| ")}}Inu Yasha's Possession{{(" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like reading this story I hope you up date soon
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Title: Loved It!!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_Lover_2430 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story its full of everything u wanna hear lots of details its great every chapter is really good i wish i could get my boyfriend like that :)
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: December 12, 2004 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You made it into a story! This made my day! ^-^ This chapter was awesome! Please update ASAP! ^-^
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: December 12, 2004 19:54 CST
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very nice. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wicked story i llike how their relationship is but i think you rushed him into liking her
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Reviewed By: yushiko On: December 12, 2004 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the lemons thier great and the plots good keep it up your doing fine :p
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Reviewed By: yushiko On: December 12, 2004 17:49 CST
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I like the lemons thier great and the plots good keep it up your doing fine :p
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Title: Blade891
Reviewed By: Blade891 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good start to the story. I think you sould contiune with it.It wouls make a good addition to the fanfics, there arn't enough good lemons out there. Please countinue (Big puppy dog eyes)
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Reviewed By: gotmilk On: December 02, 2004 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story, are you going to write a chapter 3 bcuz you should!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW that was interesting, so let me get this straight. You did a sequel to your one-shot from your Book of Lemons? I just want to clear that up becuase I was like wait a minute, didn't she just type this already? So anyway if it has that written somewhere, I didnt see it, it brought me straight here from my email about the story, so I didnt see the summary for it. ^_^ oh well I like it, you should just write a full out story for it, ok if that's written somewhere, still didn't read it, I'll find it later though. Ok just some things I thought I'd say ok bye. ^_^ Please and Thank You
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: jazzyknickers On: October 20, 2004 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fanfic. I was great how you showed inuyasha's love towards Kagome in a different way to others. The amount of lemonism in this story is great! It'as always weird how I love the stories with people fucking....Huh...I'm not sex crazed!! *Shifty eyes* You describe it well, and actually inclube facts about the human anatomy. It's cool the way you've put this as a mix between funny and serious. How you sort of talk to the audience, but not really.Sorry for this bit, but I want to help you improve. Try double checking your work before you post it because you spelt a few words bwrong and put the wrong versions of words. I understand you have limited time, I'm sorry. Anyways! I love this story and really want you to write more! please check me out on fanfiction.net! Nickname jazzyknickers. I have written a Sonadow and an ATBG fic!
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Reviewed By: serinitay On: October 19, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry and write more i like this story more with each chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: serinitay On: October 19, 2004 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy shit!!! i wish i got my boyfriend like that!!. i love tis story!!
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:05 CDT
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Wow! Youjust jumper right into it didnt you! ... I cant wait to see how this story progresses!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 16:10 CDT
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it's cute, pls tell me that kag is gonna kill (not litteraly)(sp?) kik i hate that woman though i have to admit some people can make her nice if they give her the right part but anyway it's good, you got the lemon writting thing down pat and i guess besides the usual up-date soon thats it
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