| "Broken Reflection" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Title: Hahaha!!!
Reviewed By: Yvie On: March 14, 2005 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Basically I really enjoyed the fanfic, partly because I really like the characters used and partly because it is Original with the big O. These objections are mainly personal and despite them, I still read on, that shows how much I enjoyed it. The objections are as follows: 1) Cathy was meant to be older than Trowa, not younger. (I am a stickler for details like these). 2) I am not a fan of homo fanfic, especially with characters that I like. 3) I am exceedingly fond of Relena, though I think the author is not, so I did not appreciate the way she was portrayed. However, on the whole, I had fun reading this fanfic.
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Title: so sad
Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the chap!! it was sooooooooo sad! and very emotional! please update soon!
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Title: so sad
Reviewed By: blackrose45(1) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the chap!! it was sooooooooo sad! and very emotional! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 11:37 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHHH Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 22:50 CST
Comment/Review:
why'd u have 2 stop there?!?!?!?!?!?! omg!!! it was getting soooo much better. and that's saying something because i already love this stoey. you enjoy suspense, don't you? i mean, you could have told us what happened to them, but noooo, you have to make us suffer. (and by them i mean everyone- Duo & Kurama, as well as the others) hurry and update! please!!!! don't leave us hanging!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ms. Kitty On: March 06, 2005 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
hey this is lil sesshomarus girl. I like the chap. please finish and have kurama kick the chrap out of trowa some more please.
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Reviewed By: vegetrama On: February 23, 2005 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like htis fic and wonder when the rest of it will be posted! pleeeze don't leave me in a lurch! I gotta find out if Q will forgive T, if Heero and Duo ever become an item and if Hiei and Kurama can ever make a go! this is a good fic. :-)
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Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
srry thought it said 2004(but i really do LOVE it!)
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Title: MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN YOU! HOW COME YOU HAVENT UPDATED?! IT'S SUCH A GREAT STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (too lazy to log in) On: February 08, 2005 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
very awesome chapter! yet at the same time, very weird. i like how you let us see a little into Duo's & Kurama's past with this one. and then Kurama's fight...i guess you could call it that, despite the fact Trowa couldn't fight back...was great. he seemed very much so insane, but he did warn him before hand. i'm surprised Hiei didn't try to stop him, or say anything, or even just watch him bug-eyed. well, anyway, good chapter despite how short it was. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Reece On: February 08, 2005 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story so far. I cant wait for the next chapter to come out.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 23:09 CST
Comment/Review:
no way! excellent chapter, as always. i loved the diseases thing they did for when the sub came. that was crazy! though i'm sure Kurama had fun & Hiei enjoyed it. :D also, i can't believe they made Quat wear hot pink. that's too funny! but what a way for everthing to turn out. Dorothy is an evil, bitchy whore (excuse my french). i so hate her now. & Trowa wasn't any better. he should have tried something to escape! and now i'm wondering what'll happen when kitten meets Kura & Duo on their own turf, since it seems to be going that way. and guess what, i think i've finally figured out why they wear the wristbands. took me long enough, i know. but at least i'm pretty sure now. only, criticism for this chapter is that it was really short. not much seemed to happen, but you ended it on a good part so it's okay. btw, thanx for the special shout out :D update soon!
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Reviewed By: Firefly_of_death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 00:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like it. Keep up the good work. I really found some of the parts in here to be really funny. bye Firefly
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 11:14 CST
Comment/Review:
hey I like please finish,
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 17:14 CST
Comment/Review:
You have to finish what you start! *grin* I have to finish the fic or I'll be forced to kill my sister who is bothering me at this very moment.
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