| "Waiting on a Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi On: October 31, 2004 19:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great. I hope you'll find time to write more soon. The character development is very good, and everyone's acting entirely in-character (which is rare in AU stories). The end of chapter 4 makes me think that, when InuYasha first met Kagome, he remembered everything--am I right?
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: October 31, 2004 16:49 PST
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Wow, two chapters while I've been gone! It doesn't pay to avoid the computer for a while, does it? LOL I loved both chapters, and the end of this last one has a very promising ending! I can't wait to see where you decide to go with it, and I hope you find some time to write really soon! I'll be looking forward to a new chapter!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 31, 2004 13:59 PST
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wow...i can practically feel the emotions of the characters...love this story.
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 31, 2004 13:48 PST
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sango was a lil extreme my poor inu =( lol great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 13:21 PST
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Great two chapters. The tension between Inu and Kagome is great. You're doing a good job and I'm looking forward to more when you can write it. Juggling classes can be hard, I know. I hope all goes well!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: October 30, 2004 22:52 PDT
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This is great! I hope you really don't make us wait a month for the next chapter, but I know it will be worth waiting for. Thanks and I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: animechik89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god u have no idea how long it has been since i have read a good story like this! It Is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! thanks for writing it ! good job! Keep it up!!!! ~Anime chik 89
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 20:52 PDT
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::grins:: Nice. I like. Is the prolouge supposed to hint that Inuyasha wished for another chance with Kagome? It's an interesting concept. I'm looking forward to more! Hope you can update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Excellent Story. Quite a while since I've read one as good as yours. I especially liked the undeniable pull of those two soulmates toward each other. Inuyasha ia a bit OOC, but the sweet side of him is really cute. Please, please update soon! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: October 25, 2004 20:47 PDT
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Ah ha! Finally, I got to read this chapter! I found it today while I was at work, but you know how that always goes. You find something good to read, and suddenly everyone needs something! (The day had been dead before that, lol...) It was worth the wait, though! Inuyasha and Kagome got a little ahead of themselves, didn't they? Heh...well, Kagome did. I have a feeling Inuyasha didn't get far enough ahead for his taste. I can't wait to see the next chapter and get to read more of this very intriguing plot!!!!
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Reviewed By: akashafive [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 17:32 PDT
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your writing is so natural, it just draws you into the story:) and it just keeps getting better! can't wait for the next chapter*^_^*
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Title: ladymiaka
Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 13:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story really deserves more reviews than it's recieved. You truely have something here, and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. You're doing an awesome job. Hope to read another chapter very soon!
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Reviewed By: Angel102 On: October 25, 2004 10:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OM ga I totally love your story. Your a great writer. Your story is the beast ive ever read! The plot is great and i totally love how youve discripted Inuyasha. oh im too impatient i cant wait till the next chapter and reas what happens. please im begging (giving puppy dog face) update soon.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: October 25, 2004 10:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sweet with the whole shippo thing. And the sexual tension between them? Very steamy. I could see Inuyasha waiting for her to walk her home. And I could also see him 'telling' her rather than asking her to go to dinner with him. Inu is very blunt like that. I know it's rushing things, but I can not wait to see a lemon between those two. I'm sure my computer moniter will fog up. *lol* Also I couldn't stop laughing at Kagome calling sango and just saying simply "Tell me all you know about sex". Don't keep up waiting too long for the next chapter. I just added this story to my favorites. :)
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 08:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful! Highly enjoyable and fun to read. I like the incorporation of Shippo into the story- that was clever. And I LOVE the sexual tension between Inu Yasha and Kagome. Very well done! Keep writing and updating!! Soon!!
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