| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: January 09, 2005 08:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story has taken me days to read and I can't believe it! Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next! I was so relieved to find out that rin's alive! XD SO much angst!! w00t! Nothing but the good s----! -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're pretty courageous killing a character like especially Sesshy's girlfriend. I was almost crying when I read how Sesshy's howl shook the rocks. ::OMG, someone hand me a tissue, please:: |_| ::sniff, sniff:: Anyways, glad to know Yash is alright and like you said it was a very dark chapter. ::Can someone change the lightbulb? -_-b:: Keep up the good work and update soon please. Bye!
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Reviewed By: The Master of the Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 03:58 EST
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(And again. Must be the brackets.) c|-| fit. And regarding your question, I like the manga. The reasons why I don't like the anime are the comments (The Tetsuaiga turns red. All: *gasp* Kagome: "The Tetsuaiga turned red!" Me: "-.-") and the animation. In the manga, most of those comments are needed because the art may not be as clear as the artist wanted it to be. But the only reason I can think those would be needed in the anime is for colorblind and mentally deficient people. Being politically correct is such a pain. And I think the problems with the animation are obvious. Also, I admit that I came here to see what kind of *ahem* bad fanfiction is being produced. The people here are the first semi-intelligent InuYasha fans I've met online. I'm sorry for prejudging most of you.
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Reviewed By: The Master of the Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 03:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Whafuk. Half my review went poof.)
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Reviewed By: The Master of the Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 03:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
o_o That was brutal. Even though I knew you were going to kill Rin when I read the warning. But still, you could've at least let her and Sesshy finish. That's just cruel. Not to be callous, but a shotgun would've done a lot more damage, and that wouldn't have killed her as it is. And I have one request: Please tell me that the meltdowns between InuYasha and Kagome are over. Those just piss me off that they're both so f'ing stupid. Maybe ask the other person what happened before you throw a |317
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 11:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chappie. This one was more relaxed in some ways (no fighting with Naraku or complicated stuff to understand...) but I enjoyed it very much. I cant wait to find out why Miroku and Sango were late for their class! Lol! :D I'm a little worried for Yash, though. Kagome looks pretty determined to make him pay for what he did in class, not that I blame her. He deserves a thrashing but she just seemed a little too angry, if you get what I mean. But I'm sure Yash will survive. :: crosses fingers behind back:: Anyways, all in all, very good. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inu_rika83 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 22:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some acidic content, readers be warned....? hehehe when isnt there acidic content and lemons up the wazoo? heheh that's why i luv ur stories... hehe and its spelled aayme! ..or somethin like that! =P well i'll figure it out.. and yea... inuyasha's an asshole n a half!! if ne one did that to me, they'd be missing body parts!! meh! good work tho.. =D
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 10:37 EST
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I don't get it..mm.org wouldn't let me log in to review for your new story but now I'm having no problems. Go figure! Argh. So as usual, you've pulled a reaction from me. The following are just my thoughts...and not a crit of your work itself :) I have to admit that the games that Inu-Kag play with one another are kinda hot in a twisted "who can get the better of the two" kind of way, when are they going to wise up? Inu keep saying he loves Kagome...but he keeps on pulling the same degrading stunts. He KNOWS she's hot for him...he KNOWS that she melts at his touch. He KNOWS she loves him. Does he really need to publically humiliate her? Send her reputation up in flames? And Kagome is no better on another level. She knows that Inuyasha has this dominating complex that you can probably blame on his youkai blood...and yet she pulls attitude thinking that she can one-up him. At first the games they were playing made sense with the power struggle that comes with starting a new relationship. And you know that I *want* them to be together. While I didn't expect them to suddenly become the boring and mature couple...when is enough going to be enough? You can't keep crossing the line and then using "love" as an excuse before things snap. There's a limit to things if you want a relationship to be healthy...and I keep waiting for these two to realize that they need to respect each other. Because I think they both need to start. It's great they love one another...and trust one another. B |
Reviewed By: Ebony_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 02:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving this fic! OMG! If I was Rin right now, I'd be murdering someone (most likely Naraku) out of sexual frustration! I'm surprised Sesshoumaru hasn't done it yet. Rin and him look like they're both going to blow. It's hilarious! You're such a cruel author! I don't think I've seen another fic where they're this "deprived" usually, they're getting it on like bunnies! LOL! Keep up the good work!
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Title: Fawkin' Awesome
Reviewed By: The Master of the Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 22:00 EST
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This is an insanely good fanfic, probably the best I've ever read. I stayed up until 7am last night reading it. And this coming from someone who absolutely abhors the show. They make Kagome such a dumb bitch on it. -.- Anyway, great job. The only part I didn't like was the bet. Nobody's actually stupid enough to do one of those. They only cause pain to all involved, usually from the target of the bet to everyone involved. And please tell me that Sesshomaru and Rin actually get it done sometime before the story ends.
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Title: Fawkin
Reviewed By: The Master of the Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 21:53 EST
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 17:53 EST
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So good! :) I wonder what Inu Yasha's revenge will be? heh. Anyways, it's good.
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 23:52 EST
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I just had to add another thought: I am finding Sessh-Rin's sexual frustration really, really funny! Rin can be downright hyesterically bitchy when she hasn't been getting any action for a while. And I love that Inu-Kag seem to be like little bunnies. I sure as heck hope she's started taking birth control pills or something. Please keep their lemons coming. I can't wait to read what Inu does to her to pay Kags back for the stunt in the car!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Sesshomarusgirl56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic so much your are as good as angelbabe17 mabe better I don't know but I know your fic is so funny I was cracking up on this last chapter so hard i chocked on a cracker and my mom asked me was I on crack! he he I also love the fast updates and the feeling I get when I read your fic it feels like its a tv show and poor Rin and Fluffy they ain't getting any but anyway have I said I love your fic It really brightens up my day especilly if the cable man never comes and cuts the cable back on.
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Reviewed By: LynneC114 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:20 EST
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Hoooooooly shit. I haven't reviewed in a bit, this is the first time I've been on the computer in a WHILE. But even still. God, I wonder what they did to Kagome!! I liked the payback though, if they only KNEW half the shit Inuyasha pulled on that poor girl. Even the shower wasn't Kagome's fault!! Inuyasha is worse than a rabbit, and they all should know that by now...stupid bakas. Anyway, I'm lovin the latest installments of this story, and I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm soo glad this is updated soo often. I'ma go now. Ja!
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