| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 01:18 EDT
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p.p.s. stray reader no baka!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn it. i've been trying to finish reading this fic so i could review it for 2 days now. i swear i haven't been able to accomplish anything that takes more than 10 minutes these last few days. besides that, your latest chap was another success. i am looking forward to the bus/train scenes! weee. unfortunately, i cannot draw fer $h*t, so i can't you help there with a pic of ryen. : ( good luck with that. please post another chap. when you are able to. p.s. when it comes down to it, i just want to know how you will rip tsubaki a new one!!
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Reviewed By: neshee On: August 12, 2005 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story it is my most favorite and one of the best written i cant wait for the next chapther update soon. with that out of the way, i think some thing needs to be done about inuyasha's behavior with kagome because the poor girl is being made into whore and his behavior will allow doubt into his intentions for her and can cause controversey more so than there already is unless of course that is what you want though i think somebody besides miroku and sango needs some happiness update soon -ja ne
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Reviewed By: Lucient, not signed in On: August 12, 2005 16:41 EDT
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Title: Make of it what you want Obviously someone jealous of your talent. Fuck them. I think your story lines are amazing. They twist and wind, and always leave me guessing. And on a side note, when I saw it was you who had left me a note, one of the two people who inspired me to try my hand at it, I was touched and actually felt unworthy. It'd be almost like poppy z. brite complementing my work ((she's my favorite author)). Anyway, thanks, you know I'm not worthy, fuck all opposed to your writing, and uh... the sessh in dog form... well... He wasn't giant like he is in the show. I kinda left that out, lol...............James
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Title: Make of it what you want
Reviewed By: Stray reader On: August 12, 2005 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn have people actually read this I so hate it when fanfics get overrated like this. You should get a beta hopefully one that knows his or hers grammar and spelling. I could not help but notice the story having a lot of american slang which is funny since I could have sworn Inu and the gang are from Japan but who really cares right? Give people a lot of limes and lemons and they'll give you a 10 for every rating
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 04:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I'm really surprised no one has commented since I have. That's weird. MM still isn't telling me when you update. I wish I could draw well enough to show you what I think he looks like. Hmmm... Even if I did draw something I do not have a scanner. Maybe I could convince someone to let me use theirs? We'll have to see, I guess, lol. Awesome fic, really hot. I'm glad you updated. I've been going through alot lately, and this takes my mind off of it. James
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn mm still isn't telling people when their favorites update, so sorry this is so late. :) This is really heating up... I can't wait to see more.
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Title: shrinks
Reviewed By: shessylover89 On: August 04, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i personally think that the shrink is not trying to help rin i think she's hurting her. the reason i think that is probly cuz i can't stand shrinks. they stick their nose in other peeps business and make eveything u say out to be something bad. neway, if i'm right please email me. it's inukaglover815@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, this fic is soo intense. i don't know how else to put it. you are making me so c-crazy with our poor rin. she just can't get a break, huh. i feel so bad that she is getting screwed so royally. it makes for some damn good readin' tho. ;) i can't wait to see how you will handle the climax of the story with everything you have going on. every main character has a heaping helping of crap on their plates. i swear your fic is the best! please, when you can, post us all a new chap. thanks.
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: August 04, 2005 17:59 EDT
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wow! great chapter!!! keep up the good work!!
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Title: Leomae
Reviewed By: Corie On: August 02, 2005 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I know I've told you at least a million times but I do. *grin* ^.^ yay Kouga got bashed. I really hate him, I wish he would just go and get himself killed already. He's way too dense. *shrug* oh well it allows for some nice Kouga bashing. I have a question though. "what happened to Houjo?" he was there quite a bit and then he just disapeared. Not that I'm complaining I like Houjo even less than I like Kouga. I would like for him to show back up again though....just so Inu could knock him around some more ^.^ or actually I think it would be interesting if Kag did the beating. she could take Houjo. *shrug* oh well update soon ok ja!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeishDwarf On: July 30, 2005 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fooking awesome, the lemony scenes very very descriptive and they fit right into the plot. good job.
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Reviewed By: sarahcant08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 21:11 EDT
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i love it . update soon
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Reviewed By: Lucient not logged in On: July 28, 2005 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was so glad to see you'd updated, although mm's being a bitch and not telling anyone, lol. I loved this one, especially the last sentence. Hysterical. You still have it, and I'm waiting impatiently for your next chapter... James
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 02:10 EDT
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man...so good! i would have r/r earlier but i was out of town all last week. :( well, i must say that you have provided for me, yet again, an amazing chapter to lose myself in. i am so anxoius about rin and her healing process. i want tsubaki to get whats coming to her. NOW. sorry. had to vent. i am going to try and wait patiently for your next update. i know it will be great. you never dissapoint.
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