| "The Old Maid" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 04:18 CDT
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coolsa.
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(not logged in) On: October 23, 2004 02:01 CDT
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i'm still loving the fic. i can't wait to read the next chappy. please, update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 19:20 CDT
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justa test!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 17:17 CDT
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WRITE THE LEMON NEXT WRITE THE LEMON NEXT !!! lmao this was good !! update soon !
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 21, 2004 13:11 CDT
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Love it and if you want to throw in the lemon lol!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 19, 2004 14:10 CDT
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We'll i think you should add in sango but have her as like an agent for fluffy because make kagome get kidnapped or so and sango ends up helping her but fluffy comes and gets her....maybe dunno lol i gave you my suggestion but your chapter was good so don't doubt yourself its open to leave your mind to do whatever you want..lol
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Title: This is really good
Reviewed By: songiesworld(not logged in) On: October 19, 2004 13:18 CDT
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Your story is awesome and I like the plot you took. You update fast which is really good. I like the approach your taking. Well keep up the good work. ^_~ Songie
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: October 18, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading this story, and I love it! I think there should be a little drama and add in some Inuyasha hitting on Kagome, you know, drama. But that's just my opinion. I hope you write more! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: H20 On: October 18, 2004 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems like a wonderful ending, but let's see if you can make more out of the plot.There should be more lemons, and if u can update more, if u can
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Reviewed By: This is michi-chan6... but it won't let me sign in... On: October 18, 2004 18:59 CDT
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... you were sorry for an early update... we need more authors like you! And trust me I'll never be upset with an early update. hehe. Great job. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(not signed in) On: October 18, 2004 17:45 CDT
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is she really his mate?? i've read several fics where something similar to this has happened, only sesshy wasn't very nice to kagome-chan. i loved the lemon though. it was very good. i can't wait to read the next chapter!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: ladydot On: October 18, 2004 16:31 CDT
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WOW! i love your story soo much! i'm soo into it! keep up with the fantastic updates! congrats on withdrawing me into your writting its magnificent!
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 15:17 CDT
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Justa test! ^.^
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 13:47 CDT
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Thanx for new reviews!
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(not logged in) On: October 18, 2004 08:29 CDT
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the fic is getting so good! i didn't find the chapter boring at all. it kept the story going. i can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what happens next! keep up the great work!!
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