| "Taking Care Of Yoko" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
| Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
Title: grr
Reviewed By: Jet_black too lazzy to sign in x.x On: April 18, 2005 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
o.e tooooooo short! infidel(sp?)... o.e update!! loved this chapter though
|
Reviewed By: LubHaruka On: April 17, 2005 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
srry....I ALWAYS FORGET TO ADD SOMETHING!!!! ARRGGG!!! sry again..... how did youko turn into a little baby or chibi? srry...wait y am I saying srry right now? ARRGG!!! STUPID BRAIN!!!! BAI!!!
|
Reviewed By: LubHAruka On: April 17, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WOULD FREAKIN GIVE YOU OVER A GOD DAMN TEN BUT NOOOOOOOO!!!! well I really hope you continue!!!! I'm going to read your other story's now BUT YOU"VE GOT TO UPDATE!!!!!! NOOOWWWWW!!!!!! I'm just stuck on your story! plwease continue!!!!!! try your best!!! and it's getting INTERESTING!!!!! wating for chapter 13!!!!! hurry!!!!!!! p.s. I wish I was kori.....Iwant youko!!!!....oh well...fate is soooooo cruel!!!!! k bai!!!
|
Reviewed By: Aliah not sgined On: April 17, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww thats so cuttttttttttttttteeee he wants ta make kori smile!!!!!!! aw aw a waw a waawawaw aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lol, please update soon n the sequel would be cool too
|
Reviewed By: Jet_black too lazzy to sign in x.x On: April 04, 2005 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm a Hiei person but i'll be damned if i don't enjoy reading this story o.o;;... i kept seeing the thing up for what seemed like a month idk and i didn't wanna read it buuuuut today i got super bored and decided 'what the hell is couldn't hurt' and i started reading XD and i've enjoyed it too... O.o i wanna know how this ends so alas this fic shall go on my favorites XP UPDATE SOON OR I'LL REMOVE IT *evil laugh-cough-evil laugh again*.......... OH! one more thing... O.o where is hiei?? just wondering...
|
Reviewed By: Aliah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue writing this fic its so cute!!!! lol pleaseeee
|
Reviewed By: ange34(not logged in) On: March 27, 2005 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww thats soo cute!!! and kurama going to turn back? i nnneeeedddd ttooo kknnnoowwww!!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word cute...lol poor Kuri, i would have all ready killed those two and smashed the cameras by then.:P but hey it's still a great story keep it up!
|
Reviewed By: Kiwiwfruit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 01:38 CST
Comment/Review:
THIS IS REALLY GOOD! BUT YOUR CHAPPTERS ARE TO SHORT! UPDATE SOON!
|
Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 14:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting. And no more cliffies. Their EVIL I say, EVIL. Next chapter must come soon, real soon!
|
Reviewed By: Sakura Minamino On: March 08, 2005 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Yusuke, Poor Kuwabara... Hell no! That's what they get for bugging the crap outta Kori 24/7! I'm not usually the one to torture Yusuke and Kuwabara, but I just gotta bug them now and then. ^^ Cool chappie. I like the mirror too. I agree with Kori. It will be a long day. *grin* Well take your time with the next chappie. You seem busy. Ja!
|
Reviewed By: Ookami(not logged in) On: March 06, 2005 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO! Update this fic is SO funny!! though I just wanna say u should but somemore writing with Yusuke and Kuwabara but the rest is great!
|
Reviewed By: Ookami(not logged in) On: March 05, 2005 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOO Please Update asap! I wanna kno what happens to Yusuke and Kuwabara!*laughing*and I mostly wanna know what happens to Youko and Kori!
|
Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember that song! it was from Tarzan! anyway cute, keep up the great work. *hits Yusuke, and Kuwabara for snapping pictures.* i feel better, Ja ne!
|
Reviewed By: Sakura Minamino On: February 27, 2005 12:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay!! You updated!! It's ok if it's short. I'm just glad you updated. ^^ Anyway, how can anybody not resist a kawaii adorable kit like Yoko!! :3 He's just too kawaii!!! Hm... if you've seen me act at my house I'd be growling at almost everything. heh... XD Ha! Serves Yusuke and Kuwabara right!!! Can't wait until the next chappie! Ja!!
|
| Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
