| "Wash My Hair" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel *reappears* On: October 20, 2004 17:17 CDT
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oh one more thing, Heero took charge and kissed Duo senseless... i like it, and it saws that he isn't exactly all that submissive either... *vanishes with the sounding of a whoopie cushion and snickers*
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Reviewed By: priscel *appears in a wisp of smoke* On: October 20, 2004 17:14 CDT
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'...needed a blo--uh, a drink of water' and then 'I was touching a thing that had been on Heero's cock. Oh. My. God. I'm not ashamed to say that I squealed like a girl when I dropped the thing ' ...lol OI i love this fic sooo!! Duo no one can blame you for needing to urhmm ..clean LOL And I guess that that dream Heero could have talked to Duo in his sleep and asked him what he would do to him *snickers* and found out that way unless Heero shared Duo's dream all along and took liberty in being his sex kitten *lol coughs* OI please update soon, gotta have more!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 20, 2004 13:54 CDT
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hey! fanfic is starting out pretty good here. i can't imagine what heero plans t buy when he goes shopping. will duo ever get the heero that *he* wants? only time will tell. update again soon!
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Title: Maddeningly Intriguing
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the H*ll is our Heero up to? Can't wait to find out! I strongly suspect Duo has things backwards, especially about Dorothy being in charge of Heero, or "making" him do anything. *g*
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: October 20, 2004 07:30 CDT
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I'm so happy I could piss myself! Actually, we knew a dog, who whenever she saw my sister, she'd get so happy that she'd roll on her back and piss all over herself and anything in a 2 foot radius. It was cute...in that really screwed up kinda "ew don't touch me" way. And then my friend induced blue-balls on a really great yawn I was having. That sucked. Thanks for the new chatper!!!
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: NightCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!....::tries not to fall over laughing::...this is so good...just as good,if not better, then your other store.Please tell me your writeing more.I so want to read more of this story...::looks around::...you think you could send Heero over for a visit >^.^
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Title: Ch.2
Reviewed By: Anonym On: October 15, 2004 11:33 CDT
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I was fascinated. I re-read it a couple of times savouring every phrase of it. Heero's change from submasive to naughty was very INTERESTING indeed.
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Title: Ahhhhhhh!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I have something to live for again. :-) I'm sort of baffled by this OOC Heero, but it sure is fun! More, More!!!
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Title: From today's chap, my 2 fave lines
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: October 13, 2004 20:45 CDT
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"I'm pretty sure that I said blowjob instead of enchilada.." "he ... glowered at the pajamas as if they were created solely for the purpose of mortally offending him." Today's favorite lines were brought to you by the letter 4 and the number joint. Oh, and by Muffie the world's greatest fic writer, can't forget the Muffie.
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Title: absolutely loved it
Reviewed By: Sara chan On: October 10, 2004 05:04 CDT
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I've almost overlooked this one. it's a good thing I noticed your name at the Xth time, going through the listed fics! No need to add "If Muffi's writting it, then it must be good"
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Reviewed By: Anonym On: October 08, 2004 10:04 CDT
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my that's even better then "DiD v. tKiSA ". I'm eagerly looking forward to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Dana(not a MM.Org member) On: October 07, 2004 11:08 CDT
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it's nice to see another fic of you.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 20:10 CDT
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LOL Poor lucky DUO!! Oh this is soo GOOD!!! lol liked the prologue so please update SOON!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: October 05, 2004 07:48 CDT
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Another fic, and it's amusing the piss outta me already! Happy Day ^_^
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: October 05, 2004 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Your story is absolutely hilarious. I hope Duo will take advantage the situation thoroughly.
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