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Reviewed By: Kagetsuya and Chihaya On: June 09, 2005 01:42 CDT
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Great job..i have been with this sroty sience the beginning and it just makes my day every time i get to read a new chap of this story..i really hope that u update soon..^__^
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Title: Chapter 35
Reviewed By: MelizaMac (NLI) On: June 08, 2005 21:09 CDT
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Hilde is a great addition to the practice. I was also one of the readers that thought Duo and Heero might have considered Milliardo, but Hilde offers more of a total package beyond just being a good vet. She quickly proved she will also be a good friend. I can't imagine Duo calling Mil "bitch," even in jest. This chapter brought back memories of my own "life on the farm" in my younger days. Foals are among my favorite baby animals - they're so adorable when they play! Of course, I had to fight the sniffles during Schythe's ordeal. I love how she felt afterward, about what "she produced." That was precious. Oh, for a moment I thought this would be a great opportunity for the guys to celebrate and take that final step, but then I realized Heero would not be a happy camper... er, jumper, the next day if that happened. Damn it.
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Reviewed By: george16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story its a really amazing story i love it. i can't wait for the next chapters to come out. your an amazing author.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Its a boy! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logger in) On: June 04, 2005 00:21 CDT
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wow that was really great.. was wonderinf who u were going to make the new vet..wel i must say that i'm suprised..well i think that this is great and i just loved the last pare at the end...hope to see more and don't fprget to have fun writting..^__^
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. Such a great fic. I hate cliffhangers.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 28, 2005 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Argh! What is Duo's suggestion?! Do we have to wait as long as Heero does? Or longer? Update soon, please! I wanna know what his solution is.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 08:25 CDT
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Ooo, I feel a lemon coming soon. That was a very steamy chap. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: May 21, 2005 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i really think that this is a really great chap..It really goes into how much a relationship mean and that it takes a lot of work..Excellet job..i can't say anything more then i can't wait to see where this story goes but know u there will some good stuff in the near future..maybe a twist??? Well anyway hope that ur having fun writting and that all is well with ur family..^__^
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: May 21, 2005 21:30 CDT
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So sweet and romantic.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 21:15 CDT
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Steamy chapter. It was hot keep updating can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: 12
Reviewed By: priscel- Morning!! On: May 16, 2005 06:06 CDT
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"Only Duo would come up with something as weird as naming his computer." Hey i named mine, is that really so strange?
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: May 15, 2005 22:48 CDT
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Hey i think that this is one of ur better chaps..I really loved the whole foal shower thing..u know i think that Q-man really would do that...hehehe..that was wonderful..Also the conversation with duo and Trowa was wonderful..It really shows heart and goodness..i hope that u have fun writting the next chap and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: May 15, 2005 22:48 CDT
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Hey i think that this is one of ur better chaps..I really loved the whole foal shower thing..u know i think that Q-man really would do that...hehehe..that was wonderful..Also the conversation with duo and Trowa was wonderful..It really shows heart and goodness..i hope that u have fun writting the next chap and update soon!!
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Title: ch9
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiee! This really great, I think heero should tell that jerk donaldson off, besides he could work with Duo if it doesn't put a strain on their budding relationship.
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