| "Yugi: Street Fighter?!" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: The Ultimate Story
Reviewed By: bkoch On: February 26, 2005 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story, Yugioh:Street Fighter is THE best story ever. Why? You made the story seem realistic. You made the characters seem real, that base on their personality. I thought "Truth" is the best story, but you made it look like it a The Rock wannabe. I also suggest Sakura, because in this story, she seem kindhearted and stubborn, like Yugi, that will protected anyone she love. So, I think it'll be a perfect couple. Im also wondering when are you going to update it because im dying to know what happen next!!
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Reviewed By: Mike/Shobu On: January 18, 2005 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey DJ! I can finally review again so great chapter and when's the new chapter coming out? And I was kinda wondering if you could review my new story on FF.Net... It's called "American Idol the Yu-Gi-Oh Mix and I have a couple of reviewers but if you reviewed them then I might get tons more reviews! My FF.Net username is Shobu... If you could find the time thanks!
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Reviewed By: erika On: December 10, 2004 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
just update and forgot about my last review
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Title: The FanFic.Net War!
Reviewed By: Mike and Shobu On: November 19, 2004 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FanFic.Net Is Goin' Down! There is only one way to fight them, and that way is to send thousands of angry E-Mails to those morons! Awsome Chapter and congradulations on becoming an Uncle!
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Reviewed By: erika On: November 12, 2004 23:58 CST
Comment/Review:
You will become a real author one day
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Title: Finals/Chapter
Reviewed By: Mike/Shobu (Fanfic.net) On: November 10, 2004 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing Chapter! Yugi is stronger than a God Card!? hehe and I just know that you aced your finals because you are one of the best people there is because when you could have studied more you still made time to writh these awsome fics for all of us! Good luck and I'm with you all the way!
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Title: Awsome Chapter/Stupid FF.Net!
Reviewed By: Shobu/Mike On: October 24, 2004 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I can't believe Fanfic.Net Got rid of Your Best Stories! There is nothing wrong with them! Back to the point. Your New chapter is awsome and is was so real! And FanFic.net also has a stupid rule that you have to wait an entire week to start writing stories! I think you should start writing as a REAL author lokking at your other stories!
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Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: October 24, 2004 21:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know that I like everything that you write, especially since you were the one who inspired me to write and post on this site and fanfiction.net
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura On: October 22, 2004 22:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me: Gr! FF.Net can be so uptight! Brittany: Um it is a good chapter. And my aibou is happy that the story has three of her favorite couples in Yu-Gi-Oh. Tristan/Serenity, Joey/Mai, and Mokuba/Rebecca. Laura: Now for the questions. 1. I'd think he's not too muscualar but not skinny. 2. How would I react if I was Yami or Tea? Um I'd be very shocked and I would've fainted right now. Me: Anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: erika On: October 19, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wish i was in the story and was yami girlfriend
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Reviewed By: paralleltodarkness (not signed in) On: October 19, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job! Keep up the good work! I hope to see more of this story soon! ^-^
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Title: Good work~_^
Reviewed By: K.C. Whitestar On: October 18, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work as always DJ. Keep it up^_^
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Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: October 16, 2004 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good. The dream scene was definitely liked, however, who were the other three mysterious characters, or were they three other girls from the street fighter attendance? Also, if the polls for Yugi to fall in love for someone is still open, i'd like Yugi to fall in love with Rose, especially since she seems like such a loner when it comes to most stories that I've read with her in it. Oh well, I'll see you next chapter, and good job with the orginality dream sequence.
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Reviewed By: erika On: October 14, 2004 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
very interesting
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Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: October 09, 2004 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i have two questions for you. One, why did you remake this fanfic, when the story beforehand was already excellent as it was, and also, in Mario RPG for the Super Nintendo, a secret character named Culex and his four elemental crystals. However, he says the exact same things that you have Culax say. Is it a coincidence, or something more. Anyways, this story is still great and i hope you deleted it for a good reason.
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