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Title: Review!!!
Reviewed By: Zicue's Here On: March 24, 2005 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read alot of fanfictions, but I don't usually comment. This one was just ao amazing!!! I like how Duo and Heero were put into new situations (I love the country) and I loved Zero so much! I'm a major fan of horses. You really know them well, so with the descriptions the readers could understand. And the dialect was wonderful! Another thing that drew me in was how they took time courting each other and were shy and respectful to each other. Then at other times they were just too cute and playful! I think I cried when Zero fell, they were so great together and that one fault in timing ruined the timing on the triple bar. But... then again, it brought Duo and Heero together. Oh! Duo as a vet! I loved the pictures that formed in my mind! (I'm already sketching him out... it was the perfect picture for him!) And how you described the surguries, well I'm glad I have a good stomach and that I don't know my anatomy enough to know what all everything was! And when Scythe came in, I felt so sorry for her! She was forgetten about and ended up with so many terrible things!!! Oh, are you going to update anytime soon??? Please!!! I was able to read all this in one sit (Wasn't such a great idea, but I couldn't turn the story away.) If you do update, send me notice!!! zicueblossom@excite.com Thank you, and I loved your story!!! -Zicue-
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Title: KOOL!
Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: March 16, 2005 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY HEY HEY!! ur getting better..I just love how this story is going and love all the things about animals that u put into the story..i'm really happy that u added Zechs b/c i just love him sooo much..well anyway don't rush them i rally want to find out what that letter was..I just can't wait until the next chap..good luck nd have a good night..ja ne ^___^
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Reviewed By: Demonic_Kat2001 On: March 15, 2005 08:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really loved this chapter and all the ones before. I really wanted to know what was in that letter but according to the 1x2ML you'll explain it in the next one. I loved the part with the chicken! I never knew that acctually happens when you lay a chicken on their backs, or what happens when the wake from an anestetic. I wish you the best of luck in writing the next chapter and I hope that Heero gets good news from the accounting board. It would really sux if more problems arose for the pair, but I'm sure it is expected in a long story such as this one. Keep writing and hopefully more fun will ensue! Ja... Kat
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 14, 2005 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think by now you know that I love this fic, right? Now that that's out of the way...keep going please! It was fun having Zechs in the last chapter. I'm glad Heero gets to "own" Scythe.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 06:21 CST
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Poor Duo-kun is sick! Wahhh! Awww! Heero makes such a great doctor/assisstant/lover/insert occupation here type person ^_^ Update soon
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Title: ch 24
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 18:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I cringed my way through reading this chapter. Perhaps it's a language difference? In the US, the flu is caused by a virus, not exposure to bad weather. The symptoms sound like the flu, but there was no mention of any of Duo's patients being sick... thus how he got infected is highly suspect. Again... might be a language difference, but probably not. Re: http://www.ppsinc.org/flu/flu06.htm (see entry beginning: Spending time outside) And actually, this page: http://www.niaid.nih.gov/factsheets/cold.htm says the same thing about colds. (See also flu: http://www.niaid.nih.gov/factsheets/flu.htm). All I know is, flu definitely sounds wrong. Especially since I don't recall any of his patients' humans being sickly. If they had, you could've argued that the cold lowered his immune system. Nice chapter otherwise. *shrugs*
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 18:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww what a cute ending! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 10, 2005 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! It's too cute. I'm so glad Duo's better! I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: LAChick! On: March 10, 2005 11:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwwww how sweet! I love this chapter! I love these characters. But also bring in Trowa and Quatre. I love them too. And Zech again. I know he just left but you should have Zech and Wu Fei or something! I don't know but your an awsome writer and should up date faster.
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Title: YAY happy day
Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: February 27, 2005 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful and i'm sooo happy that the horse made it thoough..I'm sorry about ur fiends horse, thats really sad..Well i really can't wait until the next chap and i just want to say that i hope this turns out to be a long fic....well keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!!! ^___^
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Title: ooops...me again!
Reviewed By: csinger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 11:16 CST
Comment/Review:
This was my first time posting a review. Apologies for the multiple reviews...but they are all heartfelt!
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Title: Fabulous...more please!
Reviewed By: csinger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a very picky person when it comes to writing and I truely appreciate your writing style. Grammatical and spelling errors are a huge issue with me, but you write very eloquently with minimal errors... would that all fanfic writers took the same care you do. Your fics are always a pleasure to read and I continually check for updates in anticipation of the next chapter of your various fics. Please keep it up!
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Title: Fabulous...more please!
Reviewed By: csinger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a very picky person when it comes to writing and I truely appreciate your writing style. Grammatical and spelling errors are a huge issue with me, but you write very eloquently with minimal errors... would that all fanfic writers took the same care you do. Your fics are always a pleasure to read and I continually check for updates in anticipation of the next chapter of your various fics. Please keep it up!
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Reviewed By: csinger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 11:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I am a very picky person when it comes to writing and I truely appreciate your writing style. Grammatical and spelling errors are a huge issue with me, but you write very eloquently with minimal errors... would that all fanfic writers took the same care you do. Your fics are always a pleasure to read and I continually check for updates in anticipation of the next chapter of your various fics. Please keep it up!
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Title: Fabulous! Need more!!
Reviewed By: csinger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a very picky person when it comes to writing and I truely appreciate your writing style. Grammatical and spelling errors are a huge issue with me, but you write very eloquently with minimal errors...would that all fanfic writers took the same care you do. Your fics are always a pleasure to read and I continually check for updates in anticipation of the next chapter in your various fics. Please keep it up!
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