
| Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 22:32 EST
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I'm surprised there aren't more reviews... This first chapter was very exciting and interesting. I especially liked the opening (with Sakura fighting the dragon). I, too, am curious as to what Meilin knows! I also want to know what's up with Touya's sight (I cried when he gave his magic to Yue) and what he knows about Sakura's future (I do hope it doesn't turn out quite like that... how sad for Sakura)... The recap of Sakura's past was a little boring, but I understand why it's there. My only complaint would be that you refer to the characters consistently. I don't recall from the series, but I think nearly everyone called Sakura "Sakura" rather than "Kinomoto," but if that's not true than ignore me. It just conveys a different attitude when you use the formal last name rather than the informal and personal first name. Last thing: Yukito/Touya rocks. The cutest yaoi pairing I've ever seen. ^^
| Reviewed By: flowersflowers On: February 06, 2005 19:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I was wondering if u were going 2 update it. I hope u update soon.
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