| "Somewhere Out There" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter... I hope that you make this a Kag/Inu fic... eagerly awaitng your next chapter ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: October 24, 2004 10:26 CDT
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this was an interesting chapter...I like the emotional stess your putting on the characters, it makes it all worth reading! Please update soon! i'll be waiting! rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 22:20 CDT
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Thanks for the update! I like your story and I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 18:47 CDT
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thsnk you!!!!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: graciestanton [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 18:46 CDT
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: October 22, 2004 14:52 CDT
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Oh wow oh wow oh wow!! This story is really good. I mean there hasnt been any huge plot twists to make it seem extra super more great then it is (which is extra super great btw! lol) but i just got totally jazzed up by this chapter. I can't WAIT to read more of your updates!!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 20:45 CDT
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There was more, but I ran out of characters that I'm allowed to type.\\\\\here it is\\\\\ If they suddenly start acting and talking differently, then I think you should go back and think of what your character would really do and say in that kind of situation.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 20:44 CDT
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At the beginning -- I'm commenting on the beginning of chapter one, because I couldn't read any further -- you make Inuyasha and Miroku sound like women gossiping. Seriously. "I saw you and I just had to say hi." What guy talks like that!? // The problem might be that you don't know your characters well enough. Even though you are using characters created by someone else, everyone makes them their own when they write with them, since no one can exactly portray them as the creator did. When I write my story I think about what my character would do, and how he would react. Since Inuyasha is the main character, and he is narrating the story, I have to be inside his head more than if I were writing in third person. You have to know their expressions, their habits, their faults, their charms, and their uncomfortable problems. That is the best way to create a character. How many AU stories have you read where you said "If you just changed the names, this would make a great original story!"? Usually -- if it's good -- it is because the author knows his/her characters.// In the case of Inuyasha and Miroku's interaction at the beginning of the story, I got the impression that you didn't knwo what you were doing. Are they goofing off? I know people that act like that when they are making fun of someone, or trying to act stupid. Not normally, though.
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: October 21, 2004 16:26 CDT
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I am loving this story so far! I think that Kag and Sess should get together, not Kag and Inu. Inu doesn't deserve her, especially since he's screwing that bitch, Kikyo. I HATE HER!!! Anyway, keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story idea. And the way Sesshoumaru is portrayed in this story. I hope Sesshoumaru & Kagome get together ^__^
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Reviewed By: gracie stanton On: October 17, 2004 16:13 CDT
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ooooooooooooooooooooooooo i like!!!! hurry up and post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: hi!;P
Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: October 17, 2004 11:43 CDT
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Cool! you have always had an appealing way of making things nice and clear! I wonder what will happen next? Update soon! rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 17:31 CDT
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Interesting so far. Please write more. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: October 16, 2004 17:06 CDT
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ooo sounds like a good one. I'm exicted to see what you will write for Inuyasha and Kagome this time around. I just know this story will be great, and it's awesome to hear from you again!
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 08:01 CDT
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Good, good, good! I really like this story, it's very good and well written. I can't wait to see how everything goes... ~Zonza
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