| "Equinity" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: May 21, 2005 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i really think that this is a really great chap..It really goes into how much a relationship mean and that it takes a lot of work..Excellet job..i can't say anything more then i can't wait to see where this story goes but know u there will some good stuff in the near future..maybe a twist??? Well anyway hope that ur having fun writting and that all is well with ur family..^__^
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: May 21, 2005 21:30 CDT
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So sweet and romantic.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 21:15 CDT
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Steamy chapter. It was hot keep updating can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: 12
Reviewed By: priscel- Morning!! On: May 16, 2005 06:06 CDT
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"Only Duo would come up with something as weird as naming his computer." Hey i named mine, is that really so strange?
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: May 15, 2005 22:48 CDT
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Hey i think that this is one of ur better chaps..I really loved the whole foal shower thing..u know i think that Q-man really would do that...hehehe..that was wonderful..Also the conversation with duo and Trowa was wonderful..It really shows heart and goodness..i hope that u have fun writting the next chap and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: May 15, 2005 22:48 CDT
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Hey i think that this is one of ur better chaps..I really loved the whole foal shower thing..u know i think that Q-man really would do that...hehehe..that was wonderful..Also the conversation with duo and Trowa was wonderful..It really shows heart and goodness..i hope that u have fun writting the next chap and update soon!!
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Title: ch9
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiee! This really great, I think heero should tell that jerk donaldson off, besides he could work with Duo if it doesn't put a strain on their budding relationship.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 10, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Go Zero! That's how ya do it! Keep going - that was cool. I hope she's pregnant. Does this foreshadow who's on top for Duo and Heero?
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: May 09, 2005 18:16 CDT
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Hey really great job with the update..i really like how close it was between them and all..the lil horse romance thing was..-_-...well anyway lol zero is funny..i can't wait to see if heero becomes a better rides and gets offered a job..I also wanted to say that i think that u have something going with the whole Heero and stables thing and the foal thing..well can't wait until u update..^___^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 21:57 CDT
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Jeez, the little romance you have going on between Scythe and Zero is a hoot! Shameful little hussy drooling over Mr. Studly's rump, and him prancing and showing off his bad self. They're a cute little side story. Still loving the fic as a whole, too.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 15:12 CDT
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Heero didn't win. Oh well, I still love this story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: May 07, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay u had me thought the whole chap..that was soo good..i just love Duos reaction to the woman and how much Heero likes Duo..oh lol with the vacume line that was great..also when he was jumping i was on the end of my seat...lol that dumb women did not get that far..hehehe ^___^...also *kills cliffy with big knife* i can't balieve u did that to us..*crys* i was like reading soooo fast to see what happened but nooooo u just had to leave it at that..*crys again*...well anyway excellent chap. and update soon!!..ja ne
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 15:17 CDT
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sorry, I should'nt have said sheila... so... how're them brumbys?
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Title: How could you?
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 15:16 CDT
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If you thought you were cute, leaving a cliffy like that, you've got another thing coming, sheila! I want to know what the time was!
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Injustice! What an evil place to stop! But please keep going! Update soon! I wanna know if he won or not!
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