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| "Shadow of the Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2010 19:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for continuing with this story, your one of the most persistent authors I know. Basically a slice of life/interlude chapter, but the ending promises more drama next chapter. Thanks for your effort, read you next time.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2009 21:11 EST
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No updates in over 8 months, yet it's still interesting. Then again, it is hard sometimes to come up with plot threads. Oh well. Update again soon, will ya? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Laurie Hall On: January 08, 2009 01:13 EST
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I remembered when this story was first written some time ago. And I love it then and I still love it now!!! Update soon!!! I'd like to read what happens! :)
| Reviewed By: Random Lurker On: September 01, 2008 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic. Characters, their motivations, and their situations are believable. My only criticism is that you tend toward the didactic; you often tell rather than show. I'm not entirely sure how to describe it, but it sometimes feels like the narrator is directly telling readers what to pay attention to. That tone of voice can sometimes get a bit jarring. Aside from that, its a superb fic. With the chapter 15, you've given us a CardCaptor Sakura version of Kurogane (who's serving Tomoyo, go figure). The cameo by Seto Kaiba was priceless. I hope you continue in universe building. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 00:44 EDT
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Lol, "THIS IS PORN TO KERO-CHAN!" Awesome. Update again soon. Also, are you ever going to update the digimon stories? That would be nice. Anyway, update sometime soon, like, inside a month from now? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 02:18 EDT
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Okay, as much as the idea of having a love interest that's 7 or 8 years older than you in middle school freaks me out, I guess it's a thing for japanese culture. Hell, it was a part of European marriage practices less than 2 centuries ago. Seriously, not that odd, but by today's standards, it is freaky. Neh. I do like the background story, it sounds all too close to home. Neh. Update again soon, especially some of the digimon stuff, will ya? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Orenji Metsuki On: January 05, 2008 03:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a few typos throughout the thing. But you really wouldn't notice them much and it doesn't hurt the story any. Poor Sakura! Everything seems to happen to her. I hope you update soon! I'm enjoying this fanfic very much! I loved the little Xiolin Showdown and cardcaptor sakura cross-over. Hillarious.
| Title: Shadow of the Dragon
Reviewed By: sakuraluvsyaoran On: September 21, 2007 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Quite original and not too vulgar. It also has the anime part as its beginning. Just that your grammar may not be too... No offence. But I really like your idea though. :) I hope u cn finish e story as soon as possible! thx alot! Just continue!!! If u have any other stories tat u wrote abt Sakura and Syaoran can you PLEASE leave a message at the tagboard at my blog? Also when you finish or update the "Shadow of the Dragon". My blog is sakurainherdreamland.blogspot.com I look forward to ur updates! :)
| Reviewed By: kya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 01:56 EDT
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I really hope you continue this, I am enjoying it very much. Thank you for writing.
| Reviewed By: feifiefofum [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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personally, i think your fics are for the most part, godlike. the plot is well thought out, executed with perfection with only a handful of mistakes at most, and truth be told, i don't really even notice them even when they appear. the only bone that i can even pick with you is the fact that i really, really wish you'd update sooner.
| Reviewed By: Lynne Deater On: February 26, 2005 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done well with this story, and I've been following it for several months now. However, I would like to point out something. Your spelling of 'Yueh' is incorrect. It's 'Yue'. That was the only thing that was really bothering me as I read through the story. Beyond that, I love this story, and I can't wait to read the next installment. ^_^
| Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 23:48 EST
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Oooo liked the horoscope thing at the beginning. Nice set-up for the chapter. HAHAHAHA loved the tardy-scene. So cute! EEK creepy scary mean people!!! What a way to ruin Sakura's day. I love Li's analysis of girls--pretty damn accruate, I'd say. It's "piqued" not "peeked" (I've seen that mistake MANY times). Wow... Meilin and Li kick butt. I wish I could train with them... I'm more of a defensive, peaceful fighter, but wow... The scene with the challenge was a little confusing--I didn't quite get the whole box thing but I figured it out by the time Sakura beat it. The scene with Rika and Terada was a bit odd, and almost random in the change in Rika (I'd spent the rest of this fic thinking Rika was some sweet innocent cute girl... was I wrong...) Love the Touya/Li interaction. Wow you are one dedicated watcher to have sorted through all those dates... kudos to you! Awww... what a sweet, heartbreaking scene with Meilin... This is such an awesome fic, looking forward to your next update!
| Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 23:25 EST
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I love the opening song, by the way. ^^ I'm very surprised by all the different storylines you've introduced here with Sakura's friends. It's very ambitious, but it sounds like you know exactly what you're doing, and I'm looking forward to reading the continuations of those plots. Just a little nit-picky thing, it's "kirei." Like I said, really detailed, but I noticed because I speak Japanese and when I read it, I was like, "What...?" Hahahaha comic relief with Li-kun. Hooray for introducing Fujitaka! Sakura's dad is so awesome; I'm glad you discussed him and Nadeshiko. It was such a sweet story... It depresses me just a little that Sakura seems to be staring the same fate in the eyes, but it's completely out of my hands. WOW loved the Touya/Terada conversation and Touya's advice. Was also surprised by the Touya/Mizuki thing (maybe I missed the nuances somewhere during the anime... *sweatdrop*) Still absolutely love the Touya/Yuki pairing. EEEKKK what's up with all these people nosing around??? I think Sakura should use Erase NOW before things get out of control, which I'm sure they will...
| Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 22:32 EST
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I'm surprised there aren't more reviews... This first chapter was very exciting and interesting. I especially liked the opening (with Sakura fighting the dragon). I, too, am curious as to what Meilin knows! I also want to know what's up with Touya's sight (I cried when he gave his magic to Yue) and what he knows about Sakura's future (I do hope it doesn't turn out quite like that... how sad for Sakura)... The recap of Sakura's past was a little boring, but I understand why it's there. My only complaint would be that you refer to the characters consistently. I don't recall from the series, but I think nearly everyone called Sakura "Sakura" rather than "Kinomoto," but if that's not true than ignore me. It just conveys a different attitude when you use the formal last name rather than the informal and personal first name. Last thing: Yukito/Touya rocks. The cutest yaoi pairing I've ever seen. ^^
| Reviewed By: flowersflowers On: February 06, 2005 19:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I was wondering if u were going 2 update it. I hope u update soon.
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