| "The Saiyan Facts of Life! Teaching Gohan" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Saiyan Girl On: February 24, 2006 11:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!I can't belive I read a incst and ENJOY it...It was so hot and sweet.I WANT A G/GH/V!Please.Wow
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Reviewed By: crimson_blade07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 03:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i usually prefer to read yuri's but this was exellent. i like the story line and how it wasnt just pointless. for the next chapter's maybe you can get creative and add something besides just yaoi....*thinking* yeah, there should deffinately be more yuri in the world. other than that, great job!
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Reviewed By: shred On: August 10, 2005 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wasnt sure I would like this paring, but it turned out to be the best iv read so far. 11/10
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Title: reader
Reviewed By: yaoIchiban On: May 31, 2005 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could not think of another story that would suit even more for the pairing GokuXGohan. This is simply the best and I was tremendously satisfied with how it went out. It is even picturesque and I can imagine every scene for real. Even I purred with every purring in the pic they did. And much more, the justification to why they are doing this is just as great. It is definitely the best pairing of Goku&Gohan, I just wish there is still a continuation. I was definitely satisfied. Congrats and I hope there's more to come.
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Reviewed By: cyzay (not loged in) On: November 25, 2004 22:24 EST
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now that is beutiful. i love this paring when it'd done like it was. your discriptions and contrast between humans and saiya-jin were a highlight of the story. Very well done overall. also liked this use of the famous 'saiya-jin bond'. this is probably one of the best goku/gohan parings ive read. congrats!
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Reviewed By: KTR aka Atarah On: November 17, 2004 16:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Atarah: ummmm *blush* you don't think that you could maybe...uh...*beet red by now* Trunks: Spit it out Atarah. Atarah: maybeinthenextchapteryoucouldhavevegetaandtrunksmakeout *inhales* itcouldbelikeasagawitheveryoneyouknow,sortofgrowingupandlearningaboutsaiyan actions*inhales* iwould Trunks: Atarah! Shut up! Atarah: *stops* Trunks: Now...try again and speek slowly. Atarah:maybe... in.... the... next... chapter... Trunks: Not that slow. Atarah: you could have vegeta and trunks make out it could be like a saga with everyone you know, sort of growing up and learning about saiyan actions I would really like that. *blush* Trunks: *stares at Atarah, shocked* Atarah: *gets on hands and knees* Please! Oh please please please! I would so very much love that. *blush*
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Reviewed By: Sailor_star On: November 15, 2004 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is nasty, you need help you sick sick person, yuck, how could you write about dbz yaoi, further more, incest!!!! Plz get some help
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Reviewed By: Stud_muffin_moe On: November 15, 2004 15:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story, unbelieveable. I love it. You can tell you put effort in to your piece of writing, and that you were passionate about it, and it shows! Congratulations, I'm a tough critic and usually don't give out good reviews but you, you have talent, hope you write more :)
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Reviewed By: Stud_muffin_moe On: November 15, 2004 15:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story, unbelieveable. I love it. You can tell you put effort in to your piece of writing, and that you were passionate about it, and it shows! Congratulations, I'm a tough critic and usually don't give out good reviews but you, you have talent, hope you write more :)
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Reviewed By: btigeress On: November 09, 2004 09:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanted to let you know i loved this one as well as the 1st one (with goten)I hope to see more from you soon ....oh btw way in the part where goku is tell gohon about vegeta is that a hint for a part 3 or just to make us all think about what could be
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Reviewed By: OP On: November 03, 2004 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not the world's biggest yaoi fan, but I read this fic on a rec from debbie-chan over at DBZ Salon and I'm so glad I did. This is without a doubt the funniest fic I've ever read, simply for the fact that it was so believable. It was no stretch of the imagination to envision Goku's actions, or Goten's for that matter :-P there was nothing forced in the humour and I think that's what makes for true comic genius ^_^ I especially loved Goten's little mix up between "condo" and "condom." It was absolutely hysterical :-P Great fic… Can't wait to see what else you come up with ^_~
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Reviewed By: Rich Onyx On: October 26, 2004 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I have to say that that was probably the most realistic Saiyan mating ritual yaoi/incest story I've ever read. I like how the relationship with them built and was not completely based on sex and desire. Kudos, and please let Videl take things well...*mentally cursing Chi Chi and Bulma for being so friggin' annoying* Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 16:13 EDT
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You made me enjoy and incest story--amazing! Well done and I'm looking forward to the next one. Er, it there a G/V/Gh in the future? (I can't believe I just asked that! I'm soooo hopeless!)
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Reviewed By: Kitkat - not logged On: October 09, 2004 20:15 EDT
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i love this pairing when it's written in a so bevievable and non gratuitous(sp?) way. Congrats, this is really great. I look forward the next part of Saiyan Facts of life series. I already read the first part, but i don't remember if i posted the review at SSlash list. Anyway, i'll post another here at MMorg.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 10:20 EDT
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Yes, I'm the one who doesn't like incest fics. This one managed to be believable and sweet. Looking forward to the rest of the series (v/Gh???? pretty please?)
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